Traveling Through Douluo, after Awakening, I Chose to Overthrow Tang San
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HE+RE Ming Luo passed through, and when he was about to overthrow the divine world, he entered a novel called "Douluo Dalu". The beginning is about the "sister" who was abandoned by Tang San in the Star Dou Forest. Ming Luo:? ? ? Can she, the "little princess" (young master) of the underworld, be so angry? As a result, he met Qian Renxue as soon as he turned around, and happily joined the Wuhun Palace to open the book. Ming Luo originally thought that if he was not talented enough, he would work hard. No matter how bad he was, his level would be higher and he would not be bullied. But she awakened the Phoenix Feather and the God-killing Spear, and even brought a five-piece underworld set for her office use! Ming Luo: ? ? ? What the hell? Okay, okay, let's play like this, right? Tang San, I want to see whether you become a god first, or whether I drag you down to the underworld first! And that corrupt god, sooner or later I will fight against him together! M9( ｀д? )!!!! But why do people in the God Realm treat her with such respect? Shura, aren't you helping Tang San? ∑(°口°?)! [This book awakens the martial spirit at the age of six and a half, with private settings! [There is a system + development flow + upgrade flow + heaven-defying flow + killing flow + stepping on three + joining the Spirit Hall + no cp] [Alias of this book: "Living towards Death"] (The author is not very good at using punctuation marks, so he uses commas where he doesn't know how to use them. I hope you can forgive me or tell the author how to change them. Don't worry, I'm not stubborn, so I'll just listen to you (*??╰╯`?)?)
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Official(5)Scraped 5d ago
I'm here, Baozi. I've read both chapters. The introduction and main text are okay. I've broken the paragraphs a bit, but it's too long! If you want to sign a contract, the title of the book must be changed because it won't attract volume, but it doesn't matter if you don't sign a contract.
I feel pretty good at the moment. Even though the novel I wrote is nothing, I can still tell the difference. If it's divided into sections, you should do it every two or three rows. Otherwise, if it's such a long story, you can't do it unless you listen to the book. If it keeps going like this, it's a bit hard to look at.
The author recommends (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.
I have worked so hard to say that of course I have to give it a good review! Because there is no complete real-name problem, there is no way to correct typos. I can only try to read it a few times before publishing to ensure a high accuracy. Write the corrected typos in the comment area so that people who don't know can know about it. In addition, the author is not very good at using punctuation marks. He uses commas where he doesn't know how. You can see it by reading this book review. Generally speaking, it is a story about the heroine who was formerly the eldest lady of the underworld. After traveling through time, she joined the Spirit Hall to suppress Tang San. Ming Luo originally wanted to enter the God Realm, just like before traveling, but she didn't expect that when she actually entered the God Realm, all the gods would respect her. Ming Luo: Why are you all so respectful to me? ? ? And Shura, aren't you helping Tang San? ? How could she do it like this? They are all our own! ! This paragraph is an Easter egg, I hope you like it 😘
Don't be in a hurry, just write slowly. As long as the logic is good, you can write whatever you want. Anyway, the author is God in fan fiction. Just don't contradict the logic. The writing is okay and there is room for improvement. Come on.
Can you write a novel about Sendo Liu?
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Official(5)Scraped 5d ago
I'm here, Baozi. I've read both chapters. The introduction and main text are okay. I've broken the paragraphs a bit, but it's too long! If you want to sign a contract, the title of the book must be changed because it won't attract volume, but it doesn't matter if you don't sign a contract.
I feel pretty good at the moment. Even though the novel I wrote is nothing, I can still tell the difference. If it's divided into sections, you should do it every two or three rows. Otherwise, if it's such a long story, you can't do it unless you listen to the book. If it keeps going like this, it's a bit hard to look at.
The author recommends (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.
I have worked so hard to say that of course I have to give it a good review! Because there is no complete real-name problem, there is no way to correct typos. I can only try to read it a few times before publishing to ensure a high accuracy. Write the corrected typos in the comment area so that people who don't know can know about it. In addition, the author is not very good at using punctuation marks. He uses commas where he doesn't know how. You can see it by reading this book review. Generally speaking, it is a story about the heroine who was formerly the eldest lady of the underworld. After traveling through time, she joined the Spirit Hall to suppress Tang San. Ming Luo originally wanted to enter the God Realm, just like before traveling, but she didn't expect that when she actually entered the God Realm, all the gods would respect her. Ming Luo: Why are you all so respectful to me? ? ? And Shura, aren't you helping Tang San? ? How could she do it like this? They are all our own! ! This paragraph is an Easter egg, I hope you like it 😘
Don't be in a hurry, just write slowly. As long as the logic is good, you can write whatever you want. Anyway, the author is God in fan fiction. Just don't contradict the logic. The writing is okay and there is room for improvement. Come on.
Can you write a novel about Sendo Liu?
