Quick Wear: the Male Protagonist and Male Partner Are All Mine

It's a bit cruel to attack two people, the supporting actor and the male protagonist, but in the end choose to be with him alone. He stole the heart of one of them and threw him away. Isn't this cruel?

Because it was my first time writing, I didn't understand many parts. After completing the application, I discovered that I couldn't update the extra chapter. . . . So, adjust your thinking and try again. They say that every time we see each other again, it's for a better meeting next time, so let's meet next time. Next time, meet the next you, meet a better you, and a better me. The heroine's 12 time travels have not turned into what we ideally want, so for the sake of a better next heroine, let's continue to travel. Please continue to watch the sequel of "Quick Travel: The Hero and Couple Are Mine": "Quick Travel: The Next You"

I like He Xiangru better

I have an inexplicable liking for He Xiangru. Neither the heroine nor He Xiangru is lovable. I want this male supporting character to stand up. The heroine doesn't want me to want you.

To be honest, my thoughts after reading the first campus story were: First, the plot is not protracted, but the details are not handled well. Second, I think the author has too many irrelevant words. Some of your irrelevant words probably take up one side of the phone screen. Third, there are too many extra chapters. I could have written this in two or three chapters, but it was dragged out to about 10 chapters. Then there are some pitfalls that are really inexplicable. Don't say I don't understand. I just think some pitfalls are completely unnecessary. This is what I think. I write this book review very sincerely. But I know that writing a book will definitely get better as you write more, so I hope to improve.

Why can't the supporting male characters ever be happy? ! In the first plane, it is obvious that the relationship between each other is deeper, stronger and more obvious, but the heroine chooses the original hero, who hurts the heroine again and again. You are right, the relationship is weak, cowardly, timid, stupid, useless, inferior... No one knows that a super nb who was only 20 years old and in the prime of his youth with a promising future died quietly in the dark night. ; No one knows that a sweetheart who has a crush on him has been following her quietly and has never been discovered (the heroine once thought that his favorability would definitely be difficult to increase, but after looking at the prompter, she found that it was him who she loved until death); no one understands the pain of this unique genius. The secret love is really an undercurrent, and it is not obvious on the surface. This is a feeling that is injected into the soul, sincere and pure... DaDa finally whitewashed the original plot, and I was also drunk! The male protagonist He Youshen is absolutely unqualified! ! ! I hope that the heroine will never forget her original intention, forge ahead and return to her loving boyfriend.

The writing is messy, at the level of a novice! ! ! ! !

The author's writing is okay, but shouldn't the female protagonist and male protagonist appear in every chapter? Too wordy,

Watching the extra episode of He Xiangru, I felt a wave of emotion in my heart. I was very sad. Why didn't Sisi choose Xiangru? He obviously paid more! ! So this is the choice, I feel bad⊙⊙Xiangru

I like boys like Xiang Ru. We keep chasing the person in front but forget to look back at the person behind.