I Broke Through Again

Day after day, I don't do any serious work and do a lot of nonsense.

The author's writing is okay, but there are still many poisonous points. The author's biggest mistake is that he always likes to talk about science in a fantasy world. I really don't understand it. Can't you write a fantasy novel seriously? If you insist on writing and writing and inserting a sentence about bacteria and a sentence about science, it is too ridiculous. Many authors nowadays suffer from this shortcoming. They always like to write novels such as fantasy, and then insert a sentence about science into the text from time to time, and then look at the ancients with a down-to-earth gaze. They always think that their IQ is higher than the ancients, and think that the ancients are like barbarians. The author of this book committed this problem. While writing the book, he suddenly wrote a paragraph where modern people are superior and the ancients are nothing. I really don't understand it. The protagonist has traveled to a fantasy Warring States period of gods and demons. While enjoying the benefits of time travel, he scolded his mother. Especially the paragraph about bacteria in the article is too poisonous. Before the protagonist traveled through time, None of them have such a habit of loving cleanliness. However, after time travel, they suddenly developed a morbid habit of loving cleanliness. After washing their hands, they always feel that there are germs. From this paragraph, it can be seen that the author is vaguely talking about the backwardness of ancient times. At the same time, he created a sick and pretentious protagonist. A habit that he did not have before time travel suddenly appeared after time travel. What do you think this is? Isn't this coquettishness?

I have read more than 300 chapters, and I still don't understand why I keep making sacrifices. What do I get from making sacrifices? What makes the protagonist strong? Isn't it a plug-in? Why keep sacrificing? Sacrifice will make the protagonist stronger? Are all my subordinates working for free? Furthermore, what you get from the sacrifice is better than the sacrifice? Finally, aren't you afraid that there is no conspiracy behind the sacrifice? Aren't you afraid that you are nourishing the devil?

Its appearance also gave Zhao Huai new vitality. Zhao Huai's practice is slowly making breakthroughs, and it is also changing. They are partners who grew up together, and it is also something Zhao Huai can believe in.

This subject is overused, I suggest you change it to a starry sky novel.

Next time, I can't write a fantasy about geniuses competing for hegemony, but can the protagonist be a genius from a family with status, talent, strength and background? This genre is quite popular now, but most authors are not very good at writing, and they are basically short stories. I feel that your writing skills are very good, if you think about it carefully, you should be able to write well.

I feel that having a single female protagonist is better, but it's not that I can't accept multiple female protagonists. The main reason is that there are many novels where I can't move when I see a female protagonist.

It's well written, please keep updating. Watch it regularly every day, just looking for updates

The front is fine, but the back is a bit boring

It would not be easy to live under someone else's roof, let alone a proton. People would just let Zhao Huai live and not teach him anything else.