
Reborn and Struggling Pretty Daughter-in-law
by Wu Dalang Sells Cooking Cakes
About This Novel
Liu Yi was reborn, at a turning point of fate. This time, everything was still in time. The cold brother Bing was still around, and the vixen had no chance to take advantage of it. Write a script, go to college, start a company, tear off the vixen with your own hands, reach the peak of life, and regain perfection. Recommended new article "Quick Travel: Countering the Big Boss Behind the Scenes", welcome to jump in
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Official(228)Scraped 1mo ago
The vixen is not scary, especially after he is reborn and he knows his true face; Brother Bing is the cutest, especially since he is so gentle and considerate again. The novel is good, keep up the good work...
The author's introduction is very concise. A life with twists and turns can be repeated, so it is normal to abuse someone in the face. The writing is very smooth and feels good...
Only after experiencing it do you know how to cherish it. Fortunately, she still has a chance to do it again. Since the gears of fate have just begun, it's still not too late...
The novel is quite good, but I just don't understand why the male protagonist married that vixen again after his divorce in his previous life. Is there something wrong with it? ? ? ? ? ?
The heroine in the previous life didn't like the male protagonist, so why should she blame others if she doesn't cherish him? The heroine's previous life was in such a mess because it was not her fault, so she had nothing to sympathize with, she just felt that she deserved it. Also, why did the male protagonist marry a vixen in his previous life or marry someone else?
Let me give you some small suggestions. I feel that the beginning of the rebirth is really not very good, because firstly, it does not describe the depth of the male protagonist's love for her. Secondly, it does not describe how mean the vixen is. The key point is, thirdly, it does not describe why the heroine needs to be reborn. Your opening like this gives me the feeling that the heroine is actually the most scheming. In other words, she is shady. Why is she living now? If it's good, you want to be reborn. Have you ever thought about other people? Moreover, her downtrodden life was not written well enough. Also, most of the heroine's mistakes were made by herself, and it seems to have little to do with others (of course, I have only read a little bit of the beginning, and I don't know how you will write in the future, but I feel that I can't find a sense of substitution, so I commented). However, I think the subsequent plot should be better, but the beginning feels a bit rough. Without further ado, I'll read on. Of course, I'm still looking forward to it. (I apologize if I made a mistake or misunderstood something)
If the previous life was not the previous life...
How should I put it? Originally, I wasn't that dissatisfied with the beginning, but the longer I watched it, the more emotional I became. Moreover, forget about the diaphragm, I didn't think anything was wrong with what the male protagonist said later, but if the beginning was not like this... Well, if it was just an if. After seeing Chapter 242, I wasn't very interested, especially after the male protagonist said that sentence. In fact, if the beginning was changed and a story about the male protagonist's previous life was added, I might like it more.
We started talking about monthly subscription, but then we charged for monthly subscription. That's enough.
Please prove something!
Did the male protagonist in the previous life really remarry Bai Lianhua? Is the male protagonist's vision that bad?
After reading dozens of chapters, the heroine is so amazing that I am speechless. Can you be more decisive in doing things? Why do you have to be secretive when making money by writing books? Why do you have to make a fuss all over the city even if you want to get into college? And the historical background is a bit strange.
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Official(228)Scraped 1mo ago
The vixen is not scary, especially after he is reborn and he knows his true face; Brother Bing is the cutest, especially since he is so gentle and considerate again. The novel is good, keep up the good work...
The author's introduction is very concise. A life with twists and turns can be repeated, so it is normal to abuse someone in the face. The writing is very smooth and feels good...
Only after experiencing it do you know how to cherish it. Fortunately, she still has a chance to do it again. Since the gears of fate have just begun, it's still not too late...
The novel is quite good, but I just don't understand why the male protagonist married that vixen again after his divorce in his previous life. Is there something wrong with it? ? ? ? ? ?
The heroine in the previous life didn't like the male protagonist, so why should she blame others if she doesn't cherish him? The heroine's previous life was in such a mess because it was not her fault, so she had nothing to sympathize with, she just felt that she deserved it. Also, why did the male protagonist marry a vixen in his previous life or marry someone else?
Let me give you some small suggestions. I feel that the beginning of the rebirth is really not very good, because firstly, it does not describe the depth of the male protagonist's love for her. Secondly, it does not describe how mean the vixen is. The key point is, thirdly, it does not describe why the heroine needs to be reborn. Your opening like this gives me the feeling that the heroine is actually the most scheming. In other words, she is shady. Why is she living now? If it's good, you want to be reborn. Have you ever thought about other people? Moreover, her downtrodden life was not written well enough. Also, most of the heroine's mistakes were made by herself, and it seems to have little to do with others (of course, I have only read a little bit of the beginning, and I don't know how you will write in the future, but I feel that I can't find a sense of substitution, so I commented). However, I think the subsequent plot should be better, but the beginning feels a bit rough. Without further ado, I'll read on. Of course, I'm still looking forward to it. (I apologize if I made a mistake or misunderstood something)
If the previous life was not the previous life...
How should I put it? Originally, I wasn't that dissatisfied with the beginning, but the longer I watched it, the more emotional I became. Moreover, forget about the diaphragm, I didn't think anything was wrong with what the male protagonist said later, but if the beginning was not like this... Well, if it was just an if. After seeing Chapter 242, I wasn't very interested, especially after the male protagonist said that sentence. In fact, if the beginning was changed and a story about the male protagonist's previous life was added, I might like it more.
We started talking about monthly subscription, but then we charged for monthly subscription. That's enough.
Please prove something!
Did the male protagonist in the previous life really remarry Bai Lianhua? Is the male protagonist's vision that bad?
After reading dozens of chapters, the heroine is so amazing that I am speechless. Can you be more decisive in doing things? Why do you have to be secretive when making money by writing books? Why do you have to make a fuss all over the city even if you want to get into college? And the historical background is a bit strange.
















