I Ran Away after My Luck Was Taken Away by a Time-traveling Man
by Jie Ze
About This Novel
I am the male protagonist of the cultivator who was deprived of his luck. The system told me that as long as I cut off my love, I can ascend to the upper world, take back the luck of the traveler, and escape from the mortal world. So I took back the amulet I gave to my senior sister from the huge monster's mouth, and killed the first thread of love. She said that I did many evil things and could not be as gentle and sensible as my junior brother. I dug out my own eyes, erased the marks of Taoist couple between me and my fiancée, and cut off the second strand of love. She hugged her little junior brother, disgusted that I was selfish and vicious, and stained his eyes. I dug out my exquisite heart with seven orifices, returned Master's nurturing love to him, and cut off the third strand of love. She pretended to sigh, saying that I was stubborn and could not tolerate my little junior brother. When the body dies and the soul dies, I ascend to God and the body dies. Then the three people who had always abandoned me like worn-out shoes suddenly went crazy...
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Official(7)Scraped 6d ago
Short articles about death escape and mainstream abuse are popular recently, but to be honest, short articles are different from long online articles, and they are even more difficult to write. If you want to write well and write happily, it especially tests the author's writing skills. Which chapter sets the stage, which chapter foreshadows, which chapter explains the causes and consequences, which chapter the female partner/male partner regrets, and which chapter the protagonist gives cool points, all matter. For example, this short article, which is less than 10,000 words long, is devoted to describing the abuse of the male protagonist and the relationship between the female protagonist and her male counterpart. The whole article is depressing. I thought it would focus on describing the heroine's regrets and encounters with the villain later on, but it ended up being brushed off. All the fun points are that the ending of the female protagonist after the male protagonist's ascension and the ending of the villain are not at all, so I would like to comment in one word, history!
History history history history history history history history history
History history history history history history history history history
History within history, history within history, history within history, history within history, history within history
The writing is okay, but the plot holes and poisonous points are obvious
Since they were influenced by luck and fell in love with their junior brother, was it also because of your luck that they fell in love with you in the first place? What I saw was just three women who fell in love with two people who didn't love them because of luck. You can't help but lose them because of luck, and then walked away. It's really disgusting to see them regret it.
What a piece of shit. . . . . . . . . A piece of shit, a piece of shit, a piece of shit
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Official(7)Scraped 6d ago
Short articles about death escape and mainstream abuse are popular recently, but to be honest, short articles are different from long online articles, and they are even more difficult to write. If you want to write well and write happily, it especially tests the author's writing skills. Which chapter sets the stage, which chapter foreshadows, which chapter explains the causes and consequences, which chapter the female partner/male partner regrets, and which chapter the protagonist gives cool points, all matter. For example, this short article, which is less than 10,000 words long, is devoted to describing the abuse of the male protagonist and the relationship between the female protagonist and her male counterpart. The whole article is depressing. I thought it would focus on describing the heroine's regrets and encounters with the villain later on, but it ended up being brushed off. All the fun points are that the ending of the female protagonist after the male protagonist's ascension and the ending of the villain are not at all, so I would like to comment in one word, history!
History history history history history history history history history
History history history history history history history history history
History within history, history within history, history within history, history within history, history within history
The writing is okay, but the plot holes and poisonous points are obvious
Since they were influenced by luck and fell in love with their junior brother, was it also because of your luck that they fell in love with you in the first place? What I saw was just three women who fell in love with two people who didn't love them because of luck. You can't help but lose them because of luck, and then walked away. It's really disgusting to see them regret it.
What a piece of shit. . . . . . . . . A piece of shit, a piece of shit, a piece of shit
