Such a Female Partner for Cultivating Immortals

"Qi Hua doesn't call her junior sister. No one among the outer disciples can be called her like that." How superior she thinks she is "Jin Dan is a genius monk who is about a hundred years old. I don't think she has that ability. Will I lose to ordinary people casually after being taught by my master?" Can I despise others if I reincarnate better? [Emot=default,33/] "They are also meritorious ministers. They can make me discover my shortcomings early. The merits and demerits are equal to each other, so I don't care." Um... Are you the queen? Everyone wants to surround you? [Emot=default,33/] "Little girl, you can call me whatever you want. I asked you to call Chen Li over. Did you hear me?" [Emot=default,02/] She really looks like the original heroine in the female supporting article , so I think this article has incorrect views and is not suitable to read.

The whole novel has more than 900,000 words, and an estimated 300,000 words are unnecessary nonsense. The heroine's master's drama is comparable to that of the heroine. From birth to ascension, there are no fights twice, the treasure is not found twice, and the male protagonist is not clear. It's too childish to take seriously.

There is no problem with the character setting written by the author, and the outline is average. The content is very novel and completely free of cp. The emotional control is not very good and it is not well displayed. This is my feeling after reading the article. Although Hongying has been well taught by Qi Hua and has grown mentally, I don't think it has been a very good growth. Although it is difficult to figure it out alone, it feels like Hongying has been urging Qi Hua. I found this article from beginning to end. Hong Ying has always been by Qi Hua's side. The novel about cultivating immortals in this article is very plain and lacks some intrigues and intrigues. There is a lot written about the knowledge of cultivating immortals, but very little about the plot. There is also very little character interaction, just a lot of nonsense, and it looks like just making up numbers. These are my personal opinions. I found that there are very few authors who write similar articles about no cp. It's really stressful to write without cp, but I found that the author ended the story hastily because it was unfinished. Have you run out of inspiration?

The entire story is narrated from the subjective perspective of the heroine and the master. There is no plot at all. All the supporting characters give people a sense of being seen by passers-by, and the whole story gives people a vague feeling except for the protagonist.

Well, I only read the first part. It was too long-winded, with a lot of narration, and the heroine was a bit mentally retarded, so I didn't read it. (Of course this is just a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

I have always thought that the ugliest thing is this, but the facts still tell me that it can be even uglier! I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters, but I comforted myself that it would be better in the future. Haha, it turned out that I was still too naive! The books I read on QQ are getting uglier and uglier! Personal feeling! ! ! Not recommended

What is that sentence called? Who said that the female protagonist must turn over? This sentence instantly lost interest. If she doesn't turn over, she will wait to die? What is a female supporting role? Even if there is a female protagonist, it is called a female supporting role if she fails to fight against the female protagonist and is killed. If there is no female protagonist, then it is not called a female supporting role. If you don't stand up, you don't make progress, so what's the point? Since you are the female supporting character, it doesn't mean that if you don't want to cause trouble, he will be fine. Bye-Bye

The content of the article written by the author is good, but there is a problem with the expression. I feel like I keep reading the narration, and I can't grasp the key points. There is no ** part. I feel that it is always dull and it is really wearing my patience.

Just my personal opinion: In this book, the Qingyun Sect's feelings for the heroine are motivated by interests. Personally, I don't feel it is true, and the emotions change from complex to pure; there are too many details; the heroine has not killed anyone in more than a hundred chapters, so she is willing to make sacrifices for her parents' feelings and the interests of the sect. This is fine, barely considered as repayment, but she is still fighting against the injustice. Without the guidance of her master, her character is not stable, and it is unclear. How does a person like Bai raise his mood? In contrast to Tang Yunqing, the heroine is really silly and sweet. She is naive to a certain level and is a bit incapable of acceptance. She likes to complain and is not very active in cultivation. She needs to be forced by the master in many places. Moreover, it is not clear how the heroine can change from being able to live for hundreds of years to being firm in cultivation... It seems so nonsense! This is just my personal opinion. I have read a lot of articles about cultivating immortals. Maybe this book is not suitable for me.

I was an adult before, but I still have such idiotic thoughts. It's so outrageous. I personally can't agree with it. These three views are simply a waste of time.