Fairy Atlas

The male protagonist destroys the female protagonist's appearance; the female protagonist helps the male protagonist, and the male protagonist even draws swords against the female protagonist, intending to kill and silence her, but there is no way, the male protagonist is the male protagonist, and the female protagonist turns into an idiot as soon as she is in front of the male protagonist. The female protagonist may have a masochistic constitution, and the more cruel she is to her, the more she likes her. At first the male protagonist was coquettish, but the female protagonist took the initiative to ask for a kiss and a hug, expressing her feelings to the male protagonist. The male protagonist was still coquettish and reluctantly relaxed. The male protagonist suffered a blood feud and later jumped into the abyss during the Lotus Platform Meeting. During this period, he did not explain to the female protagonist, not even a word. The female protagonist follows her life and death and vows to avenge the male protagonist. She has practiced hard for two hundred years and risked her life to avenge the male protagonist. What happened to the male protagonist? The next second after the heroine took revenge, yes, it was the next second, no more, no less, just right. It was strange, I was surprised too. I also blamed the heroine for being nosy, and I should have done it myself. I was so surprised. The enemy of the heroine and the hero vowed to fight two hundred years later. I don't believe that he doesn't know. I don't believe that he would have to walk to the lotus platform. I really want to ask what the male protagonist is doing? Not only did the male protagonist fail to pamper the female protagonist, he actually put the female protagonist in danger time and time again and made her die for him. The two fell in love deeply, and then they had sex. Both of them were respectable people, but the male protagonist only wanted to eat meat and never thought about holding a double cultivation ceremony. Let alone mention it, I never thought about it. Is this a sign that a man really likes the female protagonist? If so, then I am really ignorant. It caused many people to talk about the female protagonist. There are no other female protagonists in other families. They are really a couple of gods and gods! Coming to the world of Shenxiao, the heroine was involuntarily disturbed by Huai Su after breaking through the middle stage of divine transformation. Seeing that the hero thought he was Zi Ying, she felt a little inexplicable and did not want to be too close to the hero. The heroine was under double psychological pressure, feeling guilty and involuntarily being disturbed. What did our male protagonist do at this time? He had a cold war with the heroine with a **** look on his face. He kept in a cold war, proposed separation, and even refused to meet the heroine several times when he went to the store. The two decided to practice, and the female protagonist decided to split up. The male protagonist looked incredulous (I used to make the decision, she only asked for details, but now she actually rejected my proposal, why should she) Yes, the male protagonist thought this way, that's what he thought. He felt that his position was shaken. It can be called the classic pinnacle thought of male chauvinism, Niu Niu Niu. He has paid almost nothing for the heroine, but he requires the heroine to always think about him and revolve around him. What does the hero do with it? I understand, the male protagonist is there to cause trouble and control the female protagonist? ? ? The weirdest thing among weirdos, the weirdest thing is that in the last chapter, the heroine said to the male protagonist (probably it means don't use your face to attract bees and butterflies). The male protagonist said: "Find something for you to do" (he basically meant to find something for you to do, okay?) The whole book is quite well written. Although the male protagonist is a sinkhole, the rest of the book is pretty good. Considering that it is not easy for the author to write a book and the content is good, I gave it three stars.

Yunji's writing style is very good, showing us a majestic world of cultivating immortals. Just as the cover says, "From now on, you are no longer a reader, but someone in the story." The only disadvantage of this book is that the male protagonist appears too late.

