The Female Character Wearing a Book Wants to Become an Immortal
About This Novel
As an unknown female supporting character in a book, Bai Mingyue has no intention of becoming a villain. She just wants to work hard to cultivate immortality so that she can reach the pinnacle of life and become an immortal. But he didn't expect that as he continued to practice, he discovered that he actually had thighs, thicker than the heroine's. . . --Time flies by like this, and all that can be grasped is the original heart that is swaying in it. As long as the Taoist heart remains the same, even if the world turns upside down, I can still reach the top and soar. For the fairyland chapter, please read the new book "The Female Couple Who Wears a Book to Become an Immortal"~
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Official(140)Scraped 23d ago
Alas, the major route is bullshit. Let me give you 5 stars
Is there something wrong with Ice Wind Spiritual Root's majoring in formations? Ice Wind Spiritual Root can either do sword cultivation or magic cultivation. Xiu Xian 4 Art is just an auxiliary nanny. If she has no strength, it is nonsense. One sword can break through all kinds of magic. This heroine thinks that she majored in formations when she was trapped in the formation peak and killed the Qingyun Sect in the original text. If you don't have the strength, you'll die in the hands of others when it's time to set up your formation. If you don't want to die, you'd better practice hard.
No ratings, just comments
When I read the first few chapters, I felt that the author's writing style was good, the "personality" established for the heroine was also good, the description of the mood was also very good, and the foreshadowing was very good. But! I want to say that just because the front is so good, what follows seems a bit "not three or four". I want to write the kind of "I am not in the world, but there is still a legend about my brother in the world". However, you are too eager to achieve success, and it feels like a running account. Also, what's the heroine's idea of following the original heroine's butt to pick up leaks? It's too low! Also, if you think about what the "original heroine" is like when you do everything, then why write about it! (The above is just my personal feeling, don't comment if you don't like it!) (I once encountered a normal comment that was banned and reported to me, so...)
It feels like it's all written in one stroke, with no emotional overtones.
It feels like it's all written in one stroke, with no emotional overtones. Trying to fit in always gets kicked out
A little bit of reflection
I really like novels such as "The Book Girl and the Immortal Cultivation", and when I read the introduction of this book, I thought it was quite interesting. But after reading more than 30 chapters, I felt that the development of the story was either unclear or nonsensical. There are many typos, the plot is confusing, and the sentences are not very coherent. Finally, I hope that the author can check the outline more often when writing, check more how the sentences are written, and take a closer look at the thoughts of book friends.
It should be you don't look at me
It should be a change
fine
Is the male protagonist the female protagonist's senior brother? I like the heroine, she is amazing, mainly because she is handsome and gentle.
personal feeling
Since it comes from the Ice Spirit Root, it would be better to major in swordsmanship, and alchemy is also pretty good. I think the Ice Spirit Root is more lethal, but if you just learn it as an assistant, well, you don't have that feeling.
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The plot is a bit incoherent It was said earlier that it takes almost a hundred years to cultivate the first level of Nascent Soul, but it turns out that the Nascent Soul will be perfected in the next 20 to 30 years. Earlier, it was said that only a few people can transform into gods within two hundred years. The heroine said that it was impossible for her. Later, the heroine lamented that it is difficult to transform into gods before the age of a hundred! ! ! Is it that simple to realize something? How many times has the heroine realized this? There are also many typos But the story content is okay Come on, Dad!
Um
This is the author's first time writing a novel! The writing is a bit immature, and I personally found it a bit awkward. The language is too concise, the plot progresses too quickly, and the heroine's character is not outstanding and some parts look a bit stiff. The author can have any idea of the story, but it would be better if he put more effort into his writing style. Personal thoughts
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Official(140)Scraped 23d ago
Alas, the major route is bullshit. Let me give you 5 stars
Is there something wrong with Ice Wind Spiritual Root's majoring in formations? Ice Wind Spiritual Root can either do sword cultivation or magic cultivation. Xiu Xian 4 Art is just an auxiliary nanny. If she has no strength, it is nonsense. One sword can break through all kinds of magic. This heroine thinks that she majored in formations when she was trapped in the formation peak and killed the Qingyun Sect in the original text. If you don't have the strength, you'll die in the hands of others when it's time to set up your formation. If you don't want to die, you'd better practice hard.
No ratings, just comments
When I read the first few chapters, I felt that the author's writing style was good, the "personality" established for the heroine was also good, the description of the mood was also very good, and the foreshadowing was very good. But! I want to say that just because the front is so good, what follows seems a bit "not three or four". I want to write the kind of "I am not in the world, but there is still a legend about my brother in the world". However, you are too eager to achieve success, and it feels like a running account. Also, what's the heroine's idea of following the original heroine's butt to pick up leaks? It's too low! Also, if you think about what the "original heroine" is like when you do everything, then why write about it! (The above is just my personal feeling, don't comment if you don't like it!) (I once encountered a normal comment that was banned and reported to me, so...)
It feels like it's all written in one stroke, with no emotional overtones.
It feels like it's all written in one stroke, with no emotional overtones. Trying to fit in always gets kicked out
A little bit of reflection
I really like novels such as "The Book Girl and the Immortal Cultivation", and when I read the introduction of this book, I thought it was quite interesting. But after reading more than 30 chapters, I felt that the development of the story was either unclear or nonsensical. There are many typos, the plot is confusing, and the sentences are not very coherent. Finally, I hope that the author can check the outline more often when writing, check more how the sentences are written, and take a closer look at the thoughts of book friends.
It should be you don't look at me
It should be a change
fine
Is the male protagonist the female protagonist's senior brother? I like the heroine, she is amazing, mainly because she is handsome and gentle.
personal feeling
Since it comes from the Ice Spirit Root, it would be better to major in swordsmanship, and alchemy is also pretty good. I think the Ice Spirit Root is more lethal, but if you just learn it as an assistant, well, you don't have that feeling.
Complain about it
The plot is a bit incoherent It was said earlier that it takes almost a hundred years to cultivate the first level of Nascent Soul, but it turns out that the Nascent Soul will be perfected in the next 20 to 30 years. Earlier, it was said that only a few people can transform into gods within two hundred years. The heroine said that it was impossible for her. Later, the heroine lamented that it is difficult to transform into gods before the age of a hundred! ! ! Is it that simple to realize something? How many times has the heroine realized this? There are also many typos But the story content is okay Come on, Dad!
Um
This is the author's first time writing a novel! The writing is a bit immature, and I personally found it a bit awkward. The language is too concise, the plot progresses too quickly, and the heroine's character is not outstanding and some parts look a bit stiff. The author can have any idea of the story, but it would be better if he put more effort into his writing style. Personal thoughts
