
Like a Shadow, Who Can Do It?
by Free Phoenix
About This Novel
Who will deal with this unicorn? Jiang asked, leave it to you. Who likes this handsome man? Qiuling, is it to your liking? Just think of it as your birthday present. Also, this stone monster is too ugly. Wangying, can you use your medical skills to give him a facelift? Who is that? Why have you been hiding behind my back to help me? Those who have the guts to stand up, those who don't have the guts to stay away from me...
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Official(7)Scraped 1mo ago
Who among you likes Zhao Liying?
Why did you write so many chapters but not many book reviews?
Not bad! ! ! !
By the way, you will still use declarative sentences when writing a book. A little bit of tone and psychological feeling, and funny sentences are necessary. Advice from a senior book fan
Author, it is actually not easy for you to insist on talking so much, but you seem to have never noticed your shortcoming, which is that you rarely divide your books into small paragraphs. Each paragraph is very, very, very large, and often contains some figures and rhetoric. But writing a novel is not writing a composition. Compositions need to be literary. That is because people who read compositions will always Read each word carefully, but there are too many words in the novel. Most people just read and cut out some key points. Although you will not spend more than five or ten seconds on one page, the book you wrote will only make people feel tired. If you change this, it will be a really good book, and the important thing is that you are persistent.
It's not easy after so many changes
Didn't read the book but saw no book reviews? I know it's not easy being an author, so keep working hard!
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Official(7)Scraped 1mo ago
Who among you likes Zhao Liying?
Why did you write so many chapters but not many book reviews?
Not bad! ! ! !
By the way, you will still use declarative sentences when writing a book. A little bit of tone and psychological feeling, and funny sentences are necessary. Advice from a senior book fan
Author, it is actually not easy for you to insist on talking so much, but you seem to have never noticed your shortcoming, which is that you rarely divide your books into small paragraphs. Each paragraph is very, very, very large, and often contains some figures and rhetoric. But writing a novel is not writing a composition. Compositions need to be literary. That is because people who read compositions will always Read each word carefully, but there are too many words in the novel. Most people just read and cut out some key points. Although you will not spend more than five or ten seconds on one page, the book you wrote will only make people feel tired. If you change this, it will be a really good book, and the important thing is that you are persistent.
It's not easy after so many changes
Didn't read the book but saw no book reviews? I know it's not easy being an author, so keep working hard!
