Reborn: Star Chef
by Hating
About This Novel
Due to an accident, the heroine traveled thousands of years into the future and was reborn as a 22-year-old girl named Qiong Zilei. In her previous life, she was a famous cook preparing to spread the delicacies of the ancient earth throughout the interstellar world. However, she did not expect that the school she went to was actually a military academy. She not only wanted to spread the delicacies throughout the interstellar world, but also went to the battlefield to attack the star beasts. Therefore, by this chance, she became a cute girl who can cook and fight. I X! What kind of place is this, what the hell is nutrient solution, wuwuwu, mom, I want to eat! The strawberry flavored nutrient solution really makes me vomit~ I don't know if the meat of star beasts can be eaten? See how a former cook survives in the interstellar world
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Official(29)Scraped 2d ago
What the hell?
What the hell, I can't understand it at all. My brother hated the heroine a week ago, and then fell in love with the heroine and confessed to her in less than a week? I'm sorry that I can't keep up with the author's jumping thinking. The writing style is so childish and the writing is so bad. Is the author still in elementary school, but I can't read it?
It's a bit like a primary school student writing a diary😓😓, but keep going＾0＾~
I took a look, the pace is so fast, the real cause, process, and result although there are
But it's all in four or five sentences, and the pace is a bit too fast. Ang, it's actually pretty good. , It would be nice if the pace was slower at the beginning. Come on come on
Forgive me, I can't stand it~
I don't have strong logic🙀, I don't want to use my brain, and I'm afraid of losing my hair. Thank you to the author😊🌹🌹🌹. I hope the article can be layered, especially the dialogue between the characters😌🙀
A little messy
Are they siblings? Is the male lead the older brother?
me me me me
😂😂Why does it feel so awkward to use first person?
I think starfish~
Damn, the story content of the article you wrote is good, but the first few chapters are not very good. A good article must have a good beginning, so that the whole text can flow smoothly, so it needs improvement. For example, there are too many dialogues, and they are all crowded together, and topics jump too quickly, and the next content is not buffered in time, and the story focuses on the cause, process, and result, and sometimes the process is not complete, and the ending is too casual. If I change these a little bit first, I believe that the big works will get better and better.
come on
Come on, you should practice your writing more.
Author, your writing is too confusing. The content is okay
When writing, don't add so much dialogue. Add a little description of the environment, appearance, demeanor, etc. Then, compared to other novels, this novel is a bit fast and too short. The content needs to be enriched. And there is. Clarify the sequence relationship and make the transition between each chapter natural. Then add some beautiful sentences, adjectives or metaphors. Some rhetorical devices.
Advice for authors
① When writing a novel or writing something, don't add what you want to say. If you want to say something, I suggest you write a chapter to explain it clearly, or write it in the introduction or preface. If you write it in the main text, it will make people tease you. ② It is recommended to layer the dialogue between the characters in the article, otherwise it will not be clear. ③The relationship between the characters progresses too quickly, the content is not explained clearly, and the relationship is determined ④The whole article feels very much like practicing writing, and also very much like a diary. ⑤ If you want to write a novel, it is recommended to increase your reading volume and change from quantitative change to qualitative change. ⑥The subject matter of the novel is good, but the content is too simple. Interstellar novels are very popular, but it is difficult to write novels of this kind well. ⑦The author, please continue to work hard and look forward to your progress. The above is an honest opinion from a regular reader
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Official(29)Scraped 2d ago
What the hell?
What the hell, I can't understand it at all. My brother hated the heroine a week ago, and then fell in love with the heroine and confessed to her in less than a week? I'm sorry that I can't keep up with the author's jumping thinking. The writing style is so childish and the writing is so bad. Is the author still in elementary school, but I can't read it?
It's a bit like a primary school student writing a diary😓😓, but keep going＾0＾~
I took a look, the pace is so fast, the real cause, process, and result although there are
But it's all in four or five sentences, and the pace is a bit too fast. Ang, it's actually pretty good. , It would be nice if the pace was slower at the beginning. Come on come on
Forgive me, I can't stand it~
I don't have strong logic🙀, I don't want to use my brain, and I'm afraid of losing my hair. Thank you to the author😊🌹🌹🌹. I hope the article can be layered, especially the dialogue between the characters😌🙀
A little messy
Are they siblings? Is the male lead the older brother?
me me me me
😂😂Why does it feel so awkward to use first person?
I think starfish~
Damn, the story content of the article you wrote is good, but the first few chapters are not very good. A good article must have a good beginning, so that the whole text can flow smoothly, so it needs improvement. For example, there are too many dialogues, and they are all crowded together, and topics jump too quickly, and the next content is not buffered in time, and the story focuses on the cause, process, and result, and sometimes the process is not complete, and the ending is too casual. If I change these a little bit first, I believe that the big works will get better and better.
come on
Come on, you should practice your writing more.
Author, your writing is too confusing. The content is okay
When writing, don't add so much dialogue. Add a little description of the environment, appearance, demeanor, etc. Then, compared to other novels, this novel is a bit fast and too short. The content needs to be enriched. And there is. Clarify the sequence relationship and make the transition between each chapter natural. Then add some beautiful sentences, adjectives or metaphors. Some rhetorical devices.
Advice for authors
① When writing a novel or writing something, don't add what you want to say. If you want to say something, I suggest you write a chapter to explain it clearly, or write it in the introduction or preface. If you write it in the main text, it will make people tease you. ② It is recommended to layer the dialogue between the characters in the article, otherwise it will not be clear. ③The relationship between the characters progresses too quickly, the content is not explained clearly, and the relationship is determined ④The whole article feels very much like practicing writing, and also very much like a diary. ⑤ If you want to write a novel, it is recommended to increase your reading volume and change from quantitative change to qualitative change. ⑥The subject matter of the novel is good, but the content is too simple. Interstellar novels are very popular, but it is difficult to write novels of this kind well. ⑦The author, please continue to work hard and look forward to your progress. The above is an honest opinion from a regular reader
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