The Omnipotent Space of Rebirth

The heroine is such an idiot, she came back from the apocalypse and still behaves like this. The male protagonist appears out of nowhere and the article is very confusing. No clue.

The introduction written by the author is very GOOd, but the content seems a bit inaccurate. In the 1980s, there were people selling Mogu for 5 yuan a pound. Even if someone sold it, no one would buy it. The writing is a bit inconsistent with the social situation of the 1980s. I recommend the author to read more books from the 1980s.

It would be great if there was no male protagonist, why should there be a male protagonist? As soon as I saw a male protagonist appear, I gave up writing it.

Running account, so boring(~_~;) Is the heroine a pig? Not wary of other people at all. He deserved to be killed in his last life. When he saw the male protagonist, he revealed his secret (??_??) I can't stand it anymore, speechless??

The heroine comes from the end of the world. Why is she so naive? Not long after she met Luo Dongchen, she gave her the marrow-washing fruit and gave him the cultivation technique. If she changes her mind in the future, she doesn't know how she will die. She has no guard against others.

Although I like reading space rebirth stories, the author made the heroine so defenseless and gave everything to the hero. This is too stupid. She already told the hero some of her secrets within a few days of meeting her at the beginning.

The male protagonist becomes attracted to the female protagonist so quickly? Moreover, mushrooms cost five yuan per catty, while meat only cost a few cents per catty in those days. When writing, could you check the basic information first and not be so outrageous?

To be honest, it was okay at the beginning, but I couldn't stand it as I went on. I felt that the heroine was just like a rice bug. She didn't practice any more. She had nothing to do all day long and had no ambition at all. She had completely become a housewife. She also felt that her three children were not raised properly. Especially the daughter Zhuzhu. She didn't know how to respect people at all. She just gave people nicknames when they met for the first time. The hero and heroine didn't care.

The progress between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too fast, right? The male protagonist is just saved by the female protagonist, and the male protagonist is locked in for life. He also said that he would give his body to me to please him. This is modern, but he still promised his body to him. Besides, the male protagonist is too sinister, right? They only met once a few times, and it was just that the heroine saved the hero, so the hero locked the heroine to him tyrannically, preventing her from contact with other men. Come on, I am the heroine, so there should be many men who like her. You ruined the heroine's future luck in just a few chapters. It's boring to everyone else, come on. If you want to write about the emotional issues at the back, why would you write about the previous ones? If you want to write about the cruelty at the end, don't you think the previous part was in vain? If you write so sweetly at the beginning and then make it so cruel to others, you will definitely abandon the article. The front and back have to be compared, you know?

Not long after the heroine was reborn, a man came out and said he liked her. I was speechless. How old is the heroine! ! ! I give up decisively and can't stand it anymore