
The Story of the Heavens Begins with the Crooked-mouthed Dragon King
About This Novel
Li Yuan, the fate of fate. A time traveler who has just traveled from the world of Dragon and Tiger Gate to the world of Crooked Dragon King. When he became the final villain of the Crooked Dragon King, he suddenly discovered that the villain in the first volume of the Crooked Dragon King seemed to be a time traveler, and Li Yuan could also eavesdrop on his thoughts...
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Official(70)Scraped 5d ago
Very strange, just very strange
First of all, this book is Zhu Tianwen, but it has written more than 70 chapters in a city novel world. I don't know if there will be a follow-up. The second opening says that the protagonist's system is to hunt or disrupt a world to obtain the origin. This can mean that the protagonist is defined as a villain. However, in the first world city written by the author, the protagonist of that world is written as a villain. And the protagonist is decent. Since he is decent, why should he plunder the origin of the world? If the nondescript protagonist wants to be a villain and write a villain novel, then he should not be a virgin or be very righteous. If the protagonist wants to be a decent character, he should modify the system and turn it into a world of heavenly rewards. It seems okay at first, but later it becomes more and more outrageous and starts to become a saint.
Except for the female protagonist, all other accessories have world origin flaws.
Even if the logic is self-consistent, who stipulates that the protagonist must be a male. . . What about the world of grinding tofu? What about Balala Little Demon Fairy and the like? Or what about men who practice the magic book and are transformed into gods and beings?
I have to say it has changed.
What was written is very different from what was originally written. Besides, updates are really slow. Since your writing helped me solve my book shortage for an hour or two, I give you four stars.
fine
Why didn't I write the book that was pinned to the top? How hard is it to find one that suits your taste?
Thank you very much for your support!
Because there are always some sensitive parts in the chapters I write, they are always reviewed and have to be revised. The progress is a bit slow. If you have any suggestions, you can mention them here. Thank you for your support.
This book will be a hit
First of all, both the protagonist's opening and follow-up are very good, and the emotions and joy are perfectly replaced by words. I am nervous, excited, and happy, which I can't help but exude after reading countless books. The author keeps writing. It is recommended that the author write a protagonist with such a personality. These are all good. 👿But it lacks a bit of ruthlessness. After all, as a time traveler, both people and systems are mainly predatory. I always feel that the protagonist is decent and the protagonist of the original world becomes the villain, which is inconsistent with people and the system.
Well written
The writing is pretty good, I have some suggestions. The male protagonist can go to Doupo to meet the female protagonist after completing Qin Shi Mingyue (it should be) (didn't there be foreshadowings before?) Also, please update soon!
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Official(70)Scraped 5d ago
Very strange, just very strange
First of all, this book is Zhu Tianwen, but it has written more than 70 chapters in a city novel world. I don't know if there will be a follow-up. The second opening says that the protagonist's system is to hunt or disrupt a world to obtain the origin. This can mean that the protagonist is defined as a villain. However, in the first world city written by the author, the protagonist of that world is written as a villain. And the protagonist is decent. Since he is decent, why should he plunder the origin of the world? If the nondescript protagonist wants to be a villain and write a villain novel, then he should not be a virgin or be very righteous. If the protagonist wants to be a decent character, he should modify the system and turn it into a world of heavenly rewards. It seems okay at first, but later it becomes more and more outrageous and starts to become a saint.
Except for the female protagonist, all other accessories have world origin flaws.
Even if the logic is self-consistent, who stipulates that the protagonist must be a male. . . What about the world of grinding tofu? What about Balala Little Demon Fairy and the like? Or what about men who practice the magic book and are transformed into gods and beings?
I have to say it has changed.
What was written is very different from what was originally written. Besides, updates are really slow. Since your writing helped me solve my book shortage for an hour or two, I give you four stars.
fine
Why didn't I write the book that was pinned to the top? How hard is it to find one that suits your taste?
Thank you very much for your support!
Because there are always some sensitive parts in the chapters I write, they are always reviewed and have to be revised. The progress is a bit slow. If you have any suggestions, you can mention them here. Thank you for your support.
This book will be a hit
First of all, both the protagonist's opening and follow-up are very good, and the emotions and joy are perfectly replaced by words. I am nervous, excited, and happy, which I can't help but exude after reading countless books. The author keeps writing. It is recommended that the author write a protagonist with such a personality. These are all good. 👿But it lacks a bit of ruthlessness. After all, as a time traveler, both people and systems are mainly predatory. I always feel that the protagonist is decent and the protagonist of the original world becomes the villain, which is inconsistent with people and the system.
Well written
The writing is pretty good, I have some suggestions. The male protagonist can go to Doupo to meet the female protagonist after completing Qin Shi Mingyue (it should be) (didn't there be foreshadowings before?) Also, please update soon!
















