One Piece: the Magician
by Xiao Ming Who Steps On Mushrooms
About This Novel
This is a story composed of an idiot, a fool, a nymphomaniac, a money addict, a liar, a pet, a scheming woman, a pervert, a bone, and a pair of glasses. Looking at the heartless smiling face under the straw hat, Sherlock calmly pushed up his glasses with a look of helplessness on his face. "Why did I get on this pirate ship in the first place?" Book club group: 3634-0808-1
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In fact, Journey to the West is more interesting when viewed in reverse: Tathagata sent four masters and disciples and Little White Dragon from the Eight Heavenly Books to the Eastern Land to preach. They encountered various monsters along the way. After beating them, they found that they all had a back-up and could not be punished no matter how evil they did. Bajie and Sha Seng felt that it was too dark, so they had no choice but to hide in Gaolaozhuang and the other into the Liusha River. Only Wukong insisted on justice and killed demons all the way to escort the master to the east to preach. As a result, the Heavenly Court couldn't bear Wukong anymore and reached an agreement with Tathagata - we can ensure that Tang Sanzang reaches Chang'an safely, but you have to deal with Sun Wukong, this thorny person. Tathagata agreed. After a plot, the white dragon was seriously injured and fell into the mountain stream. Wukong was defeated and was crushed under the Wuzhi Mountain. However, Tang Sanzang abandoned Sun Wukong and came to Chang'an alone. After preaching in Chang'an, he was named an imperial disciple, enjoyed the glory and wealth, and died. After five hundred years like this, Wukong finally escaped from Wuzhi Mountain without saying a word, turning Heaven upside down. Heaven was forced to agree to let Zhu Bajie turn into a human being and be named Marshal Tianpeng, and Monk Sha be named General Rolling Curtain, as long as they could kill Sun Wukong. In the end, Wukong, who was frustrated because of his brother's fratricide, went to find Patriarch Bodhi to solve his doubts. Then he sealed his cultivation and returned to Huaguo Mountain. He lived an ordinary life with the monkey grandson, and finally turned into a stone on the top of Huaguo Mountain...
this is a sad story
There is a couple, the man is very cowardly and always lets his girlfriend try before doing anything. My girlfriend was very dissatisfied with this. Once, the two of them went to sea. When they returned, the boat was destroyed by a hurricane. Fortunately, the girlfriend grabbed a piece of wood and saved their lives. The girlfriend asked her boyfriend: Are you afraid? The boyfriend took out a fruit knife from his arms and said: I'm afraid, but if a shark comes, I will use this to deal with it. My girlfriend just shook her head and smiled bitterly. Soon, a cargo ship discovered them. Just as they were ecstatic, a group of sharks appeared. The girlfriend shouted: Let's swim hard together, it will be fine! But the boyfriend suddenly pushed his girlfriend into the sea with force, pulled the wooden board towards the freighter, and shouted: This time I will try first! The girlfriend was stunned and looked at her boyfriend's back, feeling very desperate. The shark was approaching, but it was not interested in his girlfriend and swam directly to her boyfriend. The boyfriend was bitten fiercely by the shark. He shouted to his girlfriend like crazy: I love you! My girlfriend was rescued, and everyone on the deck was in silence. The captain sat next to his girlfriend and said: Miss, he is the bravest person I have ever seen. We pray for him! No, he's a coward. My girlfriend said coldly. How do you say that? I have been observing you with a telescope just now, and I clearly saw him slit his wrist with a knife after pushing you away. The shark is very sensitive to the smell of blood. If he doesn't do this to buy time, I'm afraid you will never appear on this ship. What? When the girlfriend heard the truth, it was like a bolt from the blue. She was devastated and heartbroken. She just wanted to jump into the sea and die with her boyfriend immediately. At the critical moment, the captain held her back: If I were you, I would definitely live a good life, fill up the sea with an excavator, and avenge the bloodshed of your boyfriend. My girlfriend was silent for a few seconds and asked calmly: Which company has the best excavator technology? ? Captain: Shandong, China is looking for Lan Xiang! ! !
my thoughts
I still prefer this One Piece fan novel, the characters are very vividly drawn. I hope there will be no more eunuchs. Presented by Sherlock's Wanted Notice (I really like the image of a certain man with glasses)
This book is the only one I didn't understand
Can't understand, wasting brain cells
This novel has a bad plot, the character descriptions don't even know who the pig's feet are, the fruit is rubbish, and the plot is inconsistent. I wrote this and that, my brain cells exploded while reading it. I really admire the author for being able to continue writing, and I will never see him again.