We were enemies of life and death in the previous life, but we will remain our enemies until death in this life, but we are still us. This is a very long book, from the Qi refining period to ascension. It is a novel about self-cultivation. Since one is cultivating immortality, reincarnation is inevitable. Lingyu's previous life, Huaisu, practiced the ruthless way, and Xu Ni's previous life, Ziying, practiced the ruthless way. Huaisu and Ziying were enemies of life and death, but Lingyu and Xu Ni fell in love. Because they love each other and want to stay together, both of them resist their past lives. However, his cultivation in his previous life far exceeded his own, and he would inevitably transform into his previous personality, which caused the two to be separated by life and death several times. It makes people deeply feel that a person's greatest enemy is himself. But whether it is the past life or this life, they are actually the same person. It's just that different experiences formed their own paths. Both Huaisu and Lingyu had many hardships, but Lingyu had a master, a friend, a lover, and experienced the beauty of life. Therefore, Huaisu was cold, while Lingyu had a warm heart. Zi Ying was a born spiritual body when he was born, and naturally had no emotions or desires, while Xu Ni was once a living human being, and he had his own loves and hates. Xu Ni named their home in Wumeng Mountain as Chuxinju to remind them not to forget their original intention in this life. It is precisely because of the persistence and perseverance of the two that they can still maintain themselves after the fusion of memories and defeat their previous selves. However, Huai Su and Zi Ying received completely different memories from their previous lives and could no longer maintain their own ways. Then I understood why the Cangming Realm is much longer than the Human Realm. The experiences in the Cangming world have shaped their self in this life and are the foundation of their lives in this life. Cultivation to immortality is a long time. Seeing Lingyu's cultivation gradually improving and spending a long time, and then following her to see the road she has walked and the people she has met, all the memories are overwhelming. It really makes me cry every minute. In the final battle at the end, I almost thought it was going to be over, but I didn't expect that there were a lot of foreshadowings, twists and turns, and a hopeful ending. Speaking of foreshadowing, some of the foreshadowings are really buried too deep, I admire them. There are also some minor issues regarding the male protagonist. 1. Regarding whether a novel about cultivating immortals should have a male protagonist, I think it depends on the theme. If the female protagonist in this book does not fall in love with the male protagonist, wouldn't it be the same as her previous life, and the female protagonist herself will not grow much. 2. Regarding Xu Ni, the male protagonist of this book, he is different from other male protagonists because he met a Lingyu who is truly not inferior to men. Women can also do a good job in protecting their loved ones~ So although there is a male protagonist, this article is definitely a strong female novel~

I bought 200 chapters but abandoned the article on 189 chapters. I was wrong. I should have run away when the male protagonist ruined the heroine's appearance as soon as he appeared... I shouldn't have waited until the author forcibly added a mental retarded buff to the heroine and then forcibly formed a CP before running away... I went to Da Vinci to take a look, and it turned out that the story was going to be the kind of story where the male protagonist is always overpowering the female protagonist, and the female protagonist turns into a decorative light bulb when she meets the male protagonist. It's called a story about a strong woman who is actually a strong slave. When will female authors stop using male protagonists to feed female readers in their novels about strong women? ? ? I don't understand. I hope that in the future there will be more women's literature that purely serves readers of this type like men's literature. Strong women are all about strong women, not pampering wives; sadistic stories are meant to torture the male protagonist and the supporting characters, not the female protagonist; sweet stories are also fine for doting and falling in love, but don't pick men out of the trash. The reality is... Then please come up with a higher intention and better writing style. Female authors, remember, words are powerful.

