
I Can Enter the Game World
About This Novel
After Fang Jue was struck by electricity once, there was an extra game world in his body, and he could travel back and forth between the two worlds. Moreover, he can also bring skills, props, items, and monsters from the game world into the real world. When he first entered the game world, everything changed.
What Readers Think
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Official(633)Scraped 4d ago
very good
In fact, when I saw that you were writing about the game "Legend", my first reaction was to give up the book. However, considering that your last book was very good, I just finished reading it. It was still very good. To be honest, I really hate the game "Legend" and these two words because the Internet is full of advertisements. It makes me feel sick. The more I read, the worse my mood becomes. I have the urge to smash my phone.
The subject matter is good. It's been a long time since I've read a novel about two villains from both worlds. 1. Legend can be said to be a game that is almost overwritten. How many current readers have played Legend? Is it a little biased? 2. Girlfriend Although the plot of not being abandoned by his girlfriend is refreshing, but with his girlfriend around him every day, it is easy to write the male protagonist as a licker, which can easily make the novel violent. The male and female protagonists should be more affectionate and love each other. If you also write one-on-one for the supporting characters, the word count will be too low. You will force the readers to feed dog food. You know the consequences. 3. The ratio between games and reality must be grasped well. Readers of games with too many urban plots may not buy it. Readers who prefer urban areas may not buy it if there are too many plots of games. I hope the author, come on!
The subject matter is very good
It's been a long time since I encountered the theme of Hot Blood Legend. I suggest you write about the theme of the private server, because the private server has more plasticity than the official legend. For example, the private server has dungeons, and you can teleport to the dungeon to search for treasures. There are only candles in the game, but you can bring a flashlight in reality. Novice weapons are not strong. In reality, it is more interesting to buy alloy weapons and play with Gatling. The two worlds are interconnected.
The second-hand building, if you want a second-hand apartment, enter the building.
Leave the name of your supporting cast, and if the character is suitable, they will be recruited, not necessarily in order. But once you enter this building, life and death have their own author.
The opening scene poisoned me.
The heroine is a goddess. 2 People eating together. The heroine's mother ran to the restaurant and said. You are not suitable. Speechless😓. Even if I don't like you in real life. People outside also pay attention to face. Second, since you are a *six, what kind of goddess are you chasing after? A love destined to be fruitless. I have never seen a poor person dare to chase a goddess-level figure in real life. I'm talking about normal conditions.
QQ book club group: 318221584, please join if you are interested! Occasionally cut down the server!
The author occasionally cuts servers. If there is a good private server, hahaha!
If you can't kill with a pistol, what about a rifle?
I don't believe that sniper rifles can't give them headshots. . Not to mention firearms, just how many incendiary bombs and flamethrowers can be carried with a few tons of backpack weight. Come back with G4. 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙I'm drunk too (›´ω`‹ )!
Here's a tip for pig's feet: if they are underdeveloped, don't waste them!
The plot of the story is good, and the writing and thinking logic are not even a bit better than those of many book authors! I hope this book will not be overwritten, because the subject of legend is very novel and domineering when I first see it. The interweaving of real life is very powerful, I hope there will be more real life, and don't make men with pig's feet or something like Yushu Linfeng, a romantic and suave man, seven times a night, and seven or eight beauties around him! Just focus on the heroine and one or two is acceptable. The rhythm of the story can be more compact, and the design can be more sophisticated. Don't be like some messy authors who get stuck at the end of the writing. Looking forward to this work becoming a god.
What a great author!
Good author, I just took a small piece of wire to poke the socket. Now I don't have the system. I have awakened the electric shock power. I will shock whoever I catch. Hahaha, I am invincible.
real
I found it really a bit poisonous. How could I not notice it when it is so simple to kill someone with a borrowed knife? Since the protagonist is a normal person, he should have thought of it. His IQ is so low. It is really poisonous. Just wipe out the entire Lin family. The scheming female watch is disgusting. Also, you don't know how to fall in love. Now that you have a girlfriend, you won't do it again and again. Accept invitations from others (referring to women) for the first time, especially those who know the other person's purpose, point it out directly, and do it if they don't agree. Violence can't solve troubles, but it can solve the troublemakers. Killing people in the house, naturally no one will mess with them. I'm especially annoyed by those novels where people who are obviously powerful and have backgrounds, but still wear rags and pretend to be cool, slap in the face.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(633)Scraped 4d ago
very good
In fact, when I saw that you were writing about the game "Legend", my first reaction was to give up the book. However, considering that your last book was very good, I just finished reading it. It was still very good. To be honest, I really hate the game "Legend" and these two words because the Internet is full of advertisements. It makes me feel sick. The more I read, the worse my mood becomes. I have the urge to smash my phone.
