Beast Control: Start with Contract Slime
by Listen To The Wind And Pillow Summer
About This Novel
Jiang Yinqiu had an ability that no one knew about since she was a child. She could understand the sounds of animals, but it was a pity that this ability was of little use. Until she traveled to the world of beast control. In this world, all mountains, rivers, plants and trees can become spirits, and even dolls can give birth to spirits. However, even if you travel through time, you won't be able to pass the college entrance examination. She wanted to take the college entrance examination, but after looking at the unfamiliar test paper and the original results, she had no choice but to take another path.
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Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
well...
There are many typos, the sentences don't make sense, and too much pen and ink is used to describe the plot of a small family. Maybe the pen is not strong enough to express what the author wants to express. It feels like the plot is forced out (the above represents the daily plot). The author's daily writing is a bit too slow. There are not many highlights before chapter 30, except for the golden finger similar to other novels, and the high talent that matches the protagonist... However, in the game plot, the allocation of team cooperation to treat, control, and attack each has its own role is quite common in other genres, but I have never read this book in the same genre. In addition, the "knowledge of the languages of all beasts" mentioned in the introduction is not well utilized. Being included in the introduction shows that the author hopes to use this to attract readers. However, a large part of the plot in the early stage was not fully utilized to attract readers, and it was exposed early in the morning. Coming to a strange world, don't you have any vigilance at all? The other protagonists have long been afraid of being filmed by the lab. Dear author, almost half of your chapters have typos or unclear sentences. Did you know that? It's so densely packed that you can't even catch an insect.
After reading Chapter 60, if I hadn't known that Jiang was the protagonist, I would have thought it was Yun. Also giving away resources and beast control........
Not bad
It looks okay, but I don't know what to say about some of the sentences, so I'd better check more. I remember there was a place where it said it was holding the door or something. Can the door be held? See if this is right. I see a lot of local characters and I don't know what to say. I don't know if it's a typo or something.
Boiled water plot
After reading 200 chapters, I finally know why no one has watched it. The plot is as bland as boiled water. It's really boring. Even the competition and evolution, the most common explosive plots in beast-control novels, are extremely boring. In addition, the heroine's aunt is still a very traditional Chinese parent. She is very controlling. She has no time to send someone to take care of the heroine. She almost ignores the heroine's wishes and adds more poison to the poison.
I like it, I hope the author will update it more
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Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
well...
There are many typos, the sentences don't make sense, and too much pen and ink is used to describe the plot of a small family. Maybe the pen is not strong enough to express what the author wants to express. It feels like the plot is forced out (the above represents the daily plot). The author's daily writing is a bit too slow. There are not many highlights before chapter 30, except for the golden finger similar to other novels, and the high talent that matches the protagonist... However, in the game plot, the allocation of team cooperation to treat, control, and attack each has its own role is quite common in other genres, but I have never read this book in the same genre. In addition, the "knowledge of the languages of all beasts" mentioned in the introduction is not well utilized. Being included in the introduction shows that the author hopes to use this to attract readers. However, a large part of the plot in the early stage was not fully utilized to attract readers, and it was exposed early in the morning. Coming to a strange world, don't you have any vigilance at all? The other protagonists have long been afraid of being filmed by the lab. Dear author, almost half of your chapters have typos or unclear sentences. Did you know that? It's so densely packed that you can't even catch an insect.
After reading Chapter 60, if I hadn't known that Jiang was the protagonist, I would have thought it was Yun. Also giving away resources and beast control........
Not bad
It looks okay, but I don't know what to say about some of the sentences, so I'd better check more. I remember there was a place where it said it was holding the door or something. Can the door be held? See if this is right. I see a lot of local characters and I don't know what to say. I don't know if it's a typo or something.
Boiled water plot
After reading 200 chapters, I finally know why no one has watched it. The plot is as bland as boiled water. It's really boring. Even the competition and evolution, the most common explosive plots in beast-control novels, are extremely boring. In addition, the heroine's aunt is still a very traditional Chinese parent. She is very controlling. She has no time to send someone to take care of the heroine. She almost ignores the heroine's wishes and adds more poison to the poison.
I like it, I hope the author will update it more
