Rebirth of America, This is My Time

This book is like a biography, not a novel. You don't need to write every little thing clearly, which will make the reader tired. I know that you want to write in detail, but it is too long-winded. For example, the arcade is on track, so you don't need to describe it in detail. No one is interested in writing about the factory. At this time, you should push the company forward and set up research and development tasks, instead of being frightened and suppressed by others. People read novels just for fun. How can you put so much thought into seeing how you write every little thing in such detail?

The main character is like a hyperactive gorilla. He dances with joy about everything beyond his understanding. He would pick people up and jump around in excitement at every turn. He waved his hands excitedly at every turn. Is it that simple to shout to my cousin? He yelled to the lawyer "How is it possible?" And yelled to Steve Jobs "Why are you here?" Emotional writing. All characters are extremely emotional. Everyone shouts without thinking. There is no self-control or the confidence of a reborn person. See too many black aunties

Write something for people to read. I'm not here to study. I'm here to read novels to relax. I wouldn't even come here to study. Thank you.

It's well written. The author is careful and has consulted a lot of information. One step good work.

The biggest problem with this book is that there is too much English. Could it not be translated and written? Does it make it appear that the author has a high degree of education and speaks foreign languages, or that his readers are highly educated and know foreign languages? The reason for not being popular is not only that the writing is too detailed and verbose, but also that your English makes people confused. There are also some abbreviations of place names, country names, and people's names that I really can't understand, which leads to a lack of a sense of substitution. Anyway, there are quite a lot of problems.

When writing a book, write it well, and make an English sentence at every turn, it looks great! [Emot=default,09/]

It's really good to have specific and detailed explanations. The author is very careful.

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I wonder why the protagonist is so excited to see a celebrity? The author is so strange. Especially celebrities or foreigners. In addition, celebrities and protagonists meet so easily. The author's writing is not at all intelligent.

Capitalists are predators of the jungle. When you see the opportunity for Star Wars, you don't take the copyright. You make a game and agree to finish it once. It takes several years to make a movie. You won't make a few more movies with low cost and high box office.