Fourth Age
by Si Ling
About This Novel
There is a kind of struggle called relying on yourself. Without a backer, you are the mountain. Don't envy other people's wealth and career, because everything has a price. In life, what you sow is what you will reap. To live, you have to build roads across mountains and build bridges across rivers. To live, there is no choice but to be strong.
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Official(8)Scraped 1mo ago
The characters are described as flashy, the narrative speed is a bit fast, and the content that should be written is not written in detail. After reading this chapter, the theme is not prominent and the materials are scattered. Especially the psychological description of the characters is almost blank. The writing level needs to be improved.
The description of the character dialogue is too bland, and the character's personality is not highlighted.
The opening theme is not clear
I think it's pretty
The details that should be written are not written, which reflects that the author is very unfamiliar with the use and mastery of words. Another biggest shortcoming is that he cannot write several things in one chapter, which is neither good nor necessary.
The narrative is flat and straightforward, and the storyline has no ups and downs and no highlights. When reading, the readers cannot appreciate the beauty of literary language. The order of the characters' appearance is a bit confusing. The festive atmosphere of the Mid-Autumn Festival is not written in a solid and detailed manner. The author's writing level is still very poor, very poor. This is a pity for readers.
The scene of the classmates playing around is not vivid, and the writing is a bit cliché. For a high school student, the college entrance examination is a major event in life, so it should be written with focus, and there should be preparation before writing.
The opening chapter describes the scenery of spring. The description is too exaggerated, giving readers an unreal feeling. The plot of the story is recorded like a running account, and it is impossible to tell what the author wants to express. The psychological description of the characters is a bit vague, and I have not yet understood it. It also spans to summer, and the seasons change a bit quickly. Written like this in one chapter, it can be seen that the author has never written a novel before. Such writing techniques are a major failure in writing.
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Official(8)Scraped 1mo ago
The characters are described as flashy, the narrative speed is a bit fast, and the content that should be written is not written in detail. After reading this chapter, the theme is not prominent and the materials are scattered. Especially the psychological description of the characters is almost blank. The writing level needs to be improved.
The description of the character dialogue is too bland, and the character's personality is not highlighted.
The opening theme is not clear
I think it's pretty
The details that should be written are not written, which reflects that the author is very unfamiliar with the use and mastery of words. Another biggest shortcoming is that he cannot write several things in one chapter, which is neither good nor necessary.
The narrative is flat and straightforward, and the storyline has no ups and downs and no highlights. When reading, the readers cannot appreciate the beauty of literary language. The order of the characters' appearance is a bit confusing. The festive atmosphere of the Mid-Autumn Festival is not written in a solid and detailed manner. The author's writing level is still very poor, very poor. This is a pity for readers.
The scene of the classmates playing around is not vivid, and the writing is a bit cliché. For a high school student, the college entrance examination is a major event in life, so it should be written with focus, and there should be preparation before writing.
The opening chapter describes the scenery of spring. The description is too exaggerated, giving readers an unreal feeling. The plot of the story is recorded like a running account, and it is impossible to tell what the author wants to express. The psychological description of the characters is a bit vague, and I have not yet understood it. It also spans to summer, and the seasons change a bit quickly. Written like this in one chapter, it can be seen that the author has never written a novel before. Such writing techniques are a major failure in writing.
