Quickly Wear It, She is Beautiful

Linger, I lost my life, my country, and you. Ling'er, you know, I am happy for you. These two paragraphs look so sad.

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[Looking for Dreams] Before looking for dreams, she followed her in her elegant red dress and frowned. Drinking heavily today, I want to be an emperor, I am in a cold building, my heart is calm, but now the prosperity is gone, I am just a guest in a dream, and the distant mountains are full of green branches. [Qi Kuo] The Buddha said that when conditions come together, they come into existence, and when conditions disperse, they perish. However, if I hold on to my lingering thoughts for a lifetime, everything that cannot be penetrated is empty. I hope the letter will be white and broad, and the tenderness will not wither the youth. --Ban you alone and quiet Xiaoxiao's writing is very good, and this book is a well-written work. 1 Although the selection of materials is ordinary, there is always a touch of poetry in the writing, which makes people feel like they are immersed in ink paintings. [2] The description of the environment and details is also very good. A few simple descriptions of the environment always make the article more vivid. [3] The extra chapter is very good, each character has a good ending, and there is also sadness in reading it, which shows Xiaoxiao's delicate and gentle mind. However, the article still has some shortcomings: First, the interweaving of the main and dark lines is not prominent enough. Generally speaking, a text rich in foreshadowing can most affect the reader's interest in reading. Second, if we only look at the style of writing, sometimes it is ancient, and sometimes it is more modern, which can easily lead to a lack of coherence in the article. However, this should change with the situation and the specific situation. Generally speaking, the problem is not big. Xiaoxiao's writing has a complete structure, the plot is quite attractive, the writing is gentle, and she is good at using poetic and hazy literary language, which makes people feel very comfortable. Nanqiao is willing to make friends with Xiaoxiao, and hopes that Xiaoxiao can continue to update articles and not give up. This review is just Nanqiao's humble opinion. If you don't like it, you can delete it.

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The author's writing style is very good, and I like this type of novel very much. After all, this is the first time I read this novel, and the plot is also vividly described. There are always some characters in the author's novels that are particularly described with a clean and pure temperament. But why! ! ! Why! ! ! Why! ! ! No extra chapter? ? ? ! ! ! This baby said he was very unhappy, why not? Why do they say that if they don't like the author of the extra chapter, why don't you write it? This way you will sting my heart severely. I think those extra chapters are very good. But why didn't the author write more! ! ? ? ? I said I was very depressed. . . . . I think the extra chapters are very, very good. Why don't you like them? I don't think these extra chapters are just to make up the word count! Why is there no extra chapter! ! ! The author appreciates me! Strongly opposed! ! ! I want to read the extra chapter! ! ! Gu Qingjing, the author, why don't you write it~ Author, I will give you a lollipop to eat, so please take pity on me. As a little reader, I really, really, really want to read the extra chapters of all the characters. . . . .

The author's writing is very detailed and very good, but I really want to know in which plane the male protagonist first appeared. I have already seen the Ghost Festival. According to my understanding, the male protagonist has never appeared before! The lack of a clear emotional line makes me suffer! ! ! ! !

The emotional line is very slow to develop, and the part of "Begonia" is not very clear; I feel a bit depressed when reading each story. They are still living their own lives, and the heroine dies alone. Each way of death has the feeling that the world is impermanent and the beauty is unlucky. In fact, I would rather the heroine die vigorously... (Purely my personal opinion)

I originally thought the second story was particularly well written, but the male protagonist loved the female protagonist deeply and had only a weak affection for Zi Ling. I was dissatisfied. I was fully expecting to make him fall deeply in love with Zi Ling and torture the female protagonist. But who knows, what kind of accelerator was used to directly omit the plot and make it top-heavy. The plot was introduced in just a few sentences and the two of them were together! ! What the hell? ! In other Kuai Chuan stories, the mission heroine is allowed to integrate her own emotions so that she can achieve the goal of torturing the scumbag white lotus and the scheming bitch to make herself happy. On the contrary, in your story, the mission heroine is not allowed to use her emotions, and everything in the plot is bland. So how can you touch people's hearts and move readers! ! !

I like this novel written by the author. The descriptions are very accurate and the feeling is very different. Zi Ling was originally a commander, but because he mistakenly entered a forbidden place and saw the Emperor of Heaven breaking the barrier of the world, he went to the Immortal Execution Platform. Later, he had an adventure and started a strange journey to slowly come into contact with people and human nature. Looking forward to the exciting interface later! ! !

The author is great, I hope that the female protagonist can get married and have children, and then wait until the male protagonist of that world dies to gain system space🌚