Naruto's Strongest Training System
by Black Dragon
About This Novel
The new book "The Promise of Swordsmanship in One Piece" has been released, please watch it. Traveling to the world of Naruto, he became the eldest son of the fourth-generation Hokage Namikaze Minato with the strongest training system. At this time, the Nine-Tails Rebellion has not yet come. Let's see how the protagonist becomes the strongest in a world like Naruto where human life is as insignificant as a piece of cake.
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Official(290)Scraped 1mo ago
Some suggestions for rewriting
I hope that during the Nine-Tails Rebellion, the protagonist will not be too strong and focus on portraying emotions... I hope there will be only one female protagonist (I'm tired of seeing multiple female protagonists), I hope the pig's feet will leave the village (there will be many opportunities...), I hope the protagonist will not have Sharingan eyes and reincarnation eyes (too common...), And the author will create a kind of blood stain... I hope he will not betray Konoha... (Don't delete it this time, it was hard work...)
The main character has black hair?
Why is there a pool of green on Namikaze Minato's head?
Author, can you take a good look at Naruto!
The technique of multiple shadow clones can transfer the things done by the clones and the experience of training to the main body after the clone disappears. So you should write down the memories and experiences of his training and schooling, such as summoning more than 10 shadow clones to practice and then double the experience.
hehe
The author is in my hands, every like feeds the shit.
The pronouns are so confusing, it looks uncomfortable
The pronouns are so confusing, it looks uncomfortable
Didn't it mean that Kushina was weak when she gave birth to a child, so Kyuubi took the opportunity to be sent out?
This water writing skill is so powerful
I just watched it, and I have to say that you have such profound skills. Just the process of opening the Eyes of God made me almost sick (??? Д ????)!!! I was so scared that I took three steps back.
Rubbish
I can write several chapters on one thing, and the ink is like a Korean drama. I always use the personal pronoun "I", which makes me confused. Who the hell is "I"? Who is "I"? If I can't write well, I might as well be a eunuch.
Is the author writing an essay? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Too much for me, change the perspective
The author has a suggestion for you
When Harano Rin and Uchiha Obito died, Namikaze Minato had not yet become the Hokage, and when Harano Rin and Uchiha Obito died, it was the Battle of Kannabi Bridge in World War II. Namikaze Minato only became famous in the Third World War. If Minato Namikaze had a child five years before the Nine-Tails Rebellion, and Harano Rin and Obito Uchiha were still alive at that time, and Minato Namikaze was already Hokage, that would be impossible based on the timeline. In addition, it has been explained in the book of skills that Harano Lin really likes Uchiha Obito, not Kakashi. ! Find mistakes every day!
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Official(290)Scraped 1mo ago
Some suggestions for rewriting
I hope that during the Nine-Tails Rebellion, the protagonist will not be too strong and focus on portraying emotions... I hope there will be only one female protagonist (I'm tired of seeing multiple female protagonists), I hope the pig's feet will leave the village (there will be many opportunities...), I hope the protagonist will not have Sharingan eyes and reincarnation eyes (too common...), And the author will create a kind of blood stain... I hope he will not betray Konoha... (Don't delete it this time, it was hard work...)
The main character has black hair?
Why is there a pool of green on Namikaze Minato's head?
Author, can you take a good look at Naruto!
The technique of multiple shadow clones can transfer the things done by the clones and the experience of training to the main body after the clone disappears. So you should write down the memories and experiences of his training and schooling, such as summoning more than 10 shadow clones to practice and then double the experience.
hehe
The author is in my hands, every like feeds the shit.
The pronouns are so confusing, it looks uncomfortable
The pronouns are so confusing, it looks uncomfortable
Didn't it mean that Kushina was weak when she gave birth to a child, so Kyuubi took the opportunity to be sent out?
This water writing skill is so powerful
I just watched it, and I have to say that you have such profound skills. Just the process of opening the Eyes of God made me almost sick (??? Д ????)!!! I was so scared that I took three steps back.
Rubbish
I can write several chapters on one thing, and the ink is like a Korean drama. I always use the personal pronoun "I", which makes me confused. Who the hell is "I"? Who is "I"? If I can't write well, I might as well be a eunuch.
Is the author writing an essay? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Too much for me, change the perspective
The author has a suggestion for you
When Harano Rin and Uchiha Obito died, Namikaze Minato had not yet become the Hokage, and when Harano Rin and Uchiha Obito died, it was the Battle of Kannabi Bridge in World War II. Namikaze Minato only became famous in the Third World War. If Minato Namikaze had a child five years before the Nine-Tails Rebellion, and Harano Rin and Obito Uchiha were still alive at that time, and Minato Namikaze was already Hokage, that would be impossible based on the timeline. In addition, it has been explained in the book of skills that Harano Lin really likes Uchiha Obito, not Kakashi. ! Find mistakes every day!
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