
In the Prehistoric Times, Being Near the Water Became an Immortal
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Why is Hongmeng broken? Why did the gods emerge from desolation? What secrets are hidden in the endless years? Unknown characters appear one after another, and things become more and more confusing. Why do the gods divide into hostile camps and fight endlessly? Why does the entangled cause and effect have to start from this prehistoric period... Pangu opened the sky and acted on all things in the world, and Qingchen was born from the innate divine water. He used the sword as a sharp weapon to control all the waters, and climbed to the top step by step, uncovering the secrets hidden one by one.
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Official(38)Scraped 1mo ago
The protagonist must have a brain disease. He is not very strong, so he carries his innate spiritual treasure around all day long. He is looking for death. Are you a fool from the 21st century?
If you don't practice well, you still mess around and run around
Oh shit
I wanted to read it when I saw the author's big introduction, because the other ancient novels are all systematic, such as Pangu's creation of the world, Hongjun's sermon, Lich War, Rise of the Human Race, Conferred God War, Journey to the West, what the hell, oh my god😱, but suddenly I saw these three words "Completed" after more than 100 chapters, and I despaired. Woooooooo π_π
It feels pretty good. The author's writing style is quite good. It doesn't feel like modern novels and has the feel of ancient storytelling. The performance of the characters needs to be improved, such as language, Chapter 1: "Pangu, you can't stop me!" In fact, it was changed to "Pangu! You can't stop me!" "Pangu! You can't stop me!" I think it will be better. Adding an exclamation point after Pangu will give you the crazy feeling when he is about to self-destruct, and then the next sentence will be more arrogant and conceited. It gives people the feeling of a peerless hero. Of course, I'm talking about the author's writing style, which should make it feel better. But I actually recommend writing the article in a more popular way, without a classical Chinese style. Readers will like it more if it is easier to understand. Just like this kind of tone, forget it, hahahaha, just pretend I didn't say it. Um. . . . You should also be more careful when dividing into paragraphs. A novel is not a composition, so there is no need to control the number of paragraphs. Haha😄, the above are all personal opinions, I only read a little bit, please forgive me if I am wrong. If you don't like it, don't spray----
Just the sentence ivu, it stimulated me 6 times today
There are no spiritual treasures, so why go to the wilderness? Obviously life-threatening!
Your sister, what the hell is your realm?
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Quick update
The protagonist is so weak
The author of this book_(??⊿ ∠)_ Is afraid that he wants to become an immortal
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Official(38)Scraped 1mo ago
The protagonist must have a brain disease. He is not very strong, so he carries his innate spiritual treasure around all day long. He is looking for death. Are you a fool from the 21st century?
If you don't practice well, you still mess around and run around
Oh shit
I wanted to read it when I saw the author's big introduction, because the other ancient novels are all systematic, such as Pangu's creation of the world, Hongjun's sermon, Lich War, Rise of the Human Race, Conferred God War, Journey to the West, what the hell, oh my god😱, but suddenly I saw these three words "Completed" after more than 100 chapters, and I despaired. Woooooooo π_π
It feels pretty good. The author's writing style is quite good. It doesn't feel like modern novels and has the feel of ancient storytelling. The performance of the characters needs to be improved, such as language, Chapter 1: "Pangu, you can't stop me!" In fact, it was changed to "Pangu! You can't stop me!" "Pangu! You can't stop me!" I think it will be better. Adding an exclamation point after Pangu will give you the crazy feeling when he is about to self-destruct, and then the next sentence will be more arrogant and conceited. It gives people the feeling of a peerless hero. Of course, I'm talking about the author's writing style, which should make it feel better. But I actually recommend writing the article in a more popular way, without a classical Chinese style. Readers will like it more if it is easier to understand. Just like this kind of tone, forget it, hahahaha, just pretend I didn't say it. Um. . . . You should also be more careful when dividing into paragraphs. A novel is not a composition, so there is no need to control the number of paragraphs. Haha😄, the above are all personal opinions, I only read a little bit, please forgive me if I am wrong. If you don't like it, don't spray----
Just the sentence ivu, it stimulated me 6 times today
There are no spiritual treasures, so why go to the wilderness? Obviously life-threatening!
Your sister, what the hell is your realm?
icon
Quick update
The protagonist is so weak
The author of this book_(??⊿ ∠)_ Is afraid that he wants to become an immortal









