Online Game: I Am in the Tang Dynasty Wushuang

I feel like this book resonates so much with me. I used to be number one in the guild, and he was around. He never refused my invitation. When I asked who would come to the guild, there was a lot of people asking for help, because I knew he was definitely there, otherwise I would just drag the big gods. I looked at him, and I felt a little inferior. He was leaving, and I persuaded him to come back. But in the end the guild was defeated, and we retreated together before the defeat (we once went back in the dead of night). Later, I heard that they merged the servers and became the tenth guild. Although I stopped playing, my heart was still full...

To be honest, I have read a lot of novels and a lot of online games. Maybe it's because I have been reading them in the third person for a long time. Now when I see 'I', I feel a little unnatural. Secondly, the personality of the heroine in this novel is not particularly distinctive, and sometimes she even feels a little disgusted with the heroine. The world does not revolve around you. From the perspective of a bystander, the heroine's behavior is inappropriate in many ways. This article is not completely detailed, and many important plot points are only briefly mentioned, which makes people a little confused, so I only read the first few dozen chapters and gave up. As mentioned before, the characterization is not good enough. Even now, I still don't know what many people's personalities are like. What their original personalities were like and why they changed. This is also an extremely important point in writing novels. Some people may say that I should just write it myself if I have the ability. Yes, although I have not written a novel, I have also published some short articles in magazines. I think everyone should have the right to express their own opinions, right? The above is just a personal opinion.

Once upon a time, in order to make him the biggest boob in the district, Sanjing went to buy materials for his horse for two years in the middle of the night. When we divorced, he said he would pay me back. I didn't even know how much he owed me. Sometimes I think about it, I was so shameless by him. Can the price of materials two years ago be comparable? He said he should pay me off, so he probably had to clear his account. Then a few years later, one day he suddenly wanted to play the old game, and went to check it out. He was still there, and there was a couple who had been together for three lifetimes. I remember that he and I were just a few days away from getting that title. I wasn't upset, I wasn't particularly uncomfortable, I was just angry. We were divorced at that time. At that time, I couldn't quite remember the reason. After all, it had been more than 6 years, and my memory was a bit lacking. It seemed that one day suddenly, he said he wanted a divorce, and I agreed. He didn't say a word, and he didn't explain it. Then I quit the game until now, and I don't even remember my account number. The pain at that time is still very clear.

After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to rewrite Datang Wushuang! (Current number: Fan Xiaoqi) Although I know that it is an unpopular novel, and I also know that I will probably rush into it again, but I really want to seriously complete an online game novel to make up for the regret that the previous "Online Game: I am in the Datang Wushuang" was not finished. This is my wish, no matter how bad the data is, I still want to fulfill this wish! The book has been written (the tentative title is "The Bloody Nature of the Unparalleled Tang Dynasty"), but I haven't officially started writing it yet. Starting tomorrow, I will update the current book, and then take the time to write the outline and outline. I hope that by the time my current book is finished, the outline of this online game novel will be fully written.

Is the author writing? Writing this series of novels in the first person is really like writing an essay

When I saw the ending written by the author, I said that I wanted to write more, but because the reviews of the book were so bad. I don't know if this is your own story, but the process of the game is too trivial. I skipped to the ending halfway through, because already halfway through, the heroine and the hero are still tepid. Even if they don't know each other in real life, they shouldn't be ordinary friends in the game. It will inevitably make readers lose confidence in reading. Jumping directly to the ending only contains two sentences. However, I got married in the game, got married in real life, and then disappeared. I finally understand what the comments mean about being boring at first, and I also understand why people who have played the game passionately can resonate with it, because this article is just about the game. I have watched 50% of it, and I have never seen the heroine go to work. Apart from sleeping, I have only seen her twice as a real friend. It is so unrealistic!

Why can't I search the author's QQ? [Crying]

I like this book very much and have read it many times, but I never get tired of it. I also like to play online games. I think it's amazing that the author can write online games like this. I also hope that the author can write more online games. I will definitely support it~

Is the ending too hasty? -_-||

So far, this is the only online game novel that I have read completely and carefully. It reminds me of the bloody days when I played games, and the days when I cried or laughed because of games.