The Female Supporting Character Gets Involved in the Novel About Cultivating Immortals
by Baby Yu
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[Traditional cultivation + no cp] Feng Wan penetrated into the body of a cannon fodder five-year-old cub who didn't even deserve a name in the fairy tale. He died before he even appeared... According to the original text, all the female cultivators who get close to the heroine will not end well! Feng Wan, who had been reborn, fell into deep thought. In the world of cultivation, the strong are respected. In order to save his life, he must improve his cultivation, ascend as soon as possible, and stay away from the heroine. So... When the heroine was surrounded by love-minded male supporting actors and confessed her love, Feng Wan was practicing. While the heroine was resting and eating, Feng Wan was practicing. The disciples of Tianyuan Sect all thought that Feng Wan was crazy. Although he is in the most leisurely sect, he still wants to be the most voluptuous one! Feng Wan: It seemed like it was rolled too much, and the heroine was so wrapped that she cried. Reader group qq129053339, welcome to tease!
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Official(545)Scraped 2mo ago
The cp who wants to be untainted and redeemed
The rescuer now feels Bu Ran and the rescuer's CP have a good time, it's too sweet, is it true? It would be a shame if they weren't together
The more you delete it, the more I want to post it
It was a bit hard for me to understand when Feng Wan first planned to target the heroine. It would be fine if the original heroine was a heinous villain. Judging from the image the author painted for the heroine, there was no sense that he had to target the heroine. It's one thing for you to work hard to become stronger. It's really a big deal to frame someone else for taking something from their bag, but isn't it necessary? The second test later came out of nowhere. Although Feng Wan is the heroine of this book, I think doing things reasonably is the quality that a heroine in a book should have. And overall, I really feel that this book revolves around Feng Wan too much. I was looking forward to the subsequent plot, and I also thought some of the lines were very interesting. But now because the new and old heroines are not handled well, I can't stand it anymore. Another thing is to delete ideas. I like to see some ideas written there. I will write down things that I think are funny and unreasonable. However, the unreasonable ideas will be deleted. If you don't want to hear other people's different opinions, you can write it in the introduction, and I won't click on this book. Now I just want to say that I will never read this book again.
Originally, I wanted to read a novel about a heroine without cp, but after reading hundreds of chapters, I somehow changed my mind. I especially wanted Feng Wan and Bu Ran to be together.
There are more than 500 chapters. Have you started writing an address book? ? ?
Since the article will mention the plot of the address book, why not explain it in the introduction? Marked no cp, I understand that you deleted the comment criticizing cp, but how do you explain the plot of the address book? I worked hard and spent money to catch up to more than 500 chapters, and you suddenly played this trick on me? ? If you marked it in advance, I definitely wouldn't click on it, but it's your fault if you put shit in your soup💩, it's still secretly mixed with shit. There is no cp+ address book, so your entire article only writes about male-male love? ? ?
Feng Wan was so miserable. The spiritual root test was done three days ago. The crystal ball test showed that she had no spiritual roots and was a complete mortal. But it would be fine if she could cultivate on her own.
This world of cultivation is abnormal. It places too much emphasis on elixirs. It seems that there is no way to break through without elixirs. As a result, alchemists take themselves too seriously and are not very healthy.
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Isn't it too centered around the heroine? It's a bit too fake. The heroine and Feng Qingqing can forget it. After all, they share the same joys and sorrows as sisters. Even if the newly recognized master has a little fate before, he is very kind to the heroine. I feel that having the heroine as his apprentice will have no regrets. I can't help thinking this way. With the heroine's talent, hard work, Xiangxiang Ruanruan and twelve apprentices, there is only one female, but it is a senior who squats at the door of the heroine's house every day as soon as they meet, and can't leave even an inch. What the hell is this heroine's charm that makes eleven senior brothers "lick" her from the beginning? , Real. I really don't understand why the heroine goes into seclusion and waits in front of other people's houses every day. Later, when the master takes her to see the master of Ten Thousand Formations Peak, he says that even if she doesn't have the chance to have such a disciple, she will have no regrets in this life. I can't stand it.
good looking
I, a non-CP person, actually think that having a CP is not bad. It's really great to have a CP character. I can do this kind of character as a male protagonist! What a match for Bu Ran Daojun and Wan Wan! I think it's okay even if there is a male protagonist, as long as the male protagonist is Bu Ran Daojun, I find it inexplicably sweet!
