The Fight between Cultivators and Immortals is a Mistake
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With the system of cultivating immortals, travel through the world of house fighting The master's skills are all gone, and there are no resource copies at all. The script of cultivating immortals has turned into a house fight, which is already very miserable, and now it is being improved in strange directions again and again... Although cultivating immortality can add benefits to home fighting, fighting in the house will greatly delay the cultivation of immortality. Is it a happy home fighting or a lonely cultivation of immortality? Zhong Xiaoxin said: For a foodie, it is heaven if my rations are not deducted. Note: This article is not intended to be a heroine, and I am not happy about it either. It's a story about house fighting, funny jokes, and romance, with a male protagonist. There are also two completed stories, with the same imagination and character, girls are welcome to check them out.
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Official(46)Scraped 1mo ago
Looks tired
It's rubbish, the characters are created like ghosts, the heroine's IQ is negative, and she just wants to get involved in house fighting. The other characters in it are also weird. Since Bai Shizhong 2 has an insane IQ, he still has to forcefully fight in the house every time, and after failing, he becomes more frustrated and courageous? Also, the heroine's system of cultivating immortals is useless except for a water sword and being able to drown in water. The force values are all negative, okay? And then the male protagonist is too weak, right? Isn't he the emperor's younger brother? Isn't it okay to send a secret guard to protect the heroine? Every time something is over, he says he is useless. I feel like there is nothing useful in the whole article. Then does the heroine have too much virginity? It's okay to be poisoned several times. You obviously have the strength to refuse, and you have the backing, but you still pretend to be a noob. The plot of forced house fighting is too far-fetched. After reading this, I just want to say one thing, what is the author's brain circuit?
Ye Qing and Ye Qing were also pitiful. These two people were treated as scapegoats and taken to the underworld by the Bull-headed Horse Face. When they found out that they had arrested the wrong person, the Bull-headed Horse Face immediately compensated them. The poor two people, one with a house-fighting system came to the world of cultivating immortals, and the other with a system of cultivating immortals arrived in the world of house-fighting. They entered the wrong place!
Isn't it about cultivating immortality? It's all a house fight, it's annoying to me. It's like the heroine has never seen a man before and doesn't practice any more. She just waits for a man every night. .
Tell the truth! The subject matter is okay but the writing style looks really tired! ! !
I really couldn't stand it after reading about 200 chapters. If it weren't for the attractive story, I wouldn't have been able to endure the terrible writing style for so long. But the author still insisted on finishing it, eh! I applaud her efforts, but I have to say that this style looks really tired!
A brainless heroine?
Author, are you really good at writing the heroine to be as brainless as the Virgin Mary? You have a powerful ability, even though your opponent feeds you poison, you still keep jumping.
fine
The overall story is okay, very funny, and people can't help but laugh. Some of the twists are also very interesting, and there is a sense of suspense. I keep looking for the boos behind the scenes, but they are always specious and attractive. For example, when I was looking for the boos behind the scenes, I actually considered that person like the protagonist, but I excluded him because that person is really a victim, which is quite miserable... In addition, the system of cultivating immortals is not very prominent. Although the body of Zhaidou cannot be strengthened, it does have some pitfalls. Also, the ending is a bit weird. I feel like I, like Qi Xiaodao, are cultivating the Taoist system, but in the end they can only become Western gods. The reversal is a bit weird. Personally, I still prefer the Chinese system, and the clues are a bit messy. Although the pitfalls are filled in perfectly, I always feel that the system of cultivating immortals and Zhaidou is not well integrated. Then there is the extra story. After watching it, I felt lucky that the heroine did not travel through the world of immortality. I still prefer the ancient style and do not like the Western fairy tale system. Not to mention that Ye Qing was an egg when he traveled through time, and the NPC he met after he came out of his shell was a stallion. Not to mention the life experience of the male protagonist, it still felt like a Western fairy tale world. There was a feeling that the background of the world and the background of the characters were mixed...
Ye Qing saw that his father had a stepmother and a bunch of concubines and children. This father had the nerve to say that he had never met Ye Qing. The first time they met was in Ye Qing's mother's womb. It was indeed a family fight! There are so many concubines and children, it's impossible not to fight! Come on, come on, win them all.
No wonder there are so many comments from more than 800 people
This is all off topic, okay? The system of cultivating immortals has a ghost purpose? It's better not to have anything
I saw Chapter 65 and saw that man appear, and I couldn't stand it anymore.
