
There's Something Wrong with This Version of the Technique!
About This Novel
That day, when you walked into the company with your left foot at work, you smelled a strange smell, and you felt weak and tired, as if your body had been hollowed out... You realized that you had the smell of work. In order to get rid of the class smell, you think of strengthening your body. After returning home, you buy a copy of "Yi Jin Marrow Cleansing Sutra" online. Deduction successful! The fake secret book in your hand becomes "The Jade Body Chapter of the Yi Jin Cleansing Marrow Sutra". You try to practice, and find that the body smell disappears, and the jade light shines all over your body. "Nine Yin Manual" turned into "Nine Yin Crazy Sutra" and "Wudang Thirty-six Skills" in the blink of an eye, and then turned into "Wudang Thirty-Six Skills Innate Charging Station Method" "..." Parallel world, supernatural resurgence. I obviously got a serious secret book, why was the version that came out so outrageous! ! ! After Lu Yue pondered, he stretched out his hand to the side to read the "Jade Girl's Heart Sutra". There is already a completed masterpiece "This simplification is too outrageous!" >>
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Official(34)Scraped 11d ago
It feels like there's a demon here, but it doesn't have the sense of humor and relaxation that a demon has.
It's a bit interesting at the beginning, but becomes more and more boring later on. Always like to play those bad jokes. I still feel a little fresh about it once or twice, so I come back every time. Starting from the time when I went to the village to find Zhang Yaling's life experience, the more I wrote, the more boring and boring it became. In the end, I was waiting to enter the ruins to see what was cool about it, but I didn't want to keep putting it off. The ruins started to be mentioned in more than 30 chapters, and the ink marks were still there until Chapter 97.
Too watery
The introduction of the exercises can obviously be omitted, no one cares at all, just write a name, then add three dimensions, and break it down into dozens of words, the author is also amazing
It's a bit like being evil! Come on, it's already pinned
Will the author add gram-based elements later?
I hope that there will be Bijak elements in the future. Any author who adds gods, ghosts, immortals, Buddhas and demons to current martial arts novels will definitely add the setting of Cthulhu. It made me speechless. Wouldn't they write it without adding Cthulhu?
Considering the size of this book, why was Fangzheng banned at that time? The scale is not big either.
Looking back, it seems to be more routine, and I don't have any sense of expectation.
The places that are scary to write are terrifying to death, and the places that are abstract are extremely abstract.
The funny part is so funny that I can't bear to read the latest chapter. Please update more. The author is still very good. Please support me. Then there is only one small flaw, that is, in Bigan, I feel that the protagonist's fighting ability is a bit inferior, and he obviously cannot beat others. Therefore, I hope that the emergence of such bosses in the future will give readers the confidence to believe that the protagonist is stronger than the boss and can definitely overcome difficulties. Many times, ghosts' abilities are ever-changing, and I'm afraid that the protagonist won't be able to stand up to them. So it's not about giving the protagonist a bigger trick, but it's about giving readers confidence that when they see a ghost, they think: It's just a little ghost, and I'll be wiped out in a snap of my fingers.
Author, I recommended your book to Douyin. Let me see if you are interested in voting for Douyin+.
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Official(34)Scraped 11d ago
It feels like there's a demon here, but it doesn't have the sense of humor and relaxation that a demon has.
It's a bit interesting at the beginning, but becomes more and more boring later on. Always like to play those bad jokes. I still feel a little fresh about it once or twice, so I come back every time. Starting from the time when I went to the village to find Zhang Yaling's life experience, the more I wrote, the more boring and boring it became. In the end, I was waiting to enter the ruins to see what was cool about it, but I didn't want to keep putting it off. The ruins started to be mentioned in more than 30 chapters, and the ink marks were still there until Chapter 97.
Too watery
The introduction of the exercises can obviously be omitted, no one cares at all, just write a name, then add three dimensions, and break it down into dozens of words, the author is also amazing
It's a bit like being evil! Come on, it's already pinned
Will the author add gram-based elements later?
I hope that there will be Bijak elements in the future. Any author who adds gods, ghosts, immortals, Buddhas and demons to current martial arts novels will definitely add the setting of Cthulhu. It made me speechless. Wouldn't they write it without adding Cthulhu?
Considering the size of this book, why was Fangzheng banned at that time? The scale is not big either.
Looking back, it seems to be more routine, and I don't have any sense of expectation.
The places that are scary to write are terrifying to death, and the places that are abstract are extremely abstract.
The funny part is so funny that I can't bear to read the latest chapter. Please update more. The author is still very good. Please support me. Then there is only one small flaw, that is, in Bigan, I feel that the protagonist's fighting ability is a bit inferior, and he obviously cannot beat others. Therefore, I hope that the emergence of such bosses in the future will give readers the confidence to believe that the protagonist is stronger than the boss and can definitely overcome difficulties. Many times, ghosts' abilities are ever-changing, and I'm afraid that the protagonist won't be able to stand up to them. So it's not about giving the protagonist a bigger trick, but it's about giving readers confidence that when they see a ghost, they think: It's just a little ghost, and I'll be wiped out in a snap of my fingers.
Author, I recommended your book to Douyin. Let me see if you are interested in voting for Douyin+.














