Super Four-dimensional Props

It's okay, the ideas are novel and the writing is fairly fluent. There is a lot of room for improvement, and the description of the environment and the characterization are not attractive enough. Of course, this idea is worthy of praise. If the next ideas are like this, and there is enough writing to control this article, then he will become a god. This book is probably the author's first novel. Wait for the second or third novel. After that, after enough training and the writing becomes more mature, it will be the time to become a god. Now, continue to exercise, and I wish the author to make progress every day.

For me, who grew up watching Doraemon, the props in this book bring back childhood memories.

Although I am not satisfied with the plot, I can still read Shuhuang.

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