The Evil Concubine is Coming: Prince, Please Accept the Move

Ah! I finished reading ~ I was hooked as soon as I saw it. I have to say that it really made me laugh and cry at times. I am more emotional and laugh less than tears. I hope their relationship will go smoothly. It was so confusing to watch, but the male protagonist had an unforgettable first love and died because of him. It is better to be together. It's very difficult. It seems that Qianqian is being abused now. I hope that there will be abuse in the future (sneaky smile😂). I have an ominous premonition. I feel that Zha Ruoyanru's death seems to be another abuse. The author is still in school. Jiang Zi's code wording is so lucky. The author pays attention to rest~

After seeing the bad reviews, I couldn't help but cheer for Ruoli. She is a student party member, and the school does not allow her to bring mobile phones, so she can only code at home on Sundays. Do you know what it feels like to sit in front of a computer all the time? She has been typing on the keyboard. She is only in the first grade of junior high school. Once you are in the second year of junior high school, your studies will be even tighter. Why didn't he give up? Because she loved these words. This is her hard work. She would draw for a long time to come up with ideas. She is only a teenager and her writing is much better than mine. I have always admired Ruoli. Come on, Nanmu is here, good night.

[Knocking on the blackboard] I have only read the first three chapters, so I will include any shortcomings. From the perspective of a semi-professional appreciation article, this article is still very good. First, the first chapter clearly explains the background and specific main lines of the story. The author Ruoli's language is concise but delicate. However, the only drawback is that the heroine's time travel is relatively trance-like? Was it such a happy time travel? Excuse me? Ahem... And the heroine wasn't always a very powerful killer agent before she traveled through time. She had a skill that allowed her to thrive in another world~ The heroine's identity seems to be quite ordinary... But later on, the heroine should be unique. Moreover, several of the author's first three chapters are written in the first person, which seems really awkward to me. The first person is ruined a lot. I suggest you change the person to the third person as much as possible. Although this article is a time-travel article, the first few chapters are a bit too cheerful at the beginning. The author can start the joyful escape route after one or twenty chapters. The first few chapters of the time-travel article are relatively rigorous. The first few chapters are relatively cheerful at the beginning, which can easily make readers think that the author may be a new author who has just entered the online literary world. The male protagonist's appearance of low-key luxury has connotation, but... The possibility of falling in love at first sight is still relatively small, and the emotional foundation should be slowly laid down in the later chapters. Moreover, there are not many gorgeous words to describe the male and female protagonists, but the impression of the male and female protagonists is deeply impressed in the mind. The author Ruoli did a good job in this, it is great~~ All in all, the writing is great. I especially like the author's writing style. The writing style is grand and smooth, and the words are delicate and capable, which shows the author's hard work behind the scenes! I hope Ruoli can continue to work hard and work harder. If you want to live a life you have never had before, you must do things you have never done. Ruoli, you only need to work hard and leave the rest to time. Ruoli is a very potential author, and the charm of her words is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. I wish Evil Concubine a great success! ! ! I wish Ruoli continue to work hard! Become a god soon! ! !

I don't want Qiandu to ruin Qianlan and Jun Yan's love

Tsk tsk, my heart is hurt... I vomited blood and died. Don't miss me too much~ Just burn more paper money, Crab

Who is the woman in Jun Yan's memory?

Really good, this is the first time I've seen this kind of article.

Why are both of them dead∏_∏

Ah, Qian Lan was shot to death by an arrow, what should I do? Jun Yan, hurry up and save your wife, she's almost gone.

The ending was so tragic that I almost cried. In fact, the author, you can also add some extra stories, I think it will be better...