Brainless cool article
The logic of the whole text is confusing. The cultivation levels of the people and pets around the protagonist fluctuate up and down. It's just mindless and can't be read without thinking. 🤐
The biggest highlight of this article is the setting of the heroine, who is diligent and hard-working, attaches great importance to family ties, and disdains love between men and women. I only read it because of this lack of CP, but later on... There are many shortcomings, such as the writing style is relatively immature, and there are many typos, and there is too much content about female competition, and there are also Puxin men who stalk the female cultivators. (Although I know that they will all be slapped in the face in the end, it is really humbling to see them pestering women.) Even if I know that these people in this article are stepping stones and cannons for the protagonist. Hui, but I feel physically nauseous. There are one or two male cultivators who are stalking me, which I think is normal, but the whole story seems to be full of people like this. The senior brothers around Li Xuanyu, Zhao Yu, Leng Che..., And Ximeng, Mo Qiong, and the men around her are generally the type who just turned her head and glanced at me, she must be interested in me. I'm very curious about what makes them so confident. With just one or two ambiguous words, they are sure that women will become Taoist companions with him. And the probability of the Feng family appearing is really too high. Any secret realm belongs to the Feng family, and any one or two natural treasures belong to the ancestor of the Feng family. It gives me the feeling that the Feng family used to be very powerful, but now it has declined and has become a third-rate family, but I was told that in the world of cultivation, the strong are respected, and a lot of people are one or two thousand years old. Could it be that when they see that the Feng family is in decline, they will not take advantage of it and go to the Feng family to steal treasures? And Houshan has the experience left by his predecessors. Are they all blind and only the protagonist can see it? And the alchemy cauldron is just placed in the back mountain. Could it be that those great masters at the Tribulation Stage can't even break through the ban on the back mountain? Fengru is only a sixth-level alchemist. She is at the Yuan Ying stage at most. I don't believe that those great masters can't even break through the bans set by the Nascent Soul stage. Also, the author seems a little unclear about the value of money. High-grade spiritual stones are spent for free, easily tens of thousands. She also said in the previous article how precious high-grade spiritual stones are. There is also the Zhonghuang Alchemy Dao Competition. The first place only has 300,000 spiritual stones, but just betting on Mo Qiong's high-grade spiritual stones has two More than 15 million, maybe you will tell me, there is also the opportunity to enter the Nine Desolations Secret Realm and a bunch of rewards for the Immortal Grass Technique, but the difference between 25 million and 300,000 is not a tiny bit, and there are also a lot of bets and competitions that can easily cost hundreds of thousands. In comparison, this first place is really cheap. In fact, there are quite a lot of flaws in this article. I have only read almost 300 chapters so far, and I really can't keep up. In addition to the people around the protagonist, the women in this article seem to be a bit love-savvy, and the men around the heroine are almost all ordinary men. They get married and pursue each other at every turn. I can't help but suspect that getting married is a very cheap and easy thing. As long as a man and a woman interact a few times, one of them will definitely fall in love with the other (throughout the whole article, I feel that the only normal people are the protagonists). In the previous article, it was said that excellent female cultivators are rare, but in the following article, there are a bunch of average male cultivators raving about the protagonist and some outstanding women, saying that he wants to catch a lot of women like them. Isn't this a bit inconsistent? I wrote a 1,000-word review for this book. To me, this book is a high start but a low start. I am regretful and disappointed but also somewhat expected. I hope the author can hone his writing skills in the future and clearly remember the setting of the previous article. There are inconsistencies in some places, which makes me feel that the contrast is too great and too unreal. I may not be able to express myself clearly in some places, or the shortcomings I think are foreshadowing for the future, but that can only go so far.
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Official(545)Scraped 2mo ago
The cp who wants to be untainted and redeemed
The rescuer now feels Bu Ran and the rescuer's CP have a good time, it's too sweet, is it true? It would be a shame if they weren't together
The more you delete it, the more I want to post it
It was a bit hard for me to understand when Feng Wan first planned to target the heroine. It would be fine if the original heroine was a heinous villain. Judging from the image the author painted for the heroine, there was no sense that he had to target the heroine. It's one thing for you to work hard to become stronger. It's really a big deal to frame someone else for taking something from their bag, but isn't it necessary? The second test later came out of nowhere. Although Feng Wan is the heroine of this book, I think doing things reasonably is the quality that a heroine in a book should have. And overall, I really feel that this book revolves around Feng Wan too much. I was looking forward to the subsequent plot, and I also thought some of the lines were very interesting. But now because the new and old heroines are not handled well, I can't stand it anymore. Another thing is to delete ideas. I like to see some ideas written there. I will write down things that I think are funny and unreasonable. However, the unreasonable ideas will be deleted. If you don't want to hear other people's different opinions, you can write it in the introduction, and I won't click on this book. Now I just want to say that I will never read this book again.
Originally, I wanted to read a novel about a heroine without cp, but after reading hundreds of chapters, I somehow changed my mind. I especially wanted Feng Wan and Bu Ran to be together.
There are more than 500 chapters. Have you started writing an address book? ? ?
Since the article will mention the plot of the address book, why not explain it in the introduction? Marked no cp, I understand that you deleted the comment criticizing cp, but how do you explain the plot of the address book? I worked hard and spent money to catch up to more than 500 chapters, and you suddenly played this trick on me? ? If you marked it in advance, I definitely wouldn't click on it, but it's your fault if you put shit in your soup💩, it's still secretly mixed with shit. There is no cp+ address book, so your entire article only writes about male-male love? ? ?
Feng Wan was so miserable. The spiritual root test was done three days ago. The crystal ball test showed that she had no spiritual roots and was a complete mortal. But it would be fine if she could cultivate on her own.
