
The Melancholy of Hatake Laoka
by Mao Hao
About This Novel
...What can be changed by starting over your life again? ☆Female channel, rebirth card + parallel time-traveling Naruto, dual protagonists, a fan adaptation of Naruto, an if line derived from the depressing Naruto of the previous work, a little drama in the first part, focusing on family relationships and daily life, but there will also be many unpleasant events. ... To change the future. Then work with the people close to you to build a real world that is better than the current one. --'You have never truly been my family,' the former Naruto said to Kakashi. --'As a family, we need to help each other, come and come and you're welcome! Just go and have a rest in Ma Liuerdi! 'Now Naruto always says this, making Kakashi always recall the past with emotion like an old man. ... But I am really not old now! Kakashi, who once took his children to the hospital where he was mentally and physically exhausted and often dealt with death, saw the current Naruto, and his heart was so complicated that he could even run a maze. {That's good} The painful thing will never happen again. [The covers are all drawn by myself, no misappropriation allowed]
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Official(28)Scraped 3d ago
Get hung up on this person and this thing, and don't come here to say such things to me.
Don't say I didn't do the coding. I'm casting the net everywhere. Does coding make sense? Finally, after looking at this person's reply, I decided to just send a harassing sentence and wait for the person to reply before I accept it. Unfortunately, there is no way to report this person for posting promotion/advertising. I hate this behavior very much.
First kill (:з∠)_If you don't like it, please don't say anything and just exit, so as not to waste time.
I have to be the first to kill here (←?) Female videos are female-oriented. If you don't like it, don't say it or watch it. If you don't accept suggestions, I will follow my own ideas. I know the content is bad, but I don't want to see what other people say about me. If you have any questions about Manxing: If I don't fight myself, who can I expect? I don't even give my works five stars. If I give them two or three stars, then why would I write about them? Of course, I didn't ask anyone to give me full marks, and if anyone said something about me, I would ban or delete it. At least I have the right here to prevent people I don't want to see from appearing again. If others don't do this, then go over there and don't come to me. I don't care about others, but I care about me. Temporarily above (first released on 20.2.7 To be edited) (Edited in 20.2.10, The title after the emojis were added, and the content layout was changed but the text was not changed)
In fact, I have been looking forward to the return of the depression series, because I ordered all of them... And then never came back... When I finally clicked on the author's homepage, I found that the author had opened a new book... Although it was a bit regretful, it didn't matter. All in all, please give the author a big boost
My personal summary of Ming. Ka. Tu's age and timeline
The main text also says a few things. Some people may not read the testimonials, so they can also say it in the comments. The main reason is that testimonials also have a word limit, so I can explain more here. Compared with the explanation in the previous work, there are a few additions. After all, they are different works, and the identities of the protagonists are different, so they cannot be explained together. I am conscientiously making assumptions based on the original work. I do not accept objections and it is forbidden to directly use my interpretation to speculate and misappropriate it. Because it took me a long time to guess it based on the event date and the character's birthday year by year. Anyone who appropriates it without permission is not allowed to use house (homophone). The following is my summary. It just explains why I think so, so that no one can argue with me. It does not mean that someone can use my summary as your own. The following are explanations and speculations based on various events in the original work: I extrapolated the previous paragraphs from the time of Naruto's birth, but I only posted the events before that. I think we can figure out the timeline by following this. Ka is Sakumo's son, so it's normal for him to go to school early and be at the same age as Tu. And the height of a three-year-old: if he grows quickly, he's about one meter or even more. Moreover, there were other people older than Kakashi who enrolled in Kakashi at the same time, so it doesn't matter even if Kakashi is more than a year and a half younger than Kakashi (a year and a half but less than two years old, which is one year difference in round numbers). Kakashi 13 (the data is that 13 is missing (deceased)) was smashed. At that time, Kakashi 12 became a jounin not long ago (the data is that he became a jounin at the age of 12). About half a year later, Lindie (recommended) The reason for the test is in the second paragraph outside this paragraph), Naru was born more than a year later (I speculated that Ka was assigned to protect Jiu after being in the ANBU for a long time and doing many other tasks). Naru's birthday was in October, so Rin probably died around May or June of the previous year, and Tsuchi died around November and December. Tsuchi's birthday was in February, 13 was smashed, Ka's birthday was in September, and 12 jounin. In the same year, the jounin is stuck at 12, and the soil 13 is smashed, so the soil 13 in February → the card 12 in September → the jonin after a few