When I saw some people saying that they stopped reading because of some people's comments, I couldn't help but say a few words. I read this novel a few years ago. The first one I read was the author's "It's Hard to Find an Immortal", which made me fall in love with the heroine who cultivates immortality. Although the ending of this novel was very rushed. Her other work, The Atlas of Immortals and Immortals, is also recommended on the Internet. To be honest, I just started reading the first few chapters and couldn't read them very much, because the content explained in the wedge has no connection with what follows. I can't help but come back to it again, look at it carefully, and I can't stop. The author's logic is clear from the beginning, and there are a lot of foreshadowings about the man behind the plot. Every adventure of the heroine is full of dangers, and every advancement brings insights. As for why she cultivates immortality, that is, Taoist heart, she started out as a swordsman. The novel says that the essence of swordsmanship is to be straightforward, take things as they come, and be straight when the boat reaches the bridge. The typical example is her good friend Qian Jiale. Her path was so smooth that she still retained kindness and innocence in her character. If she hadn't had the experience of having her Dantian shattered, I think she would have been an excellent swordsman. But after all, it was not the right path for her. Later, after she turned to Buddhist practice, she finally understood her purpose of cultivating immortality. "I want to go to a higher place, feel more wind and rain, and see more beautiful scenery..." No one knows where their path is and what is right from the beginning. Just like Xu Jibo, the reborn person specially written by the author, even if she knows the ending and some details, her path will still be full of thorns. As for the male protagonist, Xu Ni, regardless of the fact that in his previous life, Ziying Tianjun cultivated the path of ruthlessness, he has lived for hundreds of thousands or even millions of years but still does not understand what love is. His experience after reincarnation left his own character deficient. A person who has been tortured since childhood and grew up in an environment lacking love is unlikely to have a sunny personality. Xu Zheng is his opposite, a clear contrast. When he first met the heroine, he scratched her face. Later, when he found out, he withdrew his sword and said, "It would be a pity for a girl to lose her appearance." I thought this was a rare and gentle word from him. And this is probably the first time the heroine has been said like this. After all, the men she met before didn't really treat her as a girl. There was also a brief encounter later. Some people said that Xu Ni drew his sword against Lingyu. I think this is okay. After all, this is Xu Ni's biggest secret and a major matter related to the lives of many people. They were not who they were at that time, so it was normal for them to react subconsciously. When did Xu Shun start to like her? He probably admired her at the beginning, and then formed a mutual agreement and became the person he trusted the most. When he was confused, he was solved by Lingyu, and he listened to her playing the song "Feng Qiuhuang", and his heart felt ripples. He had also questioned whether he had Cheng Junying or Cheng Lingyu in his heart. When she said she would give him a chance, his inner joy may be due to the inexplicable unhappiness she felt when she and Xu Zheng were together. But he couldn't make a promise because he was afraid of no future, so he refused her. Because it took a long time, I can only remember the outline of the subsequent plot. Throughout the whole article, I can't dislike Xu Ni. After reading the beginning for the second time, I found that Zi Ying is the person Huai Su hates the most. Needless to say, the person Huai Su hates the most is the sword cultivator. Why? Zi Ying was the one who destroyed her fairy book (inferred from "If you destroy my fairy book, I'm not done with you"). Later, when Xu Ni drew his sword against Lingyu, it was the fairy book that helped Zi Ying restore the sword to its original appearance. During the second brush, I felt that people who hated each other in the previous life fell in love with each other in this life. The disciples and grandsons of Ziying Tianjun in Shangzhen Palace were so surprised when they found out that their Tianjun was actually with Danxiao Yuanjun. Tsk, forgive me for the spoilers, but I couldn't help it. Although it is said that there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. This is a personal wish and no one requires you to like it. However, I think that for an author who has worked hard to write a novel, it is better not to leave a negative review easily. And if you read it carefully, you may be able to discover its shining points.

At the beginning, after reading about a hundred chapters, I felt that the author's writing was very good and the heroine's struggle experience was also very inspiring. However, after more than 700 chapters, something became more and more strange. The heroine turned into a licker when she met the hero. No matter how indifferent he was, she would fight with Zhao Ming for the hero. As a result, the hero didn't come sooner or later. He waited until the duel was over with the heroine bruised and bruised, and even said affectionately that he would not kill Zhao Ming according to the heroine's wishes. All of a sudden, this guy took the credit for defeating Zhao Ming. After the fight, he took advantage of the heroine's innocence on the way back and then focused on killing Zhao Ming. He didn't care about the heroine following behind, which was outrageous! The male protagonist is also very contradictory in his behavior. It feels like he doesn't love the heroine at all. He is only with the heroine because she is the only woman who is willing to contact him... He took the flute made by the heroine and gave back a gift with a special hint. The heroine just She knows how to be a girl and go through fire and water for the hero. The heroine is becoming more and more mature in her dealings with others, but she is really silly and sweet in relationships. She doesn't look like she has lived for nearly 400 years. This bitch does one thing when he is practicing dual cultivation, and then runs away after finishing it. The movie handles her own affairs and loves him so much. The female protagonist trusts the male protagonist in everything. As a result, this bitch man doesn't discuss anything with the female protagonist. What he also wants to complain about is that the female protagonist in the heroine novel is always weaker than the male protagonist, no matter what Don't you think this setting is weird when your cultivation level is always one level lower than that of the male protagonist? The cultivation level of the Child of Destiny has always been chasing each other. There is no saying which person is the most powerful, but the male protagonist is always stronger than the female protagonist and always more mature than the female protagonist in doing things. I saw some people complaining about the male and female protagonists in book reviews before, and some thought it was normal, but personally I couldn't stand the male protagonist's character. Now that I've read Chapter 734, even though it is indeed a very good article without the male and female protagonists, I want to abandon the article because of the male and female protagonists.

