Transform into an Iceberg Goddess

Author Lily?, Lily? Lily?, I didn't read the novel, I only read the book reviews. Recently, I read Lily's article without shame, and I want to ask Lily,

Hey hey hey! Let me count. There are about 15 billion cells in the human brain. If one cell is consumed every time you type a word, you will be fine, right? You can type for a lifetime!

Your writing made me a little confused. I really don't know how you came up with the outline. To be honest, when I read the introduction of your book, I thought it was an entertainment novel. Only when I was halfway through did I realize that I still didn't understand it. 🙃🙃 Also, you wrote that the protagonist happened to travel to a pregnant mother-to-be. I think the protagonist should slowly forget about some of the previous concepts of boys. Slowly changing towards femininity, just like some of our things slowly fade over time. Also, I think the protagonist's system should add some tasks, otherwise it would be boring just reading the protagonist's daily writing. Well, I still hope the author can improve it in the future. If possible, I think the author can make the protagonist a star, hehe. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Also, come on, the author! Sao Nian, let us witness the growth of the protagonist! 😘😘😘

Why can't I make it?

Great job! I've read a lot of transformation stories and met a lot of book eunuchs, so I know that writing this kind of book is difficult, so I'll work hard! Support you! ! !

Am I, (feeling perverted)

I feel like the main character's sister is useless and a nymphomaniac. I feel sick when I see her. Everything else is good.

My personal opinion about the Marriage Party is that since you become a girl, the hormones, the environment, and the gentleness of boys towards girls, etc., Will subtly affect the protagonist's point of view. I read the transformation story to experience what it's like to be a girl. When substituting, put yourself as a girl. Lily at first, then married, it felt like this was the only logical thing to do. Please be fair and don't comment if you don't like it!

Is the author interested in writing a high-tech novel? For example, a boy who looks like a girl was sent to the hospital in order to save a little girl from a car accident. He was mistakenly injected with a mysterious drug. Then she woke up and found that she had changed. She was afraid that her family would be sad, so she dressed up and returned to school.

I don't really like this kind of book where the main character is weak, suffers hardships, and is bullied. After reading it, I feel that there is basically nothing in the introduction. I just watch the protagonist working hard to make money to raise sister Mi Chong, earning energy points, raising Mi Chong Qiuqiu, being tricked into prison, being plotted against, enduring it without saying a word, and then playing dress-up with the girl. Not to mention that the author's writing is not good, I personally don't like it, so there is no point in posting this. I just saw the part where the protagonist was in prison, and I felt a little aggrieved and wanted to vent.