months Tsuchi stayed in Madara for about half a year to recuperate. Based on the comparison between the length of his hair and the actual speed at which his hair grows, I guessed that it took about half a year. So about half a year after Kajounin Houtu was smashed, Lindie, Kakar was still 12 at that time (she was only 13 in September, and it was not September) → Kakar was depressed for a while, Minato later became a Kage, and then arranged Kato to join the ANBU, Ka stayed in the ANBU for a while, then one day Minato heard that he was going to be a father, and arranged Kato to be Kushina's bodyguard (secretly) (also to let Ka witness the birth of a new life and dispel the darkness in his heart) So about a year after Lindie, Ming (October birthday) was born when Ka was 14 (September birthday) (Ka was only 14 in September, and Ming was only about 25 days after his fourteenth birthday when he was born). My guess is that the original Konoha 60 Years opens in May, and graduates around May (neon some days, the reality is that they graduate and upgrade in March or April). Naru became a ninja and did some tasks, but the number of tasks recorded in the official information is not many, so he started the Wave Country dungeon not long after he became a ninja. It took a few days to go to the Country of Waves, Kado took a break for a week or two (overdraft), (Zabuza also took a break for a week or two), and then Kado was dealt with and he stayed in the Country of Waves for a few weeks to wait for the bridge to be completed (after all, he agreed to Dazuna), so he stayed in the Country of Waves for about a month. After they returned from the Land of Waves, Hiruzen called everyone together to tell them that the Chuunin Examination would be held in a week's time - July 1st (that's what the original manga said). So in the Land of Waves, it's the end of May → the end of June, and I didn't do many D-level tasks after graduation, so it can be seen that I just graduated a few days ago, so I graduated in May. So the original main story started in May. Ming was 12 years old when he appeared, and he was only 13 in October. Ka was 26 when he appeared, and he was only 27 in September. The third test was on August 6th and 7th (about half a day had passed when the written test was held on July 1st, five days in the Death Forest, and about half a day in the preliminaries. It is said that the third main game will start a month later). Then Orochimaru came to fight Konoha, and about a day later, Itachi and Kisame came after the battle. Kai and the others later said that Itachi and the others had been here for several days, so several days had passed. Naru and Jiraiya went to find Tsunade. They went out for half a day or a day, met Itachi and Kisame, and changed places after half a day or so. Then he spent more than a month looking for Tsunade (Jiraiya said several times that he would not practice with him, and then in a certain episode later, Jiraiya said to Naru: He said three weeks ago that Naru should not act like a child, he is a ninja - he has no time to practice with him ( I want to go to the town to inquire about Tsunade) So I guess it took at least a month to find someone, because Jiraiya asked him to practice by himself three weeks ago, and after finding Tsunade, he said he would learn the Rasengan within a week, and Tsunade was thinking about Orochimaru's words during this time. So it took more than a month to find Tsunade and take her back to the village. Tsunade returned to the village to save people, Sasuke stayed for a few more days, and considered leaving. After that, Sasuke failed to take back the village, and they had their first battle in the Valley of the End, ending the boy chapter. (It ends just after Ming's 13th birthday.) When the original material was the first part of Naruto, the numbers were: 12-13, and the cards were 26-27. So I think Obito was born in 32, and Ka was born in 33. If you think they are of the same age, don't tell me. Unless you come up with conclusive evidence, don't tell me. I don't agree. Obito 13 disappeared. The encyclopedia said that he was 31 years old. I think the age is wrong, because the age should be after Kazu 31, but based on the events in their teenage years and the time of those events, Tu 13 disappeared when Kazu 12 was in the same year. Obito must be older than Kakashi in the same year, at least I think he is older than Kakashi in the same year. Because Asuma and Kurenai, who are one year older than Kakashi, are both at the same time as Kakashi, it is normal for Obito to be one year older than Kakashi at the same time. Calculated based on the age from Ka's birth to the main chapter of Naruhara's work: Kakashi: September 34: 1 year old 35:2 years old 36:3 years old 37:4 years old 38:5 years old 39:6 years old 40:7 years old 41:8 years old 42:9 years old 43:10 years old 44:11 years old 45:12 years old 46:13 years old 47: Ka fourteen years old, Naruto was born, zero years old 48: Ka Fifteen Naruto is one year old on October 10th, and he was still zero for the previous nine months. 49: Ka is fifteen years old in the first half of the year, sixteen years old on September 15th, Naruto is one year old in the first half of the year, and two years old on October 10th. 50:17 Years old 51:18 years old 52:19 years old 53:20 years old 54:21 years old 55:22 years old 56:23 years old 57:24 years old 58:25 years old 59:26 years old September 1960: Ka is 27 years old (he appeared at the beginning of May, he was 26 at that time, not 27, he was 27 in September.) Ming is 13 years old (still 12 years old in the first half of the year, 13 years old in October) above. This is my personal summary of the original characters.