This world of cultivation is abnormal. It places too much emphasis on elixirs. It seems that there is no way to break through without elixirs. As a result, alchemists take themselves too seriously and are not very healthy.
Leave an opinion
Isn't it too centered around the heroine? It's a bit too fake. The heroine and Feng Qingqing can forget it. After all, they share the same joys and sorrows as sisters. Even if the newly recognized master has a little fate before, he is very kind to the heroine. I feel that having the heroine as his apprentice will have no regrets. I can't help thinking this way. With the heroine's talent, hard work, Xiangxiang Ruanruan and twelve apprentices, there is only one female, but it is a senior who squats at the door of the heroine's house every day as soon as they meet, and can't leave even an inch. What the hell is this heroine's charm that makes eleven senior brothers "lick" her from the beginning? , Real. I really don't understand why the heroine goes into seclusion and waits in front of other people's houses every day. Later, when the master takes her to see the master of Ten Thousand Formations Peak, he says that even if she doesn't have the chance to have such a disciple, she will have no regrets in this life. I can't stand it.
good looking
I, a non-CP person, actually think that having a CP is not bad. It's really great to have a CP character. I can do this kind of character as a male protagonist! What a match for Bu Ran Daojun and Wan Wan! I think it's okay even if there is a male protagonist, as long as the male protagonist is Bu Ran Daojun, I find it inexplicably sweet!
Brainless cool article
The logic of the whole text is confusing. The cultivation levels of the people and pets around the protagonist fluctuate up and down. It's just mindless and can't be read without thinking. 🤐
The biggest highlight of this article is the setting of the heroine, who is diligent and hard-working, attaches great importance to family ties, and disdains love between men and women. I only read it because of this lack of CP, but later on... There are many shortcomings, such as the writing style is relatively immature, and there are many typos, and there is too much content about female competition, and there are also Puxin men who stalk the female cultivators. (Although I know that they will all be slapped in the face in the end, it is really humbling to see them pestering women.) Even if I know that these people in this article are stepping stones and cannons for the protagonist. Hui, but I feel physically nauseous. There are one or two male cultivators who are stalking me, which I think is normal, but the whole story seems to be full of people like this. The senior brothers around Li Xuanyu, Zhao Yu, Leng Che..., And Ximeng, Mo Qiong, and the men around her are generally the type who just turned her head and glanced at me, she must be interested in me. I'm very curious about what makes them so confident. With just one or two ambiguous words, they are sure that women will become Taoist companions with him. And the probability of the Feng family appearing is really too high. Any secret realm belongs to the Feng family, and any one or two natural treasures belong to the ancestor of the Feng family. It gives me the feeling that the Feng family used to be very powerful, but now it has declined and has become a third-rate family, but I was told that in the world of cultivation, the strong are respected, and a lot of people are one or two thousand years old. Could it be that when they see that the Feng family is in decline, they will not take advantage of it and go to the Feng family to steal treasures? And Houshan has the experience left by his predecessors. Are they all blind and only the protagonist can see it? And the alchemy cauldron is just placed in the back mountain. Could it be that those great masters at the Tribulation Stage can't even break through the ban on the back mountain? Fengru is only a sixth-level alchemist. She is at the Yuan Ying stage at most. I don't believe that those great masters can't even break through the bans set by the Nascent Soul stage. Also, the author seems a little unclear about the value of money. High-grade spiritual stones are spent for free, easily tens of thousands. She also said in the previous article how precious high-grade spiritual stones are. There is also the Zhonghuang Alchemy Dao Competition. The first place only has 300,000 spiritual stones, but just betting on Mo Qiong's high-grade spiritual stones has two More than 15 million, maybe you will tell me, there is also the opportunity to enter the Nine Desolations Secret Realm and a bunch of rewards for the Immortal Grass Technique, but the difference between 25 million and 300,000 is not a tiny bit, and there are also a lot of bets and competitions that can easily cost hundreds of thousands. In comparison, this first place is really cheap. In fact, there are quite a lot of flaws in this article. I have only read almost 300 chapters so far, and I really can't keep up. In addition to the people around the protagonist, the women in this article seem to be a bit love-savvy, and the men around the heroine are almost all ordinary men. They get married and pursue each other at every turn. I can't help but suspect that getting married is a very cheap and easy thing. As long as a man and a woman interact a few times, one of them will definitely fall in love with the other (throughout the whole article, I feel that the only normal people are the protagonists). In the previous article, it was said that excellent female cultivators are rare, but in the following article, there are a bunch of average male cultivators raving about the protagonist and some outstanding women, saying that he wants to catch a lot of women like them. Isn't this a bit inconsistent? I wrote a 1,000-word review for this book. To me, this book is a high start but a low start. I am regretful and disappointed but also somewhat expected. I hope the author can hone his writing skills in the future and clearly remember the setting of the previous article. There are inconsistencies in some places, which makes me feel that the contrast is too great and too unreal. I may not be able to express myself clearly in some places, or the shortcomings I think are foreshadowing for the future, but that can only go so far.
