Mysterious Rift Valley
by Lao Ming
About This Novel
In 1981, a Chinese geologist took two of his students to Africa for investigation. They accidentally discovered a 1.5 Billion-year-old nuclear reactor fossil on Mount Kenya. If this discovery was true, it would overturn the origin of human development on earth, so they did not dare to make this conclusion. Later, they came to the Great Rift Valley, and many bizarre stories happened one after another... This is a science fiction novel. The universe is full of wonders. The earth has existed for billions of years. Before we humans appeared, it was the Cretaceous era, when dinosaurs were rampant. So, what about before the Cretaceous? What does the earth look like? No one can tell clearly.
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Official(1)Scraped 1mo ago
How to say it? The author does have potential, but the writing is too rigid. He can try to describe more actions and not pay too much attention to language expression. You can also say this in another way, for example: William looked solemn: "We can't stay here for too long." Moreover, the language used by the characters in the plot is too oriental and does not have the charm of Westerners, such as the translation accent. For example, "What are you doing, you idiot?" Is changed to a translation tone: "Oh my God, look at all these stupid things you do, you guy with water in your head!" Of course, there is no need to use translation accents too deliberately, sometimes using these translation accents will produce undesirable effects. Be careful to use it flexibly. The author can read more good literary works and try to use the writing techniques in them. I hope you can create better works.
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Official(1)Scraped 1mo ago
How to say it? The author does have potential, but the writing is too rigid. He can try to describe more actions and not pay too much attention to language expression. You can also say this in another way, for example: William looked solemn: "We can't stay here for too long." Moreover, the language used by the characters in the plot is too oriental and does not have the charm of Westerners, such as the translation accent. For example, "What are you doing, you idiot?" Is changed to a translation tone: "Oh my God, look at all these stupid things you do, you guy with water in your head!" Of course, there is no need to use translation accents too deliberately, sometimes using these translation accents will produce undesirable effects. Be careful to use it flexibly. The author can read more good literary works and try to use the writing techniques in them. I hope you can create better works.
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