The System is Toxic and the Top System is a Goddess

In fact, my dear, your first plane is quite well written, the foreshadowing is well laid out, and the ending is well wrapped up. However, you may not have noticed that when you start the second plane, you are a little impatient. The identity of the heroine was well buried, but maybe because the review section of this book is too deserted, you can't wait to bring out the heroine's experience. Because of this, if the heroine's experience is slightly inconsistent with her personality, it will make people feel emmmm nondescript (maybe the words are not very appropriate 😂) Coupled with some weird plot developments, it feels even more weird. And the guy in the second dimension, the guy named Lin Shan, I think is very hypocritical. On the one hand, he takes the initiative to seduce the guy, but on the other hand, he finds out that the guy likes him (ahem, this is not the other☺), so he says to the guy: I thought you were different from others. . . I think that's enough. He was obviously the one who took the initiative to seduce the male protagonist. And coupled with this group of strange names. . . . Maybe I really like historical figures, but I still feel uncomfortable with them. And the character of the heroine in the second plane is a little strange. Although being a fairy is easy to do, the heroine is not designed to coax a child into turning into a dragon. It would be fine if this was really the plane of Qin Shihuang, but this is a modern plane. . . And don't you think that people in the plane accept gods too quickly? After all, we are in an anti-feudal society. Emmmmmmmmmmm That's probably all. It's my first time to write a long review. I don't know how to write it better. I can only write what comes to mind. I hope it's not bad.

Go, this is really okay. The last story is actually about male-male love. Maybe I am narrow-minded. I don't like this feeling of using good things casually. Moreover, there is always a feeling that the heroine's gang does not take the heroine's things seriously. They give them away as much as they want, and they give them away so casually. And there are only two stories in total. Both stories are about people who are crazy about love. This is really like death without love.

The first story is very good, but the second story I think Yingzheng is a bit selfish. Although he has a good relationship with the heroine, he shouldn't take things without asking. He could ask the heroine if he wants to give it to her. He also thinks that the heroine has a lot of treasures and it would be stingy not to give it to him. Can he not give it to him? Obviously he didn't even ask, but he almost killed others. I don't like this a bit

Damn, your writing is actually very good, but there are too few chapters. It ends before I'm satisfied with it. It's such a pity.

Yu Shuifan is both a god and a system, with its own bugs. But she intervenes in the task plane with her true body, more like a guide, guiding the client to achieve his or her wish (the client encounters force majeure factors, and Yu Shuifan solves them). The client's story is not about the past life, but the first half of his life. As for the future, with divine help, my own abilities (potential) are not bad...

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking😊

The last picture that was swallowed. . I hope it won't be swallowed this time.

Good, good, good, good, good, good

No ending. . . . . . .