The Female Partner Said She Was Very Innocent

The Female Partner Said She Was Very Innocent

by A Little Pea

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About This Novel

The new article "Escape from famine at the beginning, I will make a fortune from all over the world" is now online, please support it! ! ! ! When she woke up, Ye Zhiyao found that she had become a baby, and that she had arrived in a strange and bizarre world of cultivators, and transformed into a second-generation cultivator with resources and background. Ye Zhiyao was determined to practice well and ascend to the immortal world, until one day she discovered that she had transformed into a desperate heroine in a time-travel novel who couldn't survive the golden elixir? Her goal was to live away from the heroine and protect the Ye family. Who knows what will happen later... Huh? The heroine actually became her little sister? (Demining: This article has a male protagonist, who has a relatively low sense of existence and appears relatively late. The female protagonist is an ordinary person who travels through time, not an agent or a killer, and is not particularly awesome. This is a growth history of ordinary people who travel through books and work hard to cultivate. Don't read it if you don't like it.)

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Dumb*_ae81mo ago

It's very nice to watch, and the image of the female supporting character is well created. It was a little stiff at the beginning, maybe because I didn't know how to express it, or how to accurately position the flesh-and-blood emotions of the female supporting character. In the later period, the image became clearer and more delicate, and the plot was also very fascinating, but it lacked the enrichment of the emotional subplot of the female supporting character. If possible, the relationship between the female supporting character's family members who traveled to their infancy and the female supporting character always emphasized that the female supporting character was favored, but it still felt too empty, there was no getting along, and there were no details. Of course, some people may say that this book is mainly about the growth history of the female protagonist, so some unimportant details can be omitted, but we know that often the most critical period for a person's growth is childhood, especially having a happy and happy family. Apart from emotions, I think a person's strength is always weak. Since it is progress, the heroine's friends, relatives, or enemies should all make progress. It is also a good idea to appropriately arrange corresponding opportunities for other side characters, and it can also enrich the content of the book. Also, I think the introduction, suspense, and foreshadowing set up in the book are also very good, very interesting, and will not make people feel abrupt, Ness Overall, this is a very good book about female supporting characters. Kudos to the author.

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无趣81mo ago

I would like to ask how many chapters the author updates every day? When?

The subject matter of this book written by the author is very novel. I really like it. I haven't felt like reading the whole text from beginning to end for a long time, hehehe. I hope the author can treat the male supporting characters kindly. I really don't want those male supporting characters to compete with the male protagonist. I don't want the male partner to ruin the rest of his life because of love, fall into the evil way, lose more than he gains, and then follow the routine of those who wrote romance novels before, and torture the male partner to the point of being naked (if there is a male protagonist in this article). I don't want the male lead's brother Luochuan to experience love disaster because of the original female lead. I don't want all the friends and relatives around the heroine to leave her. (These are just my own inner thoughts. If the author thinks it is okay, you can adopt it, thank you) Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better, and his literary talent will also become better and better. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to know what's next, hehehe☆

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K.81mo ago

I have read so many novels and the plots are almost the same. I really like this novel written in a big way. It is different from other novels and the content is very novel. I hope you can keep writing, I will always support you. I read some book reviews, and some of them are about the male protagonist. I think this book can be used with or without a male protagonist (but I still like it with a male protagonist😁), because this book focuses on the female protagonist cultivating immortality, and I hope the female protagonist can have more life and death companions. I also hope that the heroine's luck will improve a little and she won't be so seriously injured every time she gets treasures. Great work ^0^~ This book is very interesting, I recommend you to read it❤❤❤ (Hey, I am also a paper crane🤗)

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一颗小豌豆吖73mo ago

Final remarks

Dear readers and friends, the main text of the female supporting character comes to an end here. In the later stage, there will be an extra chapter about the female supporting role, which will explain some characters and the pitfalls they buried. Today's four chapters are the four chapters that Wandou has written the slowest and longest since he wrote the article. It is even impossible to write. It has been 326 days since Wandou started writing the article on April 28, 2019. Except for one day when something happened, he has never stopped updating at other times. At the beginning, Wandou wrote this novel out of curiosity, and also felt the difficulty of writing. Chapters that usually take one or two minutes to read turned out to take several hours to write. Wandou still remembers that there were two people collecting the book Female Supporters from the very beginning, one was Wandou and the other was the editor. Every day Wandou clicks on the software and sees that another collection has been added, which really makes her happy all day long. At that time, Wandou really thought about giving up countless times and felt that he was not suitable for writing articles. However, there were several cuties who left messages for Wandou every day, encouraging and praising Wandou. In fact, at that time, Wandou's writing was really poor, and the structure of the content also had big flaws, but they all tolerated me. So, I persisted. Gradually, the platform gave recommendations, the number of people who collected it increased, and Wandou also saw the first month's royalties. Although the manuscript fee was only 2.49 Yuan, it made Wandou happy for a long time. Along the way, more and more readers began to pay attention to the female partner and Wandou, and would praise Wandou, praise Wandou, and give Wandou suggestions. Wandou is really a three-minute hot person. It is really surprising that he can persist until now. In life, Wandou is just an ordinary worker who can be replaced by others at any time. Yesterday, Wandou received a comment saying that the book Female Supporter gave her motivation in life and made her understand that as long as she works hard and perseveres, nothing is impossible. This really touched Peas very much and was the highest and best evaluation of Peas. It turns out that Wandou's intentions are really noticed by everyone. Wandou finally found his own value. It turns out that I can be liked by so many people and can bring positive energy to everyone. Really appreciate it. Regarding the female supporting book, the previous plan was to finish it after completing the main plot of Qingchuan Prefecture, so I also let everyone know about it in advance. Wandou chose this time to end, not because of the new book, nor because he wanted to end it hastily, but because it was a decision he had considered for a very long time. Many readers come to read Female Supporters for its novel plot, and Wandou has been working hard towards this goal. But everyone who has read enough fairy novels knows that if you keep changing maps and upgrading, the further you go, the easier it is to get tired. The same is true for Wandou. This book is Wandou's first book, so I'm really afraid that if people catch up to the end, they will think that the female supporting character is too clichéd, has a low word count, and is just for making money. This book is the hard work of Wandou, and everyone in it is like Wandou's child. I don't want to disappoint the people who like them in the end, so I stopped here. Many readers want to see the fairy world and the world of gods. Wandou has not been able to fulfill your wishes. I sincerely apologize to everyone here. Because Wandou's own background is not enough, he is unable to bring you a steady stream of counter-routine and interesting plots. It took me so long to write, but Wandou really loves Zhiyao, Qiyue, Nangong, senior brother... Wandou loves everyone in the book and is grateful for their existence, allowing us to have this wonderful time. My little cuties, finally, Wandou would like to sincerely say thank you. Thank you for spending this wonderful journey with Wandou. Thank you for loving Yaoyao so much and protecting Yaoyao. Thank you for letting Wandou find the value of his life. Thank you. I love you all.

