First Love
by Yuan Qian
About This Novel
Please bookmark the new book "Jinzhang Chunman". When the fake miracle doctor encounters a real hidden disease - Your Majesty, it really doesn't have to be so troublesome to treat your disease! -------- Sun Miaoxi died of a broken heart in her previous life, and she is trying her best to get revenge in this life. What? He actually said everything was just a misunderstanding? Hey, you prince, my biggest wish in this life is to kill you, so you still want to chase me? The shameless guy actually said, "As long as you marry me, it's up to you"... Damn, I just want to kill you, okay? ! This is a happy story about misunderstanding and hatred, and finally the reunion.
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Official(10)Scraped 1mo ago
The plot is a bit confusing, especially the second half
The overall outline is good, but the details of the scenes are not enough. It feels like the story is not driven by the plot, but one story after another. I feel that there are many plots that I want to write but are not complete and careful. The names are always wrong. There is also a supporting character who says he wants to kill himself (actually he wants to kill the heroine). The supporting characters also appear in strange ways and leave the scene inexplicably. Those who clearly want to harm the heroine are inexplicably quiet. The second half of the plot is even more confusing, with all kinds of nonsense, amnesia, and separation. , Was disabled, and recovered quickly. The article said that it would take half a year to deliver the news that the male protagonist was disabled. Information transmission is the fastest, okay? The female protagonist said she believed in the male protagonist when something happened, and even told others that she had to confront him face to face so that there would be no misunderstanding. Later, she was provoked but did not That's the thing, the foreshadowing is buried abruptly, and the supporting characters have too many settings and can't advance the story. Especially the production part, if the author hadn't kept talking about taking care of children, it really doesn't look like it was written by an experienced person, and he would have talked so much nonsense during the production. . Reading is just a way to pass the time
It's really, really, really beautiful.
I don't know what it's about. After reading Chapter 2, I decided to give up on the show. It was too confusing.
The chapters are too messy and I can't figure out what the author wrote.
The story is okay
But the plot is really confusing. I can't explain what exactly happened, and then it's all mixed up. It always feels weird to watch it.
How come your novel is so fragmented?
How come your novel is so fragmented?
Come on come on come on. . . .
The plot jumps too fast and looks very confusing
Passing by, passing by, checking in by the way.
It's so expensive, I can't stand it
Nonsense
The logic seems to make sense but there is actually something wrong with it. It's a waste of money and time, not worth watching.
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 1mo ago
The plot is a bit confusing, especially the second half
The overall outline is good, but the details of the scenes are not enough. It feels like the story is not driven by the plot, but one story after another. I feel that there are many plots that I want to write but are not complete and careful. The names are always wrong. There is also a supporting character who says he wants to kill himself (actually he wants to kill the heroine). The supporting characters also appear in strange ways and leave the scene inexplicably. Those who clearly want to harm the heroine are inexplicably quiet. The second half of the plot is even more confusing, with all kinds of nonsense, amnesia, and separation. , Was disabled, and recovered quickly. The article said that it would take half a year to deliver the news that the male protagonist was disabled. Information transmission is the fastest, okay? The female protagonist said she believed in the male protagonist when something happened, and even told others that she had to confront him face to face so that there would be no misunderstanding. Later, she was provoked but did not That's the thing, the foreshadowing is buried abruptly, and the supporting characters have too many settings and can't advance the story. Especially the production part, if the author hadn't kept talking about taking care of children, it really doesn't look like it was written by an experienced person, and he would have talked so much nonsense during the production. . Reading is just a way to pass the time
It's really, really, really beautiful.
I don't know what it's about. After reading Chapter 2, I decided to give up on the show. It was too confusing.
The chapters are too messy and I can't figure out what the author wrote.
The story is okay
But the plot is really confusing. I can't explain what exactly happened, and then it's all mixed up. It always feels weird to watch it.
How come your novel is so fragmented?
How come your novel is so fragmented?
Come on come on come on. . . .
The plot jumps too fast and looks very confusing
Passing by, passing by, checking in by the way.
It's so expensive, I can't stand it
Nonsense
The logic seems to make sense but there is actually something wrong with it. It's a waste of money and time, not worth watching.
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