Heavenly War! My Troop Type Has an Entry!

It's not that I can't watch it, it's just that I don't really like the messy military types. Just write the undead type for the awakened undead type. If you make it include all races, it will look messy, which makes it less interesting to watch. Everyone has their own opinions!

I can't stand it until halfway through. Author, why don't you read what you wrote? Some places are so stupid that it's hard to describe.

Isn't there something novel? Another waste stream

I didn't want to see the Goblin camp built in the Cemetery camp. Racial buildings can be built at will. What other factions do you want to divide into?

The levels of arms are too confusing. I have just read about ten chapters, and there is another level 1 and level 2. Then there is another level of arms, and then there are ordinary and elite arms, and there are one and two stars.

The main reason is that everyone doesn't know what they are doing. Let's take the official government as an example. There is a resource assessment, and after passing the assessment, resources will be supported. So shouldn't this be a fair situation? Or roughly fair. What does this look like inside? These large companies and groups directly invest in newcomers, directly give money and things, and send people to station in the territory, and then participate in the assessment. So I would like to ask where is the role of this lord? He just sleeps at home. As long as big groups invest a lot, he will definitely get official resource subsidies. In this case, what is the point of official resource subsidies? There are still many details that have not been added. I see how the current protagonist's family enters this battlefield, and so on. There are no details that give us a sense of immersion. The organization still has a lot of room for improvement.

When did the author update it?

Lots of typos and unlimited entries? I have seen half of them, and there are no more than twenty. There are five levels in total. Except for the first level, which has six or seven entries, each subsequent level only has two entries. Basically, the effects are repeated.

In the early stage, it was relatively smooth, and there was a moderate amount of complaining about the author. After the 200th chapter, it became more and more chaotic. It started to let go of itself with long digressions that made people laugh, and the combat power system basically collapsed. However, this is a small problem. Anyway, Shuangwen Invincible is over. Generally speaking, it is average. If the rhythm and frequency of digressions before chapter 200 are maintained, one more star can be added.

If you want to write, write more practical things. If you add the dialogue between the protagonist and the author, it will look very watery.