The Heroine Bai Lian is Trying to Steal Her Luck, but the Senior Sister is Not Used to it and Just Kills Her
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[As expected, she is a vicious female supporting character who has no sympathy for the heroine at all. She is so selfish! [Just wait for the evil girl to be slapped in the face by the heroine, hhh. Looking at the subtitles in front of him, Su Nianchi sneered. She is obviously talented and has a promising future, but she is targeted everywhere because she is not the heroine. Those masters and brothers, who were as close as brothers and family, all criticized and forced her, and ate her flesh and blood steamed buns to pave the way for the heroine. In this case, she is determined to be this vicious female supporting role. The heroine wanted the Tianni Pill, so she stuffed it into her mouth with her backhand Fuck! Is it so exciting? [The evil girl is so shameless that she actually steals the heroine's opportunity! Next, Su Nianchi began to snatch the opportunity of the female host, and took all the spiritual mines, inheritance, treasures, resources, and the position of the sect leader belonging to the female host into his pocket. Relying on her talent, she accidentally became the number one in the world of cultivating immortals, while the heroine was still in the novice village. So what if the heroine is protected by heaven? If you kill a few more times, you will die. Master and junior disciples got rid of the control of the plot and asked for forgiveness? Su Nianchi said: Sorry, I don't accept it! As the plot collapsed, the protagonist group rebelled one after another, or died at the hands of Su Nianchi. Tiandao made a decision in desperation: From now on, you will be the heroine of this world. Su Nianchi smiled evilly: I don't care!
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Official(25)Scraped 4d ago
What kind of unlucky thing did you write? Who do you want to piss off?
No, those barrages are really... Why are you so stupid?
Finally, if there is no plot to kill Tiandao, it would be a bad review.
Can the barrages stop appearing so frequently 😂 It's really annoying
It's nice to look at, but quite rough. But the plot is quite good, the setting and so on. A little curious, Yunyun? There won't be any conflict with the heroine, right? That's bad. There is also the existence of barrage. It is inexplicable why it appears again.
Generally there are many typos, the plot is brainless and the charge is not worth it.
It is recommended to improve the cultivation and combat power system a little more. It's strange. You can go to multi-dimensional and write later. At present, you have only written about the mortal world of immortality and the upper world. The combat power system of the upper world has not been mentioned, but a peak of god transformation, although it is only a few steps away from the breakthrough. It's okay to go to the upper realm, but according to this, the heaven should belong to the people in the upper realm. They shouldn't be so weak. It's very confusing. The characters can be better and more perfect. Mainly, some of the characters are really weird and have a sense of cliché.
The vicious female supporting character slaps her in the face plot is good, but the plot is a bit like children's playing house. . . In the early stage, it felt like everyone had been forcibly depraved. The depictions of the various sects in the lower realm are very flat and not full. The conversations between the senior leaders of each sect are also as pretentious as the aunt at the entrance of the village (maybe because the ones I have seen before are all about saving the world, so I can't stand it). The big sects have no intention of saving the world, and the sect bosses have no idea of accumulating merit? Maybe the author wants to be specific Describe the plot after the heroine ascends? So the plot of the lower world is a transition? Because I didn't watch the end, I just watched the plot of the lower world and couldn't get into it (this is my feeling after watching some plots, and I have no intention of writing negative reviews)
How can you be so grinding? It's really a nameless fire. Which of you two is stronger depends on which one. You've been grinding here for a long time without any results.
Difficult to comment
I don't know why the barrage is so silly, but it doesn't have to be like this to advance the plot.
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Official(25)Scraped 4d ago
What kind of unlucky thing did you write? Who do you want to piss off?
No, those barrages are really... Why are you so stupid?
Finally, if there is no plot to kill Tiandao, it would be a bad review.
Can the barrages stop appearing so frequently 😂 It's really annoying
It's nice to look at, but quite rough. But the plot is quite good, the setting and so on. A little curious, Yunyun? There won't be any conflict with the heroine, right? That's bad. There is also the existence of barrage. It is inexplicable why it appears again.
Generally there are many typos, the plot is brainless and the charge is not worth it.
It is recommended to improve the cultivation and combat power system a little more. It's strange. You can go to multi-dimensional and write later. At present, you have only written about the mortal world of immortality and the upper world. The combat power system of the upper world has not been mentioned, but a peak of god transformation, although it is only a few steps away from the breakthrough. It's okay to go to the upper realm, but according to this, the heaven should belong to the people in the upper realm. They shouldn't be so weak. It's very confusing. The characters can be better and more perfect. Mainly, some of the characters are really weird and have a sense of cliché.
The vicious female supporting character slaps her in the face plot is good, but the plot is a bit like children's playing house. . . In the early stage, it felt like everyone had been forcibly depraved. The depictions of the various sects in the lower realm are very flat and not full. The conversations between the senior leaders of each sect are also as pretentious as the aunt at the entrance of the village (maybe because the ones I have seen before are all about saving the world, so I can't stand it). The big sects have no intention of saving the world, and the sect bosses have no idea of accumulating merit? Maybe the author wants to be specific Describe the plot after the heroine ascends? So the plot of the lower world is a transition? Because I didn't watch the end, I just watched the plot of the lower world and couldn't get into it (this is my feeling after watching some plots, and I have no intention of writing negative reviews)
How can you be so grinding? It's really a nameless fire. Which of you two is stronger depends on which one. You've been grinding here for a long time without any results.
Difficult to comment
I don't know why the barrage is so silly, but it doesn't have to be like this to advance the plot.