The subject matter is good. It's been a long time since I've read a novel about two villains from both worlds. 1. Legend can be said to be a game that is almost overwritten. How many current readers have played Legend? Is it a little biased? 2. Girlfriend Although the plot of not being abandoned by his girlfriend is refreshing, but with his girlfriend around him every day, it is easy to write the male protagonist as a licker, which can easily make the novel violent. The male and female protagonists should be more affectionate and love each other. If you also write one-on-one for the supporting characters, the word count will be too low. You will force the readers to feed dog food. You know the consequences. 3. The ratio between games and reality must be grasped well. Readers of games with too many urban plots may not buy it. Readers who prefer urban areas may not buy it if there are too many plots of games. I hope the author, come on!
The subject matter is very good
It's been a long time since I encountered the theme of Hot Blood Legend. I suggest you write about the theme of the private server, because the private server has more plasticity than the official legend. For example, the private server has dungeons, and you can teleport to the dungeon to search for treasures. There are only candles in the game, but you can bring a flashlight in reality. Novice weapons are not strong. In reality, it is more interesting to buy alloy weapons and play with Gatling. The two worlds are interconnected.
The second-hand building, if you want a second-hand apartment, enter the building.
Leave the name of your supporting cast, and if the character is suitable, they will be recruited, not necessarily in order. But once you enter this building, life and death have their own author.
The opening scene poisoned me.
The heroine is a goddess. 2 People eating together. The heroine's mother ran to the restaurant and said. You are not suitable. Speechless😓. Even if I don't like you in real life. People outside also pay attention to face. Second, since you are a *six, what kind of goddess are you chasing after? A love destined to be fruitless. I have never seen a poor person dare to chase a goddess-level figure in real life. I'm talking about normal conditions.
QQ book club group: 318221584, please join if you are interested! Occasionally cut down the server!
The author occasionally cuts servers. If there is a good private server, hahaha!
If you can't kill with a pistol, what about a rifle?
I don't believe that sniper rifles can't give them headshots. . Not to mention firearms, just how many incendiary bombs and flamethrowers can be carried with a few tons of backpack weight. Come back with G4. 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙I'm drunk too (›´ω`‹ )!
Here's a tip for pig's feet: if they are underdeveloped, don't waste them!
The plot of the story is good, and the writing and thinking logic are not even a bit better than those of many book authors! I hope this book will not be overwritten, because the subject of legend is very novel and domineering when I first see it. The interweaving of real life is very powerful, I hope there will be more real life, and don't make men with pig's feet or something like Yushu Linfeng, a romantic and suave man, seven times a night, and seven or eight beauties around him! Just focus on the heroine and one or two is acceptable. The rhythm of the story can be more compact, and the design can be more sophisticated. Don't be like some messy authors who get stuck at the end of the writing. Looking forward to this work becoming a god.
What a great author!
Good author, I just took a small piece of wire to poke the socket. Now I don't have the system. I have awakened the electric shock power. I will shock whoever I catch. Hahaha, I am invincible.
real
I found it really a bit poisonous. How could I not notice it when it is so simple to kill someone with a borrowed knife? Since the protagonist is a normal person, he should have thought of it. His IQ is so low. It is really poisonous. Just wipe out the entire Lin family. The scheming female watch is disgusting. Also, you don't know how to fall in love. Now that you have a girlfriend, you won't do it again and again. Accept invitations from others (referring to women) for the first time, especially those who know the other person's purpose, point it out directly, and do it if they don't agree. Violence can't solve troubles, but it can solve the troublemakers. Killing people in the house, naturally no one will mess with them. I'm especially annoyed by those novels where people who are obviously powerful and have backgrounds, but still wear rags and pretend to be cool, slap in the face.