I'm still wondering, Dad, why did you write a new book so quickly? Suddenly I thought, isn't this the same article I wrote before? It's been so long since I've seen it, I've forgotten
Long comment! ! ! 🤗🤗
I have never been a big fan of daily writing, and I don't really like slow-paced books. But what makes the author significantly different from Zhong is that he does not take the usual path. How to say it? Maybe it's because the author writes real daily prose, which probably feels like the trivial things in your life, or something like this. Well, it's like living alone or with your relatives. Every little thing in life. This is what the author focused on. It gave us a particularly warm feeling. Yeah, but I also read a daily article before, also written by him who is a Naruto fan. The biggest difference between the author and the author is that he is just like those who have turned back before. Whether it is a male channel or a female channel, he follows the plot. The only difference between the son and them is that the author did not follow that plot line. Gives people a unique feeling. Rather than being the same as others.
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On the consequences of staying at home Home = clear IQ Speaking of which, the author has greatly changed the title and cover of the book Because there is no display at all here (Actually, I'm really looking forward to the new cover that I drew by myself. However. . I found that nothing had changed at all, and my heart felt cold. . ) So I wondered if I had remembered it wrong (actually I was worried that I had been deceived (then again, why would I worry about being deceived?)), But later I found out that it was just because it was not displayed :) Read carefully the author's words. . I really feel like my IQ has really dropped to zero. I won't stay at home anymore. The consequences of staying at home are really emmm People who stay at home will really be like me in the near future. Not to mention fat and stupid. . . To give you an example: Below
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The subject matter is great, this is the first book of this type that I have read Personally, I feel pretty good, and I hope you can work harder! Make persistent efforts.
The author looks at me greatly! ! !
Reading a big book gives me the feeling of water flowing slowly, like boiling a frog in warm water (don't get me wrong, it's not a derogatory sense. It's just that I don't know how to describe my feeling). It feels very warm and everyday, and the author's writing style is very good👍. The plot is compact, and there is nothing that cannot be connected. Although it is a slow-paced daily story, it does not drag out and is very beautiful (my brain cells are exhausted and I can't think of any good words). Finally, give the author a big boost!
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Official(28)Scraped 3d ago
Get hung up on this person and this thing, and don't come here to say such things to me.
Don't say I didn't do the coding. I'm casting the net everywhere. Does coding make sense? Finally, after looking at this person's reply, I decided to just send a harassing sentence and wait for the person to reply before I accept it. Unfortunately, there is no way to report this person for posting promotion/advertising. I hate this behavior very much.
First kill (:з∠)_If you don't like it, please don't say anything and just exit, so as not to waste time.
