A Passerby's Story of Cultivating Immortality
About This Novel
There are emotional scenes and male protagonists in the extras. Thank you for your support of the new book "She Plays Games in the Immortal World". Travel into the world of cultivating immortals in the book and become a passerby who receives a box lunch before appearing. I know the direction of the story in the book, as well as the fate and opportunities of the important characters, but my own future is completely unknown. Thanks to the ancient inheritance, I can build my own paradise of cave heaven, play around in the Immortal Cultivation Continent, and embark on the road to becoming an immortal.
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Official(127)Scraped 11d ago
There is no rejection reaction, and there is no feeling that I have taken away the original owner. Does that mean that the heroine and the original owner are actually the same person? It's just that after she died in her previous life, she was reborn as a baby in this world, but the baby was too young to bear her mental power, so the memory of her previous life was automatically sealed. When she encountered danger, the memory was unsealed. In fact, Xu Lingwei was her, she was Xu Lingwei, but it looked like she had taken over her body?
The male protagonist seems to be bowing down to the female protagonist! ! ! !
As soon as the male protagonist appears, the female protagonist is wise. And starting from the emotional line between the female protagonist and Jiang Jincheng, the heroine's design is shattered. She is convinced that she might as well be with the original male protagonist. I can understand if there is a male protagonist, you write yours and I read mine, but but but! ! ! But why was the heroine forcibly reduced to intelligence and her character destroyed? I can't understand that at first the heroine lives for strength, but later she lives for love, as if she can't live without the hero. She even loses focus on practicing. Moreover, the hero never trusts the heroine, and even suspects, doubts and fears the heroine. This... This...? ? The most incomprehensible thing is that the couple separated because of their children. Two monks who cultivated immortality separated because the heroine could not have children? ? ? What? ? ? For a moment, I felt that the two of them were immortals who cultivated in the Qing Dynasty. The plot of torture and love purely for the sake of torture is true and I can't appreciate it. I will avoid this book and this author in the future. I can't appreciate it, so as not to be upset after reading it.
It is a hover car and it has mental power. Xu Lingwei should have come from the interstellar era. Even if it is not that technology, it should be close. After all, mental power has been unlocked. Mental power is actually equivalent to the consciousness of cultivating immortals. Xu Lingwei has unlocked mental power and seems to be able to use it freely. Her cultivation journey must be easier than that of the original owner.
It would be better if there was no male protagonist
Every time I see the male protagonist's plot, I can't stand it. The male protagonist is really too greasy. I skipped to watch the ending after watching it because I really didn't want to see the plot about the male protagonist.
The writing was good at the beginning, but collapsed at the end.
Halfway through the book, I really can't stand it anymore. The heroine in the previous chapter is a wise and determined person, but she started to collapse after the master's wife got into the inner demon circle. When it comes to the relationship, the heroine becomes a bit crazy and forcefully subdues her wits. In the article, the heroine and the male partner are all hesitant, which completely extinguishes the image of the heroine in the previous article, and I can't remember it at all.
The male protagonist is a failure
The heroine I wrote earlier is too independent. What a great heroine! Later, when I met the male protagonist, his IQ dropped completely. If there is no male protagonist, you can still read this book.
Is this the rhythm of fast travel, running through different interfaces and worlds? How do you feel about the sudden change in painting style?
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I liked this book very much at the beginning. I felt that the protagonist was very straightforward and acted in a measured and principled manner. There were no faults in her sentences or anything like that. However, the heroine became more and more broken towards the end, which made me feel uncomfortable even while reading. It's not that we don't write emotional dramas, it's that these emotional dramas cannot be said to be inappropriate for practitioners, they can only be said to be off the mark. It's full of unspoken words, it's sticky and greasy, and there are all kinds of misunderstandings. It's like the old lady's foot-binding cloth turned into essence. It's torn, smelly, and very long. Once it's pulled out, all that's left is a deformed old orange. Isn't that still a foot? What about cultivating immortality? What about the avenue? How about taking such a great opportunity and playing with a great inheritance? It has become a simulation drama of workplace + breeding + sadomasochism + family ethics drama. It is similar to the village mentioned by the wife before, but with the addition of a poor scholar character.
The article is very nice
Advice for authors Dear author, your will is too unstable to be led by the readers' opinions. What we want to read is the article you wrote, not the article customized according to the readers' requirements. The heroine you write is obviously a heroine who loves life and values emotions, but she insists on writing a story without love. How can you write it? . My love for cats is also very awkward. I am too attached to cats, yet I write cats so independent. . The same goes for friendship. I am very attached to my friends. Therefore, the heroine is a very emotional person, so the emotional scene was forcibly deleted, which made that section extremely awkward. . Score dropped a lot. . But you are not the only author who writes like this. It is probably because too many people are clamoring for a male protagonist, and the language is so poisonous that it seriously affects the author's creation! I have noticed that this happens to several authors' articles. They clearly want to express their opinions emotionally, but their ears are always listening to their opinions. As a result, everyone is dissatisfied with the article. I think the author of online articles should have a firm and strong heart. I think the comments on some articles are excessive. However, the author is great, so hold on. I hope you can also be firm in your thoughts. . It is not good to listen too much to the extreme opinions of readers. Some suggestions or unreasonable suggestions can be referred to, while others need not be ignored. . I hope the next article will be better. .
Very good article
The heroine works hard and has very upright views. His growth process is also very exciting, and he grows step by step. I saw a real world of cultivation, which is the emotional development of the male and female protagonists, which is a bit abrupt. But overall it's okay. By the way, I'd like to say that Zhen Shui is so cute.
