I Am in Huayu, and I Want to Seek Immortality

Speechless, isn't the male protagonist decisive in killing? As soon as he saw the heroine Liu, he became a licker and broke his own bottom line. For example, when he was working as a Mexican drug dealer, no one would answer the phone, but Liu would answer the phone immediately when he called, and there were various other special treatments for Liu. After watching it, I felt that the male protagonist was separated. Normally: a cold-blooded wolfdog with high IQ, sometimes: a little licking dog with a wagging tail.

It's outrageous that a future biopharmaceutical person, equipped with a future artificial intelligence, would be able to sell drugs!

If I understand correctly, the protagonist comes back with a quantum computer and is a top biomedical scientist in the world. Then the protagonist first goes to the entertainment industry, then goes to Mexico to rob, and finally has to find someone else to launder money. Co-authoring a quantum computer is of no use.

The protagonist's character, personality, and behavior will not live forever.

The character design is okay in the front, but it gets worse and worse in the back. He is just a fairy licking the dog.

Please support me!

A story about rebirth and dog licking. The male protagonist is reborn and goes abroad to grab a DF and comes back to lick a fairy. . . Also convinced. .

Came from Shangben The rest of the first book is too much to write. I can write a lot about the protagonist's relationship and seniors in various industries. You can refer to Chang Yu's "I'm Really a Big Star" writing method. The branch plots of various industries can be filled with water. The entertainment industry's later part is no longer exciting, and only the emotional drama is left. Let's talk about this book again The protagonist is made a little less human, like a robot that slowly develops human emotions. It's okay to write like this, but it's very stiff. You can watch "My Robot Girlfriend" filmed by Haruka Ayase, which uses small details in life to make the protagonist slowly become emotional. Don't fall in love with Xiao Liu all of a sudden. Although I also like Xiao Liu, please don't make the plot awkward. If you don't know how to write ambiguous scenes between male and female protagonists, just read the daily interactions of female channel bosses. Let's talk about the career goal of the protagonist: immortality. This goal is not consistent with the character of the protagonist at all. Immortality is a desire and an obsession, nostalgic for the beautiful life in this world. For those who have this goal, you can refer to Emperor Qin and Han Wu who were deceived by taking drugs in their later years, or you can refer to Emperor Shitian in The Wind and Cloud, who all looked like they were going crazy. And what about the protagonist? Like a piece of wood with no desires or demands, how can you have any love for life? Even if he goes abroad to commit crimes and make money, he is like a robot executing orders, not like a person seeking immortality. I suggest that the plot gradually changes to love for the country and contributing to the country's scientific and technological development, which is considered a forced elevation.

The main character, Qiao Qing, is the same as SB. She is nothing but a system. The heroine also has an idiotic character that is not likable at all.

I watched the beginning and my face was full of questions.