I have to be the first to kill here (←?) Female videos are female-oriented. If you don't like it, don't say it or watch it. If you don't accept suggestions, I will follow my own ideas. I know the content is bad, but I don't want to see what other people say about me. If you have any questions about Manxing: If I don't fight myself, who can I expect? I don't even give my works five stars. If I give them two or three stars, then why would I write about them? Of course, I didn't ask anyone to give me full marks, and if anyone said something about me, I would ban or delete it. At least I have the right here to prevent people I don't want to see from appearing again. If others don't do this, then go over there and don't come to me. I don't care about others, but I care about me. Temporarily above (first released on 20.2.7 To be edited) (Edited in 20.2.10, The title after the emojis were added, and the content layout was changed but the text was not changed)
In fact, I have been looking forward to the return of the depression series, because I ordered all of them... And then never came back... When I finally clicked on the author's homepage, I found that the author had opened a new book... Although it was a bit regretful, it didn't matter. All in all, please give the author a big boost
My personal summary of Ming. Ka. Tu's age and timeline
The main text also says a few things. Some people may not read the testimonials, so they can also say it in the comments. The main reason is that testimonials also have a word limit, so I can explain more here. Compared with the explanation in the previous work, there are a few additions. After all, they are different works, and the identities of the protagonists are different, so they cannot be explained together. I am conscientiously making assumptions based on the original work. I do not accept objections and it is forbidden to directly use my interpretation to speculate and misappropriate it. Because it took me a long time to guess it based on the event date and the character's birthday year by year. Anyone who appropriates it without permission is not allowed to use house (homophone). The following is my summary. It just explains why I think so, so that no one can argue with me. It does not mean that someone can use my summary as your own. The following are explanations and speculations based on various events in the original work: I extrapolated the previous paragraphs from the time of Naruto's birth, but I only posted the events before that. I think we can figure out the timeline by following this. Ka is Sakumo's son, so it's normal for him to go to school early and be at the same age as Tu. And the height of a three-year-old: if he grows quickly, he's about one meter or even more. Moreover, there were other people older than Kakashi who enrolled in Kakashi at the same time, so it doesn't matter even if Kakashi is more than a year and a half younger than Kakashi (a year and a half but less than two years old, which is one year difference in round numbers). Kakashi 13 (the data is that 13 is missing (deceased)) was smashed. At that time, Kakashi 12 became a jounin not long ago (the data is that he became a jounin at the age of 12). About half a year later, Lindie (recommended) The reason for the test is in the second paragraph outside this paragraph), Naru was born more than a year later (I speculated that Ka was assigned to protect Jiu after being in the ANBU for a long time and doing many other tasks). Naru's birthday was in October, so Rin probably died around May or June of the previous year, and Tsuchi died around November and December. Tsuchi's birthday was in February, 13 was smashed, Ka's birthday was in September, and 12 jounin. In the same year, the jounin is stuck at 12, and the soil 13 is smashed, so the soil 13 in February → the card 12 in September → the jonin after a few months Tsuchi stayed in Madara for about half a year to recuperate. Based on the comparison between the length of his hair and the actual speed at which his hair grows, I guessed that it took about half a year. So about half a year after Kajounin Houtu was smashed, Lindie, Kakar was still 12 at that time (she was only 13 in September, and it was not September) → Kakar was depressed for a while, Minato later became a Kage, and then arranged Kato to join the ANBU, Ka stayed in the ANBU for a while, then one day Minato heard that he was going to be a father, and arranged Kato to be Kushina's bodyguard (secretly) (also to let Ka witness the birth of a new life and dispel the darkness in his heart) So about a year after Lindie, Ming (October birthday) was born when Ka was 14 (September birthday) (Ka was only 14 in September, and Ming was only about 25 days after his fourteenth birthday when he was born). My guess is that the original Konoha 60 Years opens in May, and graduates around May (neon some days, the reality is that they graduate and upgrade in March or April). Naru became a ninja and did some tasks, but the number of tasks recorded in the official information is not many, so he started the Wave Country dungeon not long after he became a ninja. It took a few days to go to the Country of Waves, Kado took a break for a week or two (overdraft), (Zabuza also took a break for a week or two), and then Kado was dealt with and he stayed in the Country of Waves for a few weeks to wait for the bridge to be completed (after all, he agreed to Dazuna), so he stayed in the Country of Waves for about a month. After they returned from the Land of Waves, Hiruzen called everyone together to tell them that the Chuunin Examination would be held in a week's time - July 1st (that's what the original manga said). So in the Land of Waves, it's the end of May → the end of June, and I didn't do many D-level tasks after graduation, so it can be seen that I just graduated a few days ago, so I graduated in May. So the original main story started in May. Ming was 12 years old when he appeared, and he was only 13 in October. Ka was 26 when he appeared, and he was only 27 in September. The third test was on August 6th and 7th (about half a day had passed when the written test was held on July 1st, five