Wandering in Qingming
by Ah Ban
About This Novel
It has been eight years since Xu Jia was born in this world. It wasn't until strange things happened at home and the family was almost wiped out that she learned that cultivation could be done here. However, she was from an ordinary background and had neither a powerful backer nor any powerful skills. What to do? The road is made by people. If you don't have a backer, you will work hard to become stronger. If you don't have the skills, you will create your own. Although the exercises she made up are terrible, they can be practiced and she will perfect them bit by bit.
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Official(30)Scraped 21d ago
I like to read this kind of novels that don't fall in love and don't have children. It's best if there's no male protagonist.
I feel like this world of immortal cultivation is so backward, it doesn't even have a Nascent Soul. I wonder if the heroine will change the map in the future.
How should I put it? It looks more like a charade, lacking the majestic meaning of Yaosi. However, I applaud the author's logic. There is nothing particularly shocking about it.
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About this book: ·There is no male protagonist, no falling in love, and no raising children. ·The world where Baishan City is located is a small world. As of Chapter 186, the heroine has left the small world. ·It is said that the writing is depressing, and the author also feels that the writing is depressing. The currently released chapters cannot change the plot. The author can only say that the next book will be a fun novel, and he will not write this kind of text again. ·You are welcome to submit any comments, whether it is sending flowers or smashing rotten eggs. The author is happy to accept them and will never delete comments. However, the author will delete comments that involve personal attacks, such as "The author is stupid", "The author will die", and comments that attack readers.
It's too procrastinating. Since it's about cultivating immortality, other things shouldn't take up too much content. But why do I feel that cultivating immortality has become the second priority?
How to say it? The author's writing is not good, it is too wordy, and there are too many rhetorical techniques.
How to say it? The author's writing is good or bad. It's too verbose and has too many rhetorical techniques. He can write endlessly about one psychological activity in one sentence. Please make it more concise. It will make people dizzy and feel dragged out.
What should I say about this article? I also feel it's a bit delayed. It's already over 120 chapters and I'm still practicing my qi. Then it's over 120 chapters and I wrote that hundreds of thousands of innocent people died because of family strife. . . . Personally, I think it's better to cultivate immortality as long as you become a monk and you can't do anything to ordinary people. In the early stage, I felt that it was written around family fights, which was not majestic enough. The foundation building is very, very powerful. The golden elixir is a legend. . . . A few little shrimps who practice Qi can fight like crazy🙄
It's been more than ten chapters and I haven't started cultivating immortality yet. I don't have the patience to read anymore. The article is really well written, but the content is too dragging.
Don't know how to say
Cultivation of Immortality is not serious, the content is too procrastinating, and a bit contradictory. I feel that the heroine is too pretentious and contradictory.
So verbose,,,,,,,
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Official(30)Scraped 21d ago
I like to read this kind of novels that don't fall in love and don't have children. It's best if there's no male protagonist.
I feel like this world of immortal cultivation is so backward, it doesn't even have a Nascent Soul. I wonder if the heroine will change the map in the future.
How should I put it? It looks more like a charade, lacking the majestic meaning of Yaosi. However, I applaud the author's logic. There is nothing particularly shocking about it.
This is the author
About this book: ·There is no male protagonist, no falling in love, and no raising children. ·The world where Baishan City is located is a small world. As of Chapter 186, the heroine has left the small world. ·It is said that the writing is depressing, and the author also feels that the writing is depressing. The currently released chapters cannot change the plot. The author can only say that the next book will be a fun novel, and he will not write this kind of text again. ·You are welcome to submit any comments, whether it is sending flowers or smashing rotten eggs. The author is happy to accept them and will never delete comments. However, the author will delete comments that involve personal attacks, such as "The author is stupid", "The author will die", and comments that attack readers.
It's too procrastinating. Since it's about cultivating immortality, other things shouldn't take up too much content. But why do I feel that cultivating immortality has become the second priority?
How to say it? The author's writing is not good, it is too wordy, and there are too many rhetorical techniques.
How to say it? The author's writing is good or bad. It's too verbose and has too many rhetorical techniques. He can write endlessly about one psychological activity in one sentence. Please make it more concise. It will make people dizzy and feel dragged out.
What should I say about this article? I also feel it's a bit delayed. It's already over 120 chapters and I'm still practicing my qi. Then it's over 120 chapters and I wrote that hundreds of thousands of innocent people died because of family strife. . . . Personally, I think it's better to cultivate immortality as long as you become a monk and you can't do anything to ordinary people. In the early stage, I felt that it was written around family fights, which was not majestic enough. The foundation building is very, very powerful. The golden elixir is a legend. . . . A few little shrimps who practice Qi can fight like crazy🙄
It's been more than ten chapters and I haven't started cultivating immortality yet. I don't have the patience to read anymore. The article is really well written, but the content is too dragging.
Don't know how to say
Cultivation of Immortality is not serious, the content is too procrastinating, and a bit contradictory. I feel that the heroine is too pretentious and contradictory.
So verbose,,,,,,,
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Very logical Save comments on books listed as 404. The characters in the book "Two Thousand Years of the Pauper" (completed) are very well portrayed, both the protagonist and the supporting roles, such as the armchair Zhao Kuo (the Zhao Kuo in the book is not only not a fool, but also wise, brave and full of blood. Of course, the historical Zhao Kuo cannot be a fool). Of course, there are also unforgettable settings in the book, such as the fact that the general trend of history cannot be changed (of course, if the general trend of history is changed, the author will have to ignore the following dynasties, and the author does not have the writing power). What is really unforgettable is that the protagonist worked hard for Qin in his first life and hoped that the world would be settled as soon as possible. After the reunification, Qin did not impose tyranny. Although the hatred of the people of the six countries has not dissipated, as long as it is stable for twenty years, there will be peace and prosperity. However, "God's will" wanted Qin to fall, so natural disasters continued and the people were deprived of life. In addition, the hatred of the people was not eliminated, and the remaining aristocratic forces of the six countries took advantage of the situation. Therefore, history continued to develop as usual, which was a grievance.
