Empire from Scratch

I was the second person to comment. This book is still very nice. I can recommend it. You can take a look. I think it's still okay. I don't know if you like it or not. Come on, author! ,, . . . .

It's incredible that I was the first person to comment.

It's okay. There are currently more than 60 chapters. Reading is relatively smooth and there are no obvious problems. At the moment, I am looking forward to the future development. At the same time, I am worried about the author's ability to control. After all, the background is relatively large at present. It will definitely be a continental hegemony in the future. Also, the pace is relatively slow. Moreover, the struggle with local forces in the early stages of the territory is not very well written. The only thing that I personally feel is not smooth is that the protagonist keeps saying that he doesn't want to be like those nobles but has no choice in order to survive. I think this should be shown in actions, rather than words or mental thoughts. It can be expressed in some plots. Although it is included in the article, I feel that the writing may not be strong enough. It feels like it is a plot that is forced to express this idea. Especially the plot after arriving at the territory. The previous one, especially the scene when he was assassinated, I think is good. The plot clearly shows all kinds of doubts and worries due to lack of understanding of the world, and puts one's own safety as the first factor, and calmly thinks about it after being unable to escape. I feel it is very good. Anyway, keep working hard. I'm looking forward to it.

Keep up the good work, author👍👍👍

I personally think this book is okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Good books will always pay off one day. I support you.

The result was vomiting. It's all a routine, very rigid. It's not like they dismembered people and vomited them. If you say you have never killed anyone and you feel uncomfortable after killing someone, then you should be as depressed as Xu Sanduo. Besides, you killed someone calmly and didn't dismember the person, so why would you vomit? The protagonist you set is not a kind-hearted person like Xu Sanduo. He kills people. How can he vomit as long as he is not too perverted?

It feels pretty good, come on! 😹👍😽