Douluo: Subvert the Plot, I Am the Villain

Subvert the plot, you have a plot after all! We've written almost 50 chapters, and Tang San Xiaowu hasn't appeared at all. If there is a protagonist in the original work, it's called a plot. If there isn't even a protagonist, what's the subversion of the plot? There are still more than 20 chapters before the first soul ring is absorbed. In the original novel, Tang San had just awakened and was taken by Yu Xiaogang to hunt for soul rings when he went to school. He didn't even go to class, so you went to school to make friends? Yu Xiaogang took Tang San to hunt for soul rings. Although it was of no use, at least he went there and did not waste his innate cultivation talent with full soul power. You have been fooling for more than 20 chapters. The system is of little use except for giving exercises and martial arts, and it is of no use after practicing. The cultivation of exercises should be faster than others! As a result, the soul ring absorbed was still at level 15. The thousand-year soul ring was absorbed to increase it to at least 5 levels, as well as the skills, whale glue, and physical training. However, after absorbing the soul ring, there was nothing. Not to mention the level-up, there was also a plot. In the original work, both Qian Renxue and Ning Fengzhi wanted to win over Tang San, but in your case, they had to give it away after they had conquered. The protagonist also followed Qian Renxue first, and then worshiped Chen Xin as his teacher. Isn't this a traitor?

It's not good, it's really not good. The system first asked her to join Qian Renxue's camp, acting like a scared child, and then asked her to do those middle school things. She was kind and filial before joining, but she felt a little lawless after joining. And those two maids, can you become Qian Renxue's maids, can you surrender with just a beating? How is it possible for them not to tell Qian Renxue? The tasks issued by the system are all mandatory. Although it is said to be a choice, the choice does not fit the personality and is inconsistent.

Um... This book, I can only say that this is the first first-person book since I read Douluo fanfic. I don't know if it was written by Ai, but anyway, it always says: How am I... Sometimes it's the protagonist's name, and sometimes it's the word "I".

Marksmanship can come at any time and can be chosen. There is no need to let yourself walk into a trap just for a marksmanship. The woman in Qibao Glazed made the protagonist a younger brother for Ning Rongrong, and she did whatever she wanted. She is just disgusting. If you really set it up like this now, aren't you just disgusting?

Naturally, very good quality Douluo fan

Finally, the author rewards exercises in the early stage, and they are three types of exercises: Jing, Qi, Shen, etc., So there are no shortcomings. Unlike others, the rewards are small in the early stage, but there are a lot of rewards in the later and mid-term. It's better to make the exercises more practical. You need to give him some boxing techniques, as well as poisons and medicines. You can use any treasures you encounter by yourself. You don't have to look for them. You can cure the poison yourself.

It's okay, but the plot is too slow. If I keep writing like this, I guess I won't be able to finish Chapter 200. The protagonist can also push it now. Tang San Xiaowu has come out. I suggest Zhu Zhuqing also accept it.

The plot connection is super natural, a rare good book among Douluo fans! ! ! However, I still want to ask the author, will the villain setting in the title appear in the text later or is it just an indication of being anti-Tang San?

Like a fool, he awakens an innate soul with full soul power and doesn't even realize that he is invincible and sheds tears.

It looks good, but I don't know where the protagonist will stand in the future.