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Are you sure the heroine was born in 1981 and traveled through time in 2017? The heroine must be 36 years old

The heroine's frequent noisy comments are a bit annoying, and she feels a bit discriminated against this era, but she often praises this era, which is a bit contradictory. If you complain once or twice, forget about it. You often have to compare it with modern times. If you can compare, why bother distinguishing eras? Every era has its own characteristics. Sometimes what looks good now may be fancy clothes in that era.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but it felt so-so in the middle. I wanted to read a fantasy novel about time travel with Golden Finger.

The title is too awkward. Since she is the younger sister, why can't she be addressed from the younger sister's perspective? It would be nice to mention which relative of yours it is from time to time. Why do you always use the name of your previous life?

When I first started watching it, it was okay. The heroine's father's name in her previous life always changed, sometimes Yang Qitai and sometimes Yang Qimin.

Is there a male protagonist?

It feels like a bit of a bystander

At the beginning, when the heroine comes back from time travel, you can introduce her brother as her former father. The relatives in the future are still called the same as before the time travel. It always seems as if she is still her brother's daughter, but now she is the youngest sister in the family, and it is easy to make a scene.

Dear author, your writing is very good, but one bad thing is that there are too many narrations. After reading more than ten or twenty chapters, there are only a few words spoken. If you can change it, it will be better.

Very well written, I hope it will be updated soon