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一颗小豌豆吖82mo ago

Check-in building, plot building

Let's discuss the plot together. You can be as creative as you want. You can also give Wandou some inspiration. Maybe your creativity will appear in the article. (≖‿≖)✧

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Great Director65mo ago

The label of the female supporting character should be "Three Views, Not Routine". Compared with ordinary novels, the heroine in the book and the original heroine have become friends instead of enemies. This is the biggest highlight. The author has a good idea: "Since the heroine of the novel can read this book, it means that the heroine of this book is excellent." It is precisely because the heroine is to your liking that you can continue to read it, so why should the original heroine appear in the image of a white lotus? The most shining thing about the heroine should be "hard work". All achievements are due to her own efforts. Some people also say that there is obviously a big family behind her, why not use it? Isn't this stupid? Family power is certainly a big help, but since you have chosen to go your own way, you should pay for it instead of blindly relying on external things. This is difficult, and this is what we should learn from it, the positive thing. My focus is different. What I see is luck. To be honest, the heroine in the early stage has no "luck" at all: this is also normal. She is originally a female supporting character in the book. The rejection of heaven and the restriction of identity, and without any golden fingers, how can she take the luck of the original owner? Therefore, it is understandable that the heroine in the early stage has extremely bad luck. Readers will not like it if it is too exaggerated, and readers who are too weak will not like it. Such a relaxed and moderate arrangement will make people more comfortable. A girl who loves to laugh will not have bad luck, but how can a girl who loves to laugh laugh? What should you do if you have bad luck? Then work hard, hard work will make people shine!

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Gu80mo ago

The author warns

The monthly ticket has exceeded 1500, please update more, please update more, please update more, important things should be said three times, please update more

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江SOS80mo ago

A few small suggestions

Dada said before that the male protagonist is Nangong Yu, but when I saw the way Zhi Yao and Nangong Che got along, I actually saw Pink Bubbles. I felt inexplicably that Nangong Che liked Zhi Yao. If Dada wanted to write Nangong Yu as the male protagonist, I suggested that Nangong Che not have an emotional relationship with Zhi Yao, otherwise it would be easy to collapse. In fact, Nangong Yu is the male protagonist, which is very interesting, but Nangong Yu himself Shen's skills are not easy to be moved by people. It can be seen from the part about July that Nangong Yu may like the type of July, but July itself is not enough to impress Nangong Yu, so Nangong Yu may have been admiring July before. Therefore, if you want to write about Nangong Yu's affection, you can start by looking for something that Zhiyao has but July does not. Personally, I feel that Rong Li and the two Buddhist cultivators may lead out Nangong Yu's line, especially Rong Li. The previous foreshadowing is basically to bring out the male protagonist (Nangong Yu). After all, it would be too hasty and too sudden to appear directly. In fact, when Zhi Yao was arrested , if Nangong Yu appeared, it would be a little inappropriate, because Nangong Che was also there at that time, which would easily lead Nangong Yu to position Zhiyao as his brother's friend (suspected sweetheart), etc. It would be inappropriate to write a love line later. If you want to write about the development of the two of them later, you may have to wrong Nangong Che for a while, almost to Nangong Yu After you have a little liking for Zhi Yao, you can normally write about Nangong Che and Nangong Yu's aunt, which is also the breakthrough point in the relationship between the two. You can write that Zhi Yao was seriously injured when fighting with the two Buddhist cultivators and Rong Li, and was taken back to Nangong's house by Nangong Yu for treatment. Then she was discovered by the aunt, and the aunt can become an assist later. Of course it's just a small suggestion, it may be easier to write this way, I look forward to big ideas. Then the emotional line can be arranged as little as possible. For example, if there is already a senior brother's emotional line, and a few outstanding geniuses like the heroine, there will be a sense of cheapness. If you accidentally become a Mary Sue, this is how the harem is usually opened. The character of Qiyue can also balance this feeling. For example, there may be a high-ranking person who appreciates Qiyue and Zhiyao at the same time instead of Zhiyao alone. There will not be the feeling that the halo of the heroine is too heavy, but it can highlight the person's talent. (Of course, the above are all personal suggestions, everyone can discuss them together)

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Shuwei under the Moon81mo ago

Introduction to character name

I hope to contribute some good character names and be adopted by the author.

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Teahouse_ac81mo ago

Whose family will the male protagonist end up with?

Can you now reveal who the male protagonist is?

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