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Official(127)Scraped 11d ago
There is no rejection reaction, and there is no feeling that I have taken away the original owner. Does that mean that the heroine and the original owner are actually the same person? It's just that after she died in her previous life, she was reborn as a baby in this world, but the baby was too young to bear her mental power, so the memory of her previous life was automatically sealed. When she encountered danger, the memory was unsealed. In fact, Xu Lingwei was her, she was Xu Lingwei, but it looked like she had taken over her body?
The male protagonist seems to be bowing down to the female protagonist! ! ! !
As soon as the male protagonist appears, the female protagonist is wise. And starting from the emotional line between the female protagonist and Jiang Jincheng, the heroine's design is shattered. She is convinced that she might as well be with the original male protagonist. I can understand if there is a male protagonist, you write yours and I read mine, but but but! ! ! But why was the heroine forcibly reduced to intelligence and her character destroyed? I can't understand that at first the heroine lives for strength, but later she lives for love, as if she can't live without the hero. She even loses focus on practicing. Moreover, the hero never trusts the heroine, and even suspects, doubts and fears the heroine. This... This...? ? The most incomprehensible thing is that the couple separated because of their children. Two monks who cultivated immortality separated because the heroine could not have children? ? ? What? ? ? For a moment, I felt that the two of them were immortals who cultivated in the Qing Dynasty. The plot of torture and love purely for the sake of torture is true and I can't appreciate it. I will avoid this book and this author in the future. I can't appreciate it, so as not to be upset after reading it.
It is a hover car and it has mental power. Xu Lingwei should have come from the interstellar era. Even if it is not that technology, it should be close. After all, mental power has been unlocked. Mental power is actually equivalent to the consciousness of cultivating immortals. Xu Lingwei has unlocked mental power and seems to be able to use it freely. Her cultivation journey must be easier than that of the original owner.
It would be better if there was no male protagonist
Every time I see the male protagonist's plot, I can't stand it. The male protagonist is really too greasy. I skipped to watch the ending after watching it because I really didn't want to see the plot about the male protagonist.
The writing was good at the beginning, but collapsed at the end.
Halfway through the book, I really can't stand it anymore. The heroine in the previous chapter is a wise and determined person, but she started to collapse after the master's wife got into the inner demon circle. When it comes to the relationship, the heroine becomes a bit crazy and forcefully subdues her wits. In the article, the heroine and the male partner are all hesitant, which completely extinguishes the image of the heroine in the previous article, and I can't remember it at all.
The male protagonist is a failure
The heroine I wrote earlier is too independent. What a great heroine! Later, when I met the male protagonist, his IQ dropped completely. If there is no male protagonist, you can still read this book.
Is this the rhythm of fast travel, running through different interfaces and worlds? How do you feel about the sudden change in painting style?
Pity
I liked this book very much at the beginning. I felt that the protagonist was very straightforward and acted in a measured and principled manner. There were no faults in her sentences or anything like that. However, the heroine became more and more broken towards the end, which made me feel uncomfortable even while reading. It's not that we don't write emotional dramas, it's that these emotional dramas cannot be said to be inappropriate for practitioners, they can only be said to be off the mark. It's full of unspoken words, it's sticky and greasy, and there are all kinds of misunderstandings. It's like the old lady's foot-binding cloth turned into essence. It's torn, smelly, and very long. Once it's pulled out, all that's left is a deformed old orange. Isn't that still a foot? What about cultivating immortality? What about the avenue? How about taking such a great opportunity and playing with a great inheritance? It has become a simulation drama of workplace + breeding + sadomasochism + family ethics drama. It is similar to the village mentioned by the wife before, but with the addition of a poor scholar character.
The article is very nice
Advice for authors Dear author, your will is too unstable to be led by the readers' opinions. What we want to read is the article you wrote, not the article customized according to the readers' requirements. The heroine you write is obviously a heroine who loves life and values emotions, but she insists on writing a story without love. How can you write it? . My love for cats is also very awkward. I am too attached to cats, yet I write cats so independent. . The same goes for friendship. I am very attached to my friends. Therefore, the heroine is a very emotional person, so the emotional scene was forcibly deleted, which made that section extremely awkward. . Score dropped a lot. . But you are not the only author who writes like this. It is probably because too many people are clamoring for a male protagonist, and the language is so poisonous that it seriously affects the author's creation! I have noticed that this happens to several authors' articles. They clearly want to express their opinions emotionally, but their ears are always listening to their opinions. As a result, everyone is dissatisfied with the article. I think the author of online articles should have a firm and strong heart. I think the comments on some articles are excessive. However, the author is great, so hold on. I hope you can also be firm in your thoughts. . It is not good to listen too much to the extreme opinions of readers. Some suggestions or unreasonable suggestions can be referred to, while others need not be ignored. . I hope the next article will be better. .
Very good article
The heroine works hard and has very upright views. His growth process is also very exciting, and he grows step by step. I saw a real world of cultivation, which is the emotional development of the male and female protagonists, which is a bit abrupt. But overall it's okay. By the way, I'd like to say that Zhen Shui is so cute.
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This new book, Little Seedlings, is quite interesting. The writing is okay. Although quite short. The author has also written several books. Replacements should be guaranteed.
A time-travel novel about a female protagonist. The heroine travels to a fairy-cultivating novel and becomes cannon fodder who is killed by the female protagonist at the beginning. Moreover, it is the story of the heroine struggling to survive when her storage bag is robbed and she is about to die.
A time-travel novel about a female protagonist. The heroine travels to a fairy-cultivating novel and becomes cannon fodder who is killed by the female protagonist at the beginning. Moreover, it is the story of the heroine struggling to survive when her storage bag is robbed and she is about to die.
It was pretty good in the early stages, but after the love line was introduced, readers were more dissatisfied, so the author ended it very early, which was a bit of a pity, but it was still worth reading.
