Report, the Confidentiality Agreement That Year Has Expired

Advantages 1. The subject matter of the book is relatively new. On the basis of normal supernatural books, the direction is changed from the protagonist's personal route to the official institutional route, which is a refreshing feeling. 2. The multi-protagonist template involves different character backgrounds. I feel that the author draws on the content of One Person to meet the readers' personalized needs for different characters. Disadvantages 1. The backgrounds of the characters are diverse, but the content does not fully shape the personality characteristics and behavioral differences of each character, and a lot of the content is briefly mentioned. 2. The story line is too fragmented and there is no continuity in the plot. It feels like the stories are pieced together. The description of Goldfinger, the development of the organization, and the progress of the characters' strength are not clearly described. 3. The most dramatic thing is the way the characters talk. For example, when Taoist Qingyun talks to others, in the text: I am Taoist Qingyun. Normally write: Old Taoist Qingyun, what about lay people? Will it be better? Taoist priests, civilians, military, leaders, people with different identities should speak in a way that matches their own character settings, rather than being introduced directly like a machine.

Author, you are really good at writing. One chapter is thousands of words long, but you only have one key point. You are so awesome. I can't read anymore. You are so good at writing.

The author seems to have little experience at first glance, and he also gives the protagonist a high-ranking official persona, which is very conflicting.

I don't know if I'm too holy-hearted. When I saw Pig's Foot and watched the situation unfold, I just made a phone call and then started watching it. I felt like Pig's Foot knew what the consequences would be, but still chose to watch it. I wanted to take this opportunity to improve my voice. I didn't like it too much. The book is still a good book. Come on, the author.

Keep it first. Stop being a pigeon, go faster

As soon as I started, I was rewarded with a comprehensive collection of folklore knowledge about ghosts and monsters. I also knew that the first case was a non-human case. During the investigation, I always felt that something was really wrong. I was speechless.

The beginning is not bad, but the fourth chapter is poisonous, fiercely poisonous, extremely poisonous. Just because of a case, even if it is very complicated and egregious, it is just a case. You actually asked your superiors to set up an independent government department under your control? ! ! Still issuing military orders? ! Are you an adult? ? As long as you have some cognition, you can't be so drunk, right? One more question, is the author still a middle school student (it's a bit insulting to say a primary school student)? ? ? ?

When the protagonist was first reborn into this world, he was still very immature when he attended the meeting. He was a young man. Suddenly he opened the civil affairs bureau and suddenly became a different person. He immediately matured and spoke and acted like a big boss. When the protagonist handles supernatural events, he is working for the country. Why does he take it upon himself when he encounters a problem and report it to his superior? Then the superior reports it to the superiors, but you don't hide it here. Your superior also hides it. Why are you and your superior trying to take over the nationwide case? Author: I suspect that you are deliberately delaying the plot. This delay is very unreasonable. You don't want to let the common people know. Don't you want to let the higher-ups know as well? Why is there any need to hide it?

It's the type I like, but there are too few. Not enough.

The author's writing is not good enough, but the details of the story are also very good.