The King of Penglai Juan is Actually a Little Transparent Person in the Fairy World
by Jian Yue
About This Novel
The road to immortality is so long, and sooner or later it will turn cold! (Traditional cultivation style + upgrade to fight monsters + abuse of scum + double strength + no time travel + no system) In the ten years of secular life, he had been treated with cold eyes, his parents died early, he was living under the roof of others, and no one really loved him. Jiang Li was used to being patient. Until she met the immortals from Penglai Immortal Island, she was taken back to the Immortal Island and started her path to immortality. Others trained her to study elixirs, others upgraded her to study talismans and seals, others trained her to learn to refine weapons on her own, and she was not in a hurry for anything related to cultivation. Everyone thought this was Adou who couldn't be helped, until the teacher's gate was besieged and she stood up. It turns out that she is a master of both elixirs and talismans, and has a good way of refining weapons. Her way is integrated into life, and she can practice it everywhere, but she is not weak to anyone. It seems that she is not doing her job properly, but she meditates every night until dawn and practices diligently all the time. Penglai disciple: "Senior Sister Jiang is worthy of being the king of rolls, and she is perfect at cultivating immortality and refining skills!" Everyone in the world of cultivating immortals: "Penglai is really full of talents!" Jiang Li: "Reject involution, you work hard, I just want to slowly cultivate immortality!" The elder of the master: "I believe you! When did you practice the golden elixir?"
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Remarks on the launch
In fact, I didn't plan to write a testimonial about the launch, but I might as well write a few sentences! After all, I do things with a sense of ritual. Although I am a small and transparent author, and I write books to generate electricity for love, I am so busy every day that I still sacrifice my sleep time to update. You may not be able to imagine how many things I have to do every day. A few years ago, I encountered the problem of masks, lost money in business, and got into debt. Now I am doing all kinds of money-making jobs, including part-time makeup, doing intangible cultural heritage handicrafts, setting up stalls, and customizing jewelry. The reason why I still write novels under such circumstances is because I have always liked writing, and I don't want to live like a debt-paying machine, so I retain this hobby of mine. Fortunately, my coding speed is not bad. When I don't consider the plot, I can do it at 3,500 per hour, but on a daily basis, I maintain a speed of 2,010 per hour. I am not telling you this to ask for sympathy, I just want to tell you that small and transparent authors who insist on originality only need a little support from you. No matter what, even checking in on a chapter is the motivation for me to move forward. Thanks to the readers who have tolerated my scumbag updates, and thanks to you who have always supported me so that I am not alone. It is now available! The application for package is still waiting. The first order really needs everyone's support. At least, let me know how many people have seen it after writing it for so long.
Has the hero appeared?
Did the male protagonist show up? I guess it's Master, right?
Being attracted by the introduction, I would like to give some advice to the author:
This novel is a novel about cultivating immortals. Although the description of emotions can be less focused, I think the emotions of the protagonist and the important supporting characters still need to be described in more detail, at least not so bluntly. Then there is the character of the heroine. I don't know whether to say she is good or bad. It feels very awkward. She seems to be respectful and polite in the sect, but after she goes out, she feels a bit taken for granted. What's more, the process and results of her experience are too concise, with the feeling of being brushed off in one stroke. The text of Cultivation to Immortality shows that the protagonist has gone through many tests and become stronger step by step. At least now I don't feel that the heroine has experienced anything. Also, the main plot of this article should be to eliminate demons. The description is too mundane. I feel that the author did not detail many things in this article. That's it. Don't mind the author. These are just my thoughts and suggestions after reading this article. You can listen to it or not. (I have been reading novels for almost 8 years. I recently came across the synopsis of this one which attracted me so I read it)
I feel like the relationship line is a bit fast. When we got to the Demon-Slaying Sword Formation, I didn't feel that there was a deep emotional bond between them. Suddenly they were protecting each other with their lives. It felt weird.
*｡٩( ॑꒳ ॑ ) The journey is the sea of stars *｡٩( ॑꒳ ॑ ) The journey is the sea of stars *｡٩( ॑꒳ ॑ ) The journey is the sea of stars
(●°u°●) At this moment, my heart is broken
✖‿✖What you said makes sense and I am speechless.
I like it very much. It's been a long time since I've seen a traditional fairy-cultivating article. I was attracted by the opening chapter. After reading it, I felt good. The story is rich. I like it.
I like it very much. I hope the author will update it early every day.
I read the introduction and thought it was very good. I'll add it to my bookshelf and read it tomorrow. Cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Official(14)Scraped 3d ago
Remarks on the launch
In fact, I didn't plan to write a testimonial about the launch, but I might as well write a few sentences! After all, I do things with a sense of ritual. Although I am a small and transparent author, and I write books to generate electricity for love, I am so busy every day that I still sacrifice my sleep time to update. You may not be able to imagine how many things I have to do every day. A few years ago, I encountered the problem of masks, lost money in business, and got into debt. Now I am doing all kinds of money-making jobs, including part-time makeup, doing intangible cultural heritage handicrafts, setting up stalls, and customizing jewelry. The reason why I still write novels under such circumstances is because I have always liked writing, and I don't want to live like a debt-paying machine, so I retain this hobby of mine. Fortunately, my coding speed is not bad. When I don't consider the plot, I can do it at 3,500 per hour, but on a daily basis, I maintain a speed of 2,010 per hour. I am not telling you this to ask for sympathy, I just want to tell you that small and transparent authors who insist on originality only need a little support from you. No matter what, even checking in on a chapter is the motivation for me to move forward. Thanks to the readers who have tolerated my scumbag updates, and thanks to you who have always supported me so that I am not alone. It is now available! The application for package is still waiting. The first order really needs everyone's support. At least, let me know how many people have seen it after writing it for so long.
Has the hero appeared?
Did the male protagonist show up? I guess it's Master, right?
Being attracted by the introduction, I would like to give some advice to the author:
This novel is a novel about cultivating immortals. Although the description of emotions can be less focused, I think the emotions of the protagonist and the important supporting characters still need to be described in more detail, at least not so bluntly. Then there is the character of the heroine. I don't know whether to say she is good or bad. It feels very awkward. She seems to be respectful and polite in the sect, but after she goes out, she feels a bit taken for granted. What's more, the process and results of her experience are too concise, with the feeling of being brushed off in one stroke. The text of Cultivation to Immortality shows that the protagonist has gone through many tests and become stronger step by step. At least now I don't feel that the heroine has experienced anything. Also, the main plot of this article should be to eliminate demons. The description is too mundane. I feel that the author did not detail many things in this article. That's it. Don't mind the author. These are just my thoughts and suggestions after reading this article. You can listen to it or not. (I have been reading novels for almost 8 years. I recently came across the synopsis of this one which attracted me so I read it)
I feel like the relationship line is a bit fast. When we got to the Demon-Slaying Sword Formation, I didn't feel that there was a deep emotional bond between them. Suddenly they were protecting each other with their lives. It felt weird.
*｡٩( ॑꒳ ॑ ) The journey is the sea of stars *｡٩( ॑꒳ ॑ ) The journey is the sea of stars *｡٩( ॑꒳ ॑ ) The journey is the sea of stars
(●°u°●) At this moment, my heart is broken
✖‿✖What you said makes sense and I am speechless.
I like it very much. It's been a long time since I've seen a traditional fairy-cultivating article. I was attracted by the opening chapter. After reading it, I felt good. The story is rich. I like it.
I like it very much. I hope the author will update it early every day.
I read the introduction and thought it was very good. I'll add it to my bookshelf and read it tomorrow. Cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง
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