Primordial Yuanlong

The author will not become a saint until it is almost finished. . . Can I say something haha, and your writing is also very good. You only wrote more than 40 chapters before Nuwa became a saint. You simply mentioned Pangu's creation of heaven and earth in one stroke. You didn't write about the fight between Hongjun Taoist and Demon Ancestor Luohu. To be honest, the whole text is like an outline compiled by your author, but it's not the same! Let's not talk about other things. According to your book, the protagonist is considered the first dragon before the world began. However, I don't understand. It takes tens of millions of years of cultivation to become a saint. Instead of writing 23,000 chapters, you can at least write more than 1,000 chapters. You can only mention many things in one stroke. What's the point? To be honest, I read novels just for fun and pleasure. And the author, what do you think is the use of the protagonist traveling through the prehistoric world and being reborn? He relies on familiarity with the future to become a saint by the end of the novel. To be honest: this is the most stupid prehistoric novel I have ever read (I won't call you rubbish, because writing a book is not easy). I hope you, the author, can write better in your future novels, okay?

Author, this book of yours is the one I've read that makes me want to beat someone the most. My wife was kidnapped, and I went to relax myself. I'm so damn interested in the mosquitoes. I'm really drunk.

The writing is really disgusting. The pig's feet were born earlier than the ancestral dragon. Even though he couldn't escape the dragon and phoenix disaster, he still relied on the ancestral witch to survive. What a rubbish novel.

It's really sick that my daughter-in-law can be married to someone else. Anyway, I don't think a man can do it!

Ungrateful, do what you dare but don't deserve it, bad review.

Author, how do you feel when your book is sprayed?

This book is so scolding that I really can't stand it anymore. Too useless. What a sadist.

It's so disgusting, you've reached a certain level of cowardice, and you obviously like Houtu, but you're afraid of that, so don't flirt with him, and then you have sex with Xihe, and you're not responsible for what happened, and you just look at the top of a prairie, and you've never seen such a disgusting scumbag.

Garbage This is the most garbage book I have ever read in Honghuangliu!

I read this book several years ago, and I thought it was good. Now that I have found it, all I see are criticisms. Here I will speak for the author. Before writing a novel, an author must establish a general network structure for the plot development of the novel. He must think carefully about it and use it as the general outline of the novel. Therefore, if the author arranges for the protagonist to be "cowardly" in character, he will also follow this "general outline". For readers to deny or question the protagonist setting of the current novel because they are used to seeing the protagonist in the novel being always strong and pretentious. It is really something that obsessive-compulsive disorder will do. Besides, there are also times when the protagonist in the novel is full of responsibilities. For example, when the protagonist is his first wife, the ancestral witch empress Tu, who resists disaster, and when he learns that there is a woman Yue Mei who may have a relationship with a certain boss he cannot afford to offend, and is unfavorable to the people around him, he almost kills that woman. , And some people are impatient and come out to talk nonsense before they finish reading, and they are also drunk. .