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New article by Shan Zhu. Rebirth, cool articles, strong women, no cp. I like collecting this kind of articles!

[Having gained weight] A charming girl also pretends to be a man This book describes a lot of details, and some of them are very good. For example, the various directions of the characters' states are not abrupt, and what happened is also well-founded. The author explains it very clearly. . One thing is that it is good to have all the details in place, but as a complete story, most of the details must pave the way for the subsequent plot to be considered "competent". In other words, text that has nothing to do with the main and branch plots that will inevitably seem to be missing the word count can actually be omitted appropriately. . Detailedness is an advantage, but if it becomes verbose it will turn off readers. . I won't talk about the specific writing style. Everyone is different, and it's not something that can change just by talking about it, so I'll skip it. . One thing to mention, I hope that the author Da D can think more from the third person when describing the background or culture at that time, so that readers can have a more sense of involvement - for example, the Kangxi mentioned in the character, such as the Qing Dynasty mentioned in the text. These may be talked about in later generations, but in contemporary times, they are not something that can be mentioned directly. Moreover, for example, most ancient sayings about emperors will use the name of the emperor rather than his name. Otherwise, it will be easy to create drama and lack a sense of substitution. . I saw the author Big D recommending himself in the comment area, and I wondered if I had seen it somewhere before. Then I remembered: Oh, it turns out that when I was writing ancient poems, it was included in this author's book list. He was the person who gave me a helping hand along the way when I was young. . Boost, hope not to interrupt updates. . Ps: 1. Being meticulous and being verbose are two different things. Some areas require due attention. 2. The character interactions lack some logic and the supporting characters are a bit facial. 3. The soul of a thousand-year-old insect cannot defeat a reborn little girl. 4. I believe that the author Da D has the heart to improve and bite the bullet with this suggestion. . Otherwise, wouldn't it be more convenient for the order owner to directly receive the order and send friends to recommend it? It also saves people from complaining. But it obviously does not conform to the consistent style of this book. Furthermore, a book list owner who just accepts it without commenting is not a good book list owner~

Self-recommended article, no cp, seedling.

She is obviously a delicate girl, but she pretends to be a man. Escorting the investigation, the emperor is a celebrity. Attracting all forces to win over. Identity exposed, arousing jealousy. All parties besieged him, and in the end, "the fragrance disappeared and the jade was damaged". When he opened his eyes again, the enemy had been buried in the ground. Times have changed, and the world has changed beyond recognition. The proud martial arts became a street performer. After a military parade, he decided to join the army. Sonorous roses, women are not inferior to men. With super strength, she became a female master. It seems like there is no cp, do you guys dare to look at it? (Temporarily recorded for one month)