The Entertainment Circle of Tough Guys

Come on, I've been sick for such a long time and I'm still not dead yet.

The author can make Wolf Warrior 2! ! !

The author said that from the beginning to the time it was put on the shelves, I have to say that they were all pretty good. After it was released, the plot ideas were a bit incoherent. The author said that the writing was troublesome. I felt that it was a hammer here and there, but I felt that it was okay from Charlotte's troubles. It also laid the foreshadowing of tomb robbing and Adamantium alloy. I felt that several tomb robbing movies and Infinity Stones were about to come out, but the hole was not filled and it was about to end... In addition, the personal feelings of the protagonist are attractive, but I always feel that the writing is not smooth when describing them. Especially after a sudden breakthrough, I feel that there is no more description. Although the author said that there will be a satisfactory ending in the end, the feelings come suddenly, the increase is sudden, and the ending is also sudden... Finally, I am definitely not here to complain about something bad. I just saw that the author has opened a new book and I want to say that I must write more in the next book, dig more holes, and then fill them in. As for the protagonist's relationship, I don't know if I should write more or less. The specific balance position can only be determined by the author himself.

If the protagonist is about to die, his female friend, Lily. What will happen to the two of them, and of course the protagonist will live later, but the process is full of expectations!

I want to see how the author writes about the protagonist's illness and how to arrange a reasonable plot.

It won't be the other way around, and otherworldly literature will be brought to Earth and China

To be honest, this book is quite a pity. The foreshadowing was very good, and even the moment Wang Zheng fainted, his tear ducts exploded. But when it comes to describing where he wakes up, the plot is relatively dull, which suddenly makes the expectation much lower. Author, since there is so much foreshadowing, why not start another wave when he wakes up?

First of all, let me ask the author whether this book is a eunuch? Is the author's chapter too short? Do you have three thousand words? If I don't ask you for five thousand, you should at least have three thousand, right? There is also the issue of updates, and I don't want you to be watery!

By the way, this book has already entered the palace, recommended by that fool.

Come on, author!