The author will update soon, I look forward to the follow-up
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Official(46)Scraped 1mo ago
Looks tired
It's rubbish, the characters are created like ghosts, the heroine's IQ is negative, and she just wants to get involved in house fighting. The other characters in it are also weird. Since Bai Shizhong 2 has an insane IQ, he still has to forcefully fight in the house every time, and after failing, he becomes more frustrated and courageous? Also, the heroine's system of cultivating immortals is useless except for a water sword and being able to drown in water. The force values are all negative, okay? And then the male protagonist is too weak, right? Isn't he the emperor's younger brother? Isn't it okay to send a secret guard to protect the heroine? Every time something is over, he says he is useless. I feel like there is nothing useful in the whole article. Then does the heroine have too much virginity? It's okay to be poisoned several times. You obviously have the strength to refuse, and you have the backing, but you still pretend to be a noob. The plot of forced house fighting is too far-fetched. After reading this, I just want to say one thing, what is the author's brain circuit?
Ye Qing and Ye Qing were also pitiful. These two people were treated as scapegoats and taken to the underworld by the Bull-headed Horse Face. When they found out that they had arrested the wrong person, the Bull-headed Horse Face immediately compensated them. The poor two people, one with a house-fighting system came to the world of cultivating immortals, and the other with a system of cultivating immortals arrived in the world of house-fighting. They entered the wrong place!
Isn't it about cultivating immortality? It's all a house fight, it's annoying to me. It's like the heroine has never seen a man before and doesn't practice any more. She just waits for a man every night. .
Tell the truth! The subject matter is okay but the writing style looks really tired! ! !
I really couldn't stand it after reading about 200 chapters. If it weren't for the attractive story, I wouldn't have been able to endure the terrible writing style for so long. But the author still insisted on finishing it, eh! I applaud her efforts, but I have to say that this style looks really tired!
A brainless heroine?
Author, are you really good at writing the heroine to be as brainless as the Virgin Mary? You have a powerful ability, even though your opponent feeds you poison, you still keep jumping.
fine
The overall story is okay, very funny, and people can't help but laugh. Some of the twists are also very interesting, and there is a sense of suspense. I keep looking for the boos behind the scenes, but they are always specious and attractive. For example, when I was looking for the boos behind the scenes, I actually considered that person like the protagonist, but I excluded him because that person is really a victim, which is quite miserable... In addition, the system of cultivating immortals is not very prominent. Although the body of Zhaidou cannot be strengthened, it does have some pitfalls. Also, the ending is a bit weird. I feel like I, like Qi Xiaodao, are cultivating the Taoist system, but in the end they can only become Western gods. The reversal is a bit weird. Personally, I still prefer the Chinese system, and the clues are a bit messy. Although the pitfalls are filled in perfectly, I always feel that the system of cultivating immortals and Zhaidou is not well integrated. Then there is the extra story. After watching it, I felt lucky that the heroine did not travel through the world of immortality. I still prefer the ancient style and do not like the Western fairy tale system. Not to mention that Ye Qing was an egg when he traveled through time, and the NPC he met after he came out of his shell was a stallion. Not to mention the life experience of the male protagonist, it still felt like a Western fairy tale world. There was a feeling that the background of the world and the background of the characters were mixed...
Ye Qing saw that his father had a stepmother and a bunch of concubines and children. This father had the nerve to say that he had never met Ye Qing. The first time they met was in Ye Qing's mother's womb. It was indeed a family fight! There are so many concubines and children, it's impossible not to fight! Come on, come on, win them all.
No wonder there are so many comments from more than 800 people
This is all off topic, okay? The system of cultivating immortals has a ghost purpose? It's better not to have anything
I saw Chapter 65 and saw that man appear, and I couldn't stand it anymore.
The author will update soon, I look forward to the follow-up
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Holding the golden finger of cultivating immortals but traveling through the script of a house fight, I believe everyone would be depressed, right? ! Our heroine is such an unlucky person. First, they caught the wrong person, and in order to make up for it, they allowed him to travel to the world of immortality and have a golden finger. But in the end, something went wrong and he entered the world of house fighting. What do you think this is?
When the immortal cultivation system enters the world of house fighting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡💕🌸
The beginning is very attractive~ The heroine who wants to become an immortal is kicked by a bull-headed horse and is thrown into the world of house fighting√ Welcome everyone to read Alan's new book~
Well, it's a very humorous and joyful ancient novel. The heroine jumps into the fire pit of the world of house fighting with her immortality cultivation system ^O^😄. She lights up her immortality cultivation skills in the house fight. It's very fun to watch!
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