The Road to Immortality by the Female Supporting Teacher Uncle

You can't read this article with your brain in mind. When I first read it, I thought it was very interesting, but now that I've re-read it, I found a lot of bad points. The author's writing style is pretty good, but it often feels pretentious and forced. Cheap chicken soup is too strong and incompatible with the culture of cultivation. In the cruel world of cultivation. The author wanted to make chicken soup and show the heroine's kindness and original intention, but his skills were insufficient and his expression was wrong. He chose to wrong the heroine and let her be abused and bullied again and again, but the villain was able to get away with it for a long time, and the final punishment was too light. Using this way to show the beautiful qualities of the heroine, I didn't feel good at all. I only felt unfair and aggrieved for the heroine, as well as her virginity and pretentiousness. The heroine is mainly framed by the author in a rigid moral frame to show what a "beautiful woman" is. That's really embarrassing. Women shouldn't be kidnapped by morality. Women can be anything. Of course, I didn't say that women should live like the vicious female protagonist in this book, but that no one should live like a vicious person. But the author's emphasis on "women" made me feel very strange, and it sounded like a woman. The plot is sometimes incomprehensible and far-fetched, and the characters often do things that don't fit their character, just for the sake of the plot. The heroine is besieged by the ancestor of the gods. Is she crazy? Gu Xuanxi, Bailiyan and others did so many things that hurt the heroine, but they were forgiven by the heroine just because they later used secret techniques to "save" the heroine? Later, he gave Gu Xuanxi a hug before ascending? I was confused, this was too holy. If you are so soft-hearted, you deserve to be bullied again and again. I am really sad for his misfortune and angry for his inability to fight. Does this soft-heartedness really make sense? Does it appear that you are of noble character? Leave it to yourself to be impressed. Of course, it may not be that he is soft-hearted, but that he is not intelligent enough to see through and resolve crises well. Did you say you were a famous lady in your previous life? Where is the wisdom of the eldest lady of the aristocratic family? Why doesn't this appear at all in the article? The large number of modal particles "m" at the end of the text and the frequent addition of ellipses "..." Are the reasons why this novel becomes particularly pretentious. Why do you always add "?"? Will it make the character look more advanced? Or do the characters not know other sentence-final modal particles? All in all, the author is too rigidly focused on the "noble qualities" of the heroine, which has the opposite effect. I don't mean to be kind, I just force kindness when you shouldn't be kind. If you use it in the wrong place, then it is not called kindness, it is called the Holy Mother.

I always wanted to see the heroine explode, but in the end, the heroine who cultivated immortality did not dare to kill anyone. Instead, she tried to save people countless times, but she had to be the opposite of her. She also narrowly escaped death countless times because she tried to save people. If she hadn't been the heroine, she would have died countless times. I couldn't bear it. I thought the heroine was too miserable, but it turned out that the heroine did it all by herself. She has lived three lives in vain.

The heroine, the Holy Mother, has been framed, deceived, and wronged. The heroine has been hurt and on the run. In order to be herself, she has to protect even the people who are chasing her. The heroine's special code must be sick. The heroine is said to be cold and cold, but she is bullied to death without breaking out. It's really frustrating.

Huo Fan is a special and uncertain love in Yun Shu's heart, and Yun Shu is the love of his life in Huo Fan's heart. (His love is so stubborn and touching that it warms Yun Shu's fire) Gu Xuanxi is a forgiven "friend" in Yun Shu's heart, and Yun Shu cannot be discovered in Gu Xuanxi's heart. . . I like her secretly (his love is too cowardly and too forbearing because Bing is afraid of hurting Yun Shu) In Yun Shu's heart, Baili'ai was just a superior and was being used. In Yun Shu's heart, Baili'ai suddenly realized that he loved her deeply. (His love was late but when he discovered it, he had already pushed people away) Wei Hanzhang is a familiar passer-by in Yun Shu's heart, and Yun Shu is a being that he likes but cannot touch in Wei Hanzhang's heart. (He liked Yun Shu, but he only liked him. In the end, he chose power, money, and fame) In a certain sense, except for Huo Fan, who did not owe Yun Shu any harm, everyone else is guilty. They all owe Yun Shu life, dignity, and a kind and passionate heart that loves people. . . [Feiyun and Mo Yu fell in love with the right person at the wrong time] [But if you miss it, you will eventually miss it] [Missed: If you are wrong, you have passed. . .

It makes me want to kill the heroine for Bai Lianhua. First of all, when you are not strong enough, don't be so high-profile, wearing red clothes and that face for fear that others will not know you. Secondly, if you are not good at fighting but have a strong self-esteem, you can destroy the golden elixir at will without ensuring your own safety. You also rely on a scumbag partner for your wealth and life, thinking that you have a big face and a diseased brain. There is also the thought of a heroine, especially Mary Sue. When someone kills her, she still controls herself and doesn't kill her at the risk of her own death. And then she has to die and a scumbag partner comes to save her. Damn it. It's the same for the first time she kills someone. After killing her, she still behaves like a murderer. How can modern people kill people with their thoughts? And then everyone is not pleasing to the eye. If she has a brain disease, she is just like a green tea bitch. If the author hadn't made the original heroine look too pale, the current heroine would be really disgusting. The most important thing is that the original heroine clearly knew what kind of body the new heroine had, and directly told everyone through means that other people could not tolerate her. She also designed the person she liked to be paired with a scumbag and a girl with that kind of body. What the hell, she was sick. 😔😔

In the end, who did Yun Shu end up with?

It's quite tragic. Also, the heroine feels a little out of tune with the world of cultivation, but she doesn't want to kill anyone? In fairy tales, I still like heroines who are decisive in killing and daring to love and hate. The heroine was not cautious enough from the beginning and did not become stronger earlier. If it were not for the Fire Phoenix inheritance, the heroine would not have been able to escape the fate in the book. What kind of kindness is needed in the world of cultivating immortals? I still like the kind of behavior that I would rather betray the world than let the world betray me.

How should I put it, I only gave up after reading half of it. It's not that the author's writing is not good. On the contrary, the text of this article is very delicate, and the characters and plot are also very good. However, this kind of article is not suitable for me. Among the chapters I have read, I only like four people, Huo Fan, Xuan Qi, Huo Feng, and Chen Mu, because in my opinion they are the most innocent among the chapters I have read. Except for them, everyone including the heroine is not to my taste. Although almost all of them are minor players. Some people think that the character of the heroine is cold and unrestrained, but in my opinion, she is not truly carefree. She takes the fact that she is a supporting actress too seriously, and the book she reads about her fate too seriously. I wanted to stay away but I still got stuck in it. Whether it was about Bai Liyan's mental state or the original heroine's uneasiness when she auctioned off the little tiger at the auction. How to put it this way, this book is good, but too heavy for an optimist like me. I wish the author a great success. I went to read other articles. Give you a little hair. 🌹

Who is the male protagonist? If it were Lu Yan, I wouldn't watch it

I was also drunk. I knew clearly that the heroine was hostile to her, and I also knew where the heroine got the opportunity. Why didn't I destroy it? He is so kind every time, but he is bullied by the heroine every time!