days in the Death Forest, and about half a day in the preliminaries. It is said that the third main game will start a month later). Then Orochimaru came to fight Konoha, and about a day later, Itachi and Kisame came after the battle. Kai and the others later said that Itachi and the others had been here for several days, so several days had passed. Naru and Jiraiya went to find Tsunade. They went out for half a day or a day, met Itachi and Kisame, and changed places after half a day or so. Then he spent more than a month looking for Tsunade (Jiraiya said several times that he would not practice with him, and then in a certain episode later, Jiraiya said to Naru: He said three weeks ago that Naru should not act like a child, he is a ninja - he has no time to practice with him ( I want to go to the town to inquire about Tsunade) So I guess it took at least a month to find someone, because Jiraiya asked him to practice by himself three weeks ago, and after finding Tsunade, he said he would learn the Rasengan within a week, and Tsunade was thinking about Orochimaru's words during this time. So it took more than a month to find Tsunade and take her back to the village. Tsunade returned to the village to save people, Sasuke stayed for a few more days, and considered leaving. After that, Sasuke failed to take back the village, and they had their first battle in the Valley of the End, ending the boy chapter. (It ends just after Ming's 13th birthday.) When the original material was the first part of Naruto, the numbers were: 12-13, and the cards were 26-27. So I think Obito was born in 32, and Ka was born in 33. If you think they are of the same age, don't tell me. Unless you come up with conclusive evidence, don't tell me. I don't agree. Obito 13 disappeared. The encyclopedia said that he was 31 years old. I think the age is wrong, because the age should be after Kazu 31, but based on the events in their teenage years and the time of those events, Tu 13 disappeared when Kazu 12 was in the same year. Obito must be older than Kakashi in the same year, at least I think he is older than Kakashi in the same year. Because Asuma and Kurenai, who are one year older than Kakashi, are both at the same time as Kakashi, it is normal for Obito to be one year older than Kakashi at the same time. Calculated based on the age from Ka's birth to the main chapter of Naruhara's work: Kakashi: September 34: 1 year old 35:2 years old 36:3 years old 37:4 years old 38:5 years old 39:6 years old 40:7 years old 41:8 years old 42:9 years old 43:10 years old 44:11 years old 45:12 years old 46:13 years old 47: Ka fourteen years old, Naruto was born, zero years old 48: Ka Fifteen Naruto is one year old on October 10th, and he was still zero for the previous nine months. 49: Ka is fifteen years old in the first half of the year, sixteen years old on September 15th, Naruto is one year old in the first half of the year, and two years old on October 10th. 50:17 Years old 51:18 years old 52:19 years old 53:20 years old 54:21 years old 55:22 years old 56:23 years old 57:24 years old 58:25 years old 59:26 years old September 1960: Ka is 27 years old (he appeared at the beginning of May, he was 26 at that time, not 27, he was 27 in September.) Ming is 13 years old (still 12 years old in the first half of the year, 13 years old in October) above. This is my personal summary of the original characters.
I'm still wondering, Dad, why did you write a new book so quickly? Suddenly I thought, isn't this the same article I wrote before? It's been so long since I've seen it, I've forgotten
Long comment! ! ! 🤗🤗
I have never been a big fan of daily writing, and I don't really like slow-paced books. But what makes the author significantly different from Zhong is that he does not take the usual path. How to say it? Maybe it's because the author writes real daily prose, which probably feels like the trivial things in your life, or something like this. Well, it's like living alone or with your relatives. Every little thing in life. This is what the author focused on. It gave us a particularly warm feeling. Yeah, but I also read a daily article before, also written by him who is a Naruto fan. The biggest difference between the author and the author is that he is just like those who have turned back before. Whether it is a male channel or a female channel, he follows the plot. The only difference between the son and them is that the author did not follow that plot line. Gives people a unique feeling. Rather than being the same as others.
. . . ? !
On the consequences of staying at home Home = clear IQ Speaking of which, the author has greatly changed the title and cover of the book Because there is no display at all here (Actually, I'm really looking forward to the new cover that I drew by myself. However. . I found that nothing had changed at all, and my heart felt cold. . ) So I wondered if I had remembered it wrong (actually I was worried that I had been deceived (then again, why would I worry about being deceived?)), But later I found out that it was just because it was not displayed :) Read carefully the author's words. . I really feel like my IQ has really dropped to zero. I won't stay at home anymore. The consequences of staying at home are really emmm People who stay at home will really be like me in the near future. Not to mention fat and stupid. . . To give you an example: Below
Good reviews
The subject matter is great, this is the first book of this type that I have read Personally, I feel pretty good, and I hope you can work harder! Make persistent efforts.
The author looks at me greatly! ! !
Reading a big book gives me the feeling of water flowing slowly, like boiling a frog in warm water (don't get me wrong, it's not a derogatory sense. It's just that I don't know how to describe my feeling). It feels very warm and everyday, and the author's writing style is very good👍. The plot is compact, and there is nothing that cannot be connected. Although it is a slow-paced daily story, it does not drag out and is very beautiful (my brain cells are exhausted and I can't think of any good words). Finally, give the author a big boost!