The protagonist written by the author is not Sherlock but her!
Natural Enemy: A 13-year-old vice admiral, 15-year-old admiral, 18-year-old marshal, and 20-year-old overthrowing the world government. Becoming the strongest in the world is the protagonist. Sherlock only became a naval captain when he ate Devil Fruit and went to sea at the age of 17. If Sherlock later surpasses his natural enemy, I will also laugh at the author! ! ! ! ! ! !
Broken. . . . .
Entering the palace again?
Talk about this book. (Request from a loyal reader)
Because this is a good fan novel with well-drawn characters and a clear storyline. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I would like to encourage you-keep working hard. Maybe my request is a little too demanding, but I implore the author to give this book a perfect ending. Sorry to trouble you.
The author has done a good job
The plot is okay and the writing is okay. I guess you don't know how to write now, right? Author, your imagination is too big. How should you fill this hole? You have dug this hole deep enough. If you, the author, can't think of the following, we can discuss it together.
I hope this book will be finished
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Official(138)Scraped 1mo ago
In fact, Journey to the West is more interesting when viewed in reverse: Tathagata sent four masters and disciples and Little White Dragon from the Eight Heavenly Books to the Eastern Land to preach. They encountered various monsters along the way. After beating them, they found that they all had a back-up and could not be punished no matter how evil they did. Bajie and Sha Seng felt that it was too dark, so they had no choice but to hide in Gaolaozhuang and the other into the Liusha River. Only Wukong insisted on justice and killed demons all the way to escort the master to the east to preach. As a result, the Heavenly Court couldn't bear Wukong anymore and reached an agreement with Tathagata - we can ensure that Tang Sanzang reaches Chang'an safely, but you have to deal with Sun Wukong, this thorny person. Tathagata agreed. After a plot, the white dragon was seriously injured and fell into the mountain stream. Wukong was defeated and was crushed under the Wuzhi Mountain. However, Tang Sanzang abandoned Sun Wukong and came to Chang'an alone. After preaching in Chang'an, he was named an imperial disciple, enjoyed the glory and wealth, and died. After five hundred years like this, Wukong finally escaped from Wuzhi Mountain without saying a word, turning Heaven upside down. Heaven was forced to agree to let Zhu Bajie turn into a human being and be named Marshal Tianpeng, and Monk Sha be named General Rolling Curtain, as long as they could kill Sun Wukong. In the end, Wukong, who was frustrated because of his brother's fratricide, went to find Patriarch Bodhi to solve his doubts. Then he sealed his cultivation and returned to Huaguo Mountain. He lived an ordinary life with the monkey grandson, and finally turned into a stone on the top of Huaguo Mountain...
this is a sad story
There is a couple, the man is very cowardly and always lets his girlfriend try before doing anything. My girlfriend was very dissatisfied with this. Once, the two of them went to sea. When they returned, the boat was destroyed by a hurricane. Fortunately, the girlfriend grabbed a piece of wood and saved their lives. The girlfriend asked her boyfriend: Are you afraid? The boyfriend took out a fruit knife from his arms and said: I'm afraid, but if a shark comes, I will use this to deal with it. My girlfriend just shook her head and smiled bitterly. Soon, a cargo ship discovered them. Just as they were ecstatic, a group of sharks appeared. The girlfriend shouted: Let's swim hard together, it will be fine! But the boyfriend suddenly pushed his girlfriend into the sea with force, pulled the wooden board towards the freighter, and shouted: This time I will try first! The girlfriend was stunned and looked at her boyfriend's back, feeling very desperate. The shark was approaching, but it was not interested in his girlfriend and swam directly to her boyfriend. The boyfriend was bitten fiercely by the shark. He shouted to his girlfriend like crazy: I love you! My girlfriend was rescued, and everyone on the deck was in silence. The captain sat next to his girlfriend and said: Miss, he is the bravest person I have ever seen. We pray for him! No, he's a coward. My girlfriend said coldly. How do you say that? I have been observing you with a telescope just now, and I clearly saw him slit his wrist with a knife after pushing you away. The shark is very sensitive to the smell of blood. If he doesn't do this to buy time, I'm afraid you will never appear on this ship. What? When the girlfriend heard the truth, it was like a bolt from the blue. She was devastated and heartbroken. She just wanted to jump into the sea and die with her boyfriend immediately. At the critical moment, the captain held her back: If I were you, I would definitely live a good life, fill up the sea with an excavator, and avenge the bloodshed of your boyfriend. My girlfriend was silent for a few seconds and asked calmly: Which company has the best excavator technology? ? Captain: Shandong, China is looking for Lan Xiang! ! !
