The Wonderful Life of Xu Damao, Full of Love in the Courtyard
by Shi Wei
About This Novel
Traveling through "The Courtyard of Love", he became Xu Damao and was in a panic! !
What Readers Think
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Official(78)Scraped 19d ago
The author should first study his expression skills.
Anyway, I was dizzy when I saw it, the content was messy and the logic was confusing, going here and there. I read a few chapters very carefully and had no idea what the author was going to write.
You are really good at writing 500 words in one chapter.
The content is not good. The word count is also small. One chapter of "Eagle" has ten thousand words. Five hundred for you. .
How to see if there is no system. Let's look at a eunuch protagonist.
There is no sense of involvement, and a man who cannot have children does not have a golden finger.
rotten
The writing is bad enough, so I'll give it to you in five-star installments.
The writing is really bad, there is nothing that can be read. At the beginning, you actually want to apologize to Silly Pillar? Really funny
I have read five or six books about Xu Damao. Although this one is a bit rough, the quality is indeed good, at least compared with other books about Xu Damao.
What are you writing about?
It makes my head hurt to watch. Wrote blindly and messily.
So embarrassing
The narrative is unclear, and there are too many inner monologues. The reader is confused, including the New Year's money and the fight between relatives. I really can't understand how it started and how it ended. In that era, state-owned property was invaded and so much was stolen. I read a few chapters in a daze, and it turned out that Silly Zhu and Qin Huairu both went home. I'm so good, so awesome.
Difference
No one with any brains can stand it.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! !
Rating
Community(0)
Official(78)Scraped 19d ago
The author should first study his expression skills.
Anyway, I was dizzy when I saw it, the content was messy and the logic was confusing, going here and there. I read a few chapters very carefully and had no idea what the author was going to write.
You are really good at writing 500 words in one chapter.
The content is not good. The word count is also small. One chapter of "Eagle" has ten thousand words. Five hundred for you. .
How to see if there is no system. Let's look at a eunuch protagonist.
There is no sense of involvement, and a man who cannot have children does not have a golden finger.
rotten
The writing is bad enough, so I'll give it to you in five-star installments.
The writing is really bad, there is nothing that can be read. At the beginning, you actually want to apologize to Silly Pillar? Really funny
I have read five or six books about Xu Damao. Although this one is a bit rough, the quality is indeed good, at least compared with other books about Xu Damao.
What are you writing about?
It makes my head hurt to watch. Wrote blindly and messily.
So embarrassing
The narrative is unclear, and there are too many inner monologues. The reader is confused, including the New Year's money and the fight between relatives. I really can't understand how it started and how it ended. In that era, state-owned property was invaded and so much was stolen. I read a few chapters in a daze, and it turned out that Silly Zhu and Qin Huairu both went home. I'm so good, so awesome.
Difference
No one with any brains can stand it.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! !
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