When I read the beginning, I couldn't tell whether it was a boy or a girl. [Emot=default,14/]

I felt that the male protagonist ruined this book. I originally thought that the female protagonist had no CP, but then I didn't expect that there would be a male protagonist, and I didn't expect that the male protagonist would be like this. He is not good to the female protagonist, and always drags the female protagonist down (in my eyes, the male protagonist is the female protagonist's drag). The female protagonist has a great path to immortality, but everything changes after meeting the male protagonist. Alas, I feel that the male protagonist is not good.

To judge objectively, the book Immortal Spirit Atlas is poorly written, mainly because the protagonist lacks highlights. The protagonist Lingyu should be the reincarnation of a top monk in ancient times, but in this life she has a weird temperament, a vulgar character, and incorrect outlook. She does not have the demeanor of an advanced cultivator at all, making people unable to feel the immortality. Lingyu's philistine attitude of being only interested in profit and not being able to afford early life without profit runs through the whole book. The supporting character Xu Jibo has an adventure not long after the beginning of the story and can see some things that will happen in the future. Therefore, Xu Jibo keeps trying to seize the opportunity and show his scheming. In fact, Lingyu is also the same kind of person. However, the author looks down on Xu Jibo and steps on Xu Jibo from Lingyu's perspective. It is puzzling. Xu Jibo only created opportunities for himself and created some obstacles for Lingyu, and did not deal harshly with Lingyu. However, Lingyu regarded Xu Jibo as an enemy and even had murderous intentions. In the end, Lingyu privately threatened Xu Jibo and made Xu confess all the secrets and recognize herself as the master, which reflected Lingyu's deep scheming. Another example is a young man who was forced by the evil cultivator Wangli to help Mr. Wangli kill many monks. Later, in order to escape, the young man cooperated with Lingyu and killed Wangli. Although the young man had a favor for rescuing Lingyu, don't forget that the young man was also a collaborator and did many evil things. He only saved Lingyu for himself, but Lingyu did not distinguish between right and wrong. He took the young man back to his sect and recommended him as a disciple. For another example, when Lingyu was traveling on a successful trip, she accidentally rescued Yuan Ruolan, mother and son, and their family of three who were in the Qi refining stage. Originally, it was a piece of cake for Jindan Zhenren to save several Qi refining stages, but how did Lingyu do it? Not only did she take the treasure donated by Yuan Ruolan's son, but she also forced the family of three to form a soul contract and recognize herself as the master. Later, she forced Yuan Ruolan's husband to recognize her as the master again and accept all four members of the family as her servants. Such low-level style is rarely seen in other novels! Based on this logic, should Canghua, Lingyu's master, also let Lingyu and Lingyu's master make a soul contract with him as the master? Should Lingyu's master Wei Wuyan let Lingyu make a soul contract with him as his master? A high-level monk is so unsure of himself? Are you worried that others will betray you, so you would easily make someone make a soul contract to enslave others? I wonder if the author came out of a slave society! Furthermore, while traveling, Lingyu met the son of an evil cultivator who captured a female cultivator to make a furnace. However, Lingyu was only concerned about whether he could build a bridge to find the treasure, and finally let go of the evil cultivator. Xu Zheng, one of the protagonists, likes to play with low-level female cultivators, but Lingyu not only has no objection to him, but thinks that she is open-minded and free-spirited, and she becomes friends with him. All the above show that Lingyu lacks the concept of right and wrong, and basically does not consider morality when dealing with the world. He only handles problems based on whether it is beneficial to himself and whether he can obtain substantial benefits, which completely deviates from the Tao. The author failed in shaping the protagonist. It is difficult for readers to be interested in reading such a novel.

This is generally well written, but the male protagonist is off-putting. Every time the heroine encounters an accident, the male protagonist is always unable to intervene. He talks about saving him, but ends up always being trapped in one place. Instead, he has to ask the heroine to save him. He also cannot feel the feelings of the hero towards the heroine. Every time the things in the past life are dealt with, it is the heroine who is trying her best. , The male protagonist just couldn't feel it, and the male protagonist's memory was changed by Qingsuo's scabbard, and he almost killed the heroine. The male protagonist who recovered his memory didn't express anything, and he still carried the scabbard with him every day to warm her up. When the heroine asked him for it, he didn't give it to him. Anyway, he was disgusted with the male protagonist and felt that he was not worthy of the heroine.