my thoughts
I still prefer this One Piece fan novel, the characters are very vividly drawn. I hope there will be no more eunuchs. Presented by Sherlock's Wanted Notice (I really like the image of a certain man with glasses)
This book is the only one I didn't understand
Can't understand, wasting brain cells
This novel has a bad plot, the character descriptions don't even know who the pig's feet are, the fruit is rubbish, and the plot is inconsistent. I wrote this and that, my brain cells exploded while reading it. I really admire the author for being able to continue writing, and I will never see him again.
The protagonist written by the author is not Sherlock but her!
Natural Enemy: A 13-year-old vice admiral, 15-year-old admiral, 18-year-old marshal, and 20-year-old overthrowing the world government. Becoming the strongest in the world is the protagonist. Sherlock only became a naval captain when he ate Devil Fruit and went to sea at the age of 17. If Sherlock later surpasses his natural enemy, I will also laugh at the author! ! ! ! ! ! !
Broken. . . . .
Entering the palace again?
Talk about this book. (Request from a loyal reader)
Because this is a good fan novel with well-drawn characters and a clear storyline. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I would like to encourage you-keep working hard. Maybe my request is a little too demanding, but I implore the author to give this book a perfect ending. Sorry to trouble you.
The author has done a good job
The plot is okay and the writing is okay. I guess you don't know how to write now, right? Author, your imagination is too big. How should you fill this hole? You have dug this hole deep enough. If you, the author, can't think of the following, we can discuss it together.
I hope this book will be finished
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The biggest challenge in writing fan fiction where the protagonist is not the protagonist of the original work is how to integrate it into the original work and still have a sense of existence. For pirate fans, if they don't follow the Straw Hat route, they basically force one person on Luffy's pirate ship. The plot follows the original plot. There is no innovation in the plot, and no characteristics in the characterization. It just adds a few more opponents, changes a few lines of dialogue, and in the end it is very likely that there is an additional name full of flaws. Therefore, for authors who have no originality or average plot control ability, when writing fan fiction, they will either write it as a bland and boring follow-up flow, or they may want to have new ideas but fail to successfully control it, and in the end they will end up with all kinds of brain damage and illogicality. This book avoids this problem very well. Although the novel follows the original work, it also has differences from the original work. Sherlock can be regarded as the first protagonist who can truly integrate into the Straw Hat Pirates. There is one thing in the book that I am not used to. The author likes to add annotations or PS various explanations in the novel. This is too wordy and interrupts the smooth flow of the story. It is like you are listening to the story with relish, and from time to time, an explanation comes to your ears, who is this person and how this thing happened. Even if you don't understand some plots, readers will understand them later. The second is to influence readers into the plot. I was reading a book, dreaming that I would be like the protagonist, running around on adventures, following Luffy to challenge the sea, but such an explanation always reminded me that this is a book, and you are just a reader. So annoying!
Not bad
. . .
Personal rating: 90 (perfect fanfic, the best pirate, hope to continue writing) (Serializing...) This book has an almost perfect setting for the protagonist. A black-haired tribesman appears in Thassarian, a clan of Dracos who are respected for their silver hair. He doesn't want to be a Draco, so he hides in Rogge Town in the East China Sea and opens a small chamber of commerce. The protagonist is the grandson of that Draco, who died after his parents died. After going there, he promoted the Chamber of Commerce, and then he was hunted down, stranded on an island, and got a devil fruit. Finally, he was taken into the ship by Luffy due to an accident. When he woke up, he saw the promise Luffy made to Labu and the pirate flag that protected Labu. After getting to know him, he had an indescribable feeling for Luffy! The story of finally deciding to join the Straw Hat Pirates! What I appreciate most about this book is the original protagonist in One Piece. He is almost as intelligent as a demon, can make a perfect layout without giving any spoilers, is elegant but has shortcomings, is not overly philandering, and does not resort to random tricks. Everything about it makes people like him! Also, the author uses the characters of the original work to write different stories without deviating from the plot, and perfectly writes the characters of the original characters... This is Chi Wu's most satisfying fanfic! !
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