
You Xianke
by Gnawing The Old Root Of Radish
About This Novel
Li Shan, who has never been favored by his father, has been away from home since he was a child. By chance, he stepped into the realm of cultivation. Facing the dangerous and dangerous world of cultivation, Li Shan struggled in it with ordinary money, and gradually made a name for himself. Cultivation is to cultivate life and fortune. Let's see how Li Shan avoids many crises and becomes a true immortal.
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Suggestions to the author (only from my own point of view, don't blame me)
The concept of the book is good, but (to be honest) the author's writing style can only be considered okay. Here, I suggest the author write only a small amount. After all, those chapters with funny chats and amusing chapters are not eye-catching, but just to relax and have fun occasionally. You need to figure out the priorities. There is also a story written by the author that is similar to a classical fairy tale. The unit "meter" appears frequently. I always feel that the atmosphere is wrong (maybe I am a little neurotic and care about these details). Moreover, I read it very carefully at the beginning and found that Pig's Feet naturally knows everything from a rookie who has never even passed a novice village. It seems quite loose. I hope the author pays attention (just take a look)
If you don't add more, you will be short of pocket money. Without pocket money, you can't buy things or show off. If you use your pocket money every day, you can let your female classmates see it. If you want to get the love of your female classmates, you must first have money. For the author your life is filled with love. I'll give it a good update for my book friends.
seniority in the family
In the ordinary fairy tale novels, in the same realm, there are junior brothers, junior sisters, senior brothers and senior sisters. The Qi training stage is called the foundation-building stage, master uncle, master and aunt. How come the later stage of Qi training is called the early stage Qi practice, and the early stage of Qi practice is called the late stage Qi practice uncle~
When I saw the word "Dad", I felt uncomfortable all over, and the other words were easier to understand.
Author: When you have only one child, you learn to be in debt. How will you live your life in the future?
Nice,,,
It seems that there have never been 3 updates. What do you think, author?
It's summer vacation, so I'll add more updates, just one picture
Isn't it summer vacation? Why is there still a picture?
Highly recommended
Great support. It's not easy to work out, and it's hard to write a novel. How about we talk to each other. Thank you for recommending a friend's work [Tearing the Galaxy].
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Official(45)Scraped 1mo ago
Suggestions to the author (only from my own point of view, don't blame me)
The concept of the book is good, but (to be honest) the author's writing style can only be considered okay. Here, I suggest the author write only a small amount. After all, those chapters with funny chats and amusing chapters are not eye-catching, but just to relax and have fun occasionally. You need to figure out the priorities. There is also a story written by the author that is similar to a classical fairy tale. The unit "meter" appears frequently. I always feel that the atmosphere is wrong (maybe I am a little neurotic and care about these details). Moreover, I read it very carefully at the beginning and found that Pig's Feet naturally knows everything from a rookie who has never even passed a novice village. It seems quite loose. I hope the author pays attention (just take a look)
If you don't add more, you will be short of pocket money. Without pocket money, you can't buy things or show off. If you use your pocket money every day, you can let your female classmates see it. If you want to get the love of your female classmates, you must first have money. For the author your life is filled with love. I'll give it a good update for my book friends.
seniority in the family
In the ordinary fairy tale novels, in the same realm, there are junior brothers, junior sisters, senior brothers and senior sisters. The Qi training stage is called the foundation-building stage, master uncle, master and aunt. How come the later stage of Qi training is called the early stage Qi practice, and the early stage of Qi practice is called the late stage Qi practice uncle~
When I saw the word "Dad", I felt uncomfortable all over, and the other words were easier to understand.
Author: When you have only one child, you learn to be in debt. How will you live your life in the future?
Nice,,,
It seems that there have never been 3 updates. What do you think, author?
It's summer vacation, so I'll add more updates, just one picture
Isn't it summer vacation? Why is there still a picture?
Highly recommended
Great support. It's not easy to work out, and it's hard to write a novel. How about we talk to each other. Thank you for recommending a friend's work [Tearing the Galaxy].













