
The Legend of Lin Wan in the Harem
About This Novel
Welcome to watch the new book "Palace Fight: The Queen Mother System". Once you are reborn and enter the palace again, the situation in the harem is strange, intrigues and intrigues, plotting against each other, every step is shocking, and you can watch the heroine kill everyone. ............. This article is purely a palace fight...... This author has completed two completed books: "Rebirth and Ascension to Immortality Step by Step" and "Re-cultivating the Immortal Way". The quality is guaranteed, so you are welcome to read it. ............. After it is put on the shelves, thirty monthly tickets will add one update, one piece of Heshi Bi will add one update, and so on.
Official Sources
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(173)Scraped 1mo ago
This is obviously a plagiarism from The Legend of Zhen Huan! ! !
This promotion seems like a joke
I feel that the names of many supporting characters in the article are too vulgar Secondly, the surname Lin appears many times in the article. Many scenes are similar to The Legend of Zhen Huan in the Harem Including the heroine's sister and the whereabouts of many supporting characters in the article, the whereabouts are inaccurately explained.
Most of the sentences have "的" at the end. Doesn't it look awkward?
The concept is average, but the writing level needs to be improved. I hope that if the author wants to write about the draft in the future, it is best not to omit what happened in the few years of the draft, because that will make the work tasteless and the author lazy. If you add something unexpected in the days leading up to the draft, the reader will become more curious about the book and want to read it. Then, briefly point out a few suggestions. 1. The author's level is not, well, very high. Hope it can be improved 2. Adjectives, that is, the vocabulary is not very wide. There are only a few adjectives to write over and over again, which will seem very boring. 3. Find more beautiful poems from the ancients to quote, and use more adjectives describing ancient styles. I won't order so much from now on. I hope the author can work harder. The imagination is good, but there is no better store or writing style to summarize it better. I don't mean to find fault by saying so much. I don't mean to humiliate the author. I am just commenting on this book based on my experience in reading novels.
Too many scenes are the same as The Legend of Zhen Huan!
Too many scenes are the same as The Legend of Zhen Huan!
Well enough
This emperor is such a waste
In the end, it's a bit like The Legend of Zhen Huan
I don't understand why the author always uses the word "的" in the article, and some of the sentences are not coherent at all. There is also a sentence "Shu Dao Ni Hou Powder" which means I don't understand. I have only heard of "Shu Dao Ni Hou Powder".
How should I put it? I think it's okay. There are typos and the language needs to be improved.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(173)Scraped 1mo ago
This is obviously a plagiarism from The Legend of Zhen Huan! ! !
This promotion seems like a joke
I feel that the names of many supporting characters in the article are too vulgar Secondly, the surname Lin appears many times in the article. Many scenes are similar to The Legend of Zhen Huan in the Harem Including the heroine's sister and the whereabouts of many supporting characters in the article, the whereabouts are inaccurately explained.
Most of the sentences have "的" at the end. Doesn't it look awkward?
The concept is average, but the writing level needs to be improved. I hope that if the author wants to write about the draft in the future, it is best not to omit what happened in the few years of the draft, because that will make the work tasteless and the author lazy. If you add something unexpected in the days leading up to the draft, the reader will become more curious about the book and want to read it. Then, briefly point out a few suggestions. 1. The author's level is not, well, very high. Hope it can be improved 2. Adjectives, that is, the vocabulary is not very wide. There are only a few adjectives to write over and over again, which will seem very boring. 3. Find more beautiful poems from the ancients to quote, and use more adjectives describing ancient styles. I won't order so much from now on. I hope the author can work harder. The imagination is good, but there is no better store or writing style to summarize it better. I don't mean to find fault by saying so much. I don't mean to humiliate the author. I am just commenting on this book based on my experience in reading novels.
Too many scenes are the same as The Legend of Zhen Huan!
Too many scenes are the same as The Legend of Zhen Huan!
Well enough
This emperor is such a waste
In the end, it's a bit like The Legend of Zhen Huan
I don't understand why the author always uses the word "的" in the article, and some of the sentences are not coherent at all. There is also a sentence "Shu Dao Ni Hou Powder" which means I don't understand. I have only heard of "Shu Dao Ni Hou Powder".
How should I put it? I think it's okay. There are typos and the language needs to be improved.













