The Journey to Immortality is Long
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Once she woke up from her dream, Yao Ruoqing traveled through time and became an orphan in another world. If you want to go through time, go through it, and make peace with it as you come. It's just that this time travel... Is a bit tricky. As soon as she opened her eyes, she saw her mother hanging. Before she could digest it all, her adoptive father was about to strangle her to death... In the eighth year after Yao Ruoqing was lucky enough to survive, he formed a contract with the artifact "Colored Pearl" by chance, and got acquainted with the divine light in the colored pearl. Only then did she realize that this was actually a magical world where one could cultivate immortality! The Jingguang who told her all this was a five-year-old boy. He always emphasized that he was a god who had lived for tens of thousands of years, but Yao Ruoqing was deeply suspicious. "Yao Ruoqing! Here's my grilled fish!" Yao Ruoqing took out the kitchen utensils from the storage bag with a wooden face, "Wait a moment, it will be ready soon." On the road of cultivating immortality, only by being firm in seeking the truth and not fearing hardships and obstacles can we go a long way. "What is Tao?" "Whatever the heart desires is the Tao." Note: There is no male protagonist in this article
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Some small discussions about the article
How should I put it? The author marked it as no cp. When I saw it, it was an orthodox novel about immortality with a heroine without a male protagonist. I definitely can't miss it! Then I read this book. But it actually seems a little disappointing. First of all, the description of the progress of the story in the article is okay. You can do many things during the Qi refining period. The author has done a great job in this. The heroine's life during the Qi refining period is rich and colorful. However, I remember the author wrote that the description of the fighting process takes a longer time. I don't think readers will mind this. But the fighting process of the heroine is too long, and the sense of rhythm is average. When it is time to be nervous, there are a lot of psychological descriptions or chats with Jingguang, such as the piece of obsidian, the critical moment, it is in the belly of the monster, find a way to kill the monster quickly, and get out quickly! He was still dilly-dallying, saying he should hurry up when taking the stone, but he got angry and refused to take it. He quarreled with Jingguang first. And having said that, let's talk about the heroine's character. How should I put it? It feels a bit like a virgin. She got the obsidian and gave it to others first. It was neither a relative nor a reason. I thought at the time that the heroine fell in love with Li Yu, and then Li Xiang. I didn't describe at all why the heroine likes Li Xiang. Is it a lack of love? Or why? Is it really because Li Xiangduo held the heroine's hand in the crowd? In the later stage, Uncle Fang wanted to kill her, and then she cared about people's health and their loved ones. She really had a bit of Bailian flavor. Also, when the heroine kills the enemy, she talks in various ways. We hope that the fighting process will be intense, rather than chatting while fighting. So until now, I still don't understand the heroine's character, and I can't see the transformation process of her character. The heroine has the talent, hard work, and opportunity. I hope her character will be better. After all, the heroine was an orphan in her previous life, and her current life experience is not that good. Next, let's talk about the heroine's character relationship. After watching it for a long time, I feel like I don't know who the heroine is good with? First of all, let's talk about Li Yu. At that time, I thought this person was inexplicable. If there was such a person around me, I would think he was a bit crazy, and the process of the heroine becoming friends with him was also inexplicable. Then there is Li Xiang, these two people are really classic and have flaws. The subtle relationship between the heroine and her, such as the mixed feeling of jealousy and love, is not shown, and I don't know. What is the role of Li Xiang in the later stages of Taoism (the friendship that remains after all the thoughts? Or is it a stepping stone for the heroine's spiritual growth?) There is also the relationship between Uncle Fang, the round-faced guy (I suddenly can't remember his name), Qi'an, and even Guan Ziqi and the heroine. I am in a subtle state where I seem to know what the author wants to express and why he treats the heroine inexplicably. But on the contrary, when shaping the relationship between the heroine and non-human creatures, the author seems to be more able to grasp the degree. From the beginning with the wind-hungry bird to the later cage demon, and of course Jingguang, a series of interactions are humorous, interesting, and full of warmth. This is the place where I most want to write a review but don't bother to write a review. I just want to read the book. It is very attractive to me. Finally, the author's naming of various locations, plants, and monsters is really heart-wrenching (this is a compliment). And there are also their interpretations, which made me feel immediately: Oh, so this place looks like this! It turns out that's why it's called this! This is the habit of this plant, and this is its function! This monster turns out to have such hobbies! It's eye-opening sometimes! I don't know how the author came up with it, but it really struck a chord with me. Although I said a lot of nonsense, I can't write it myself, I can only express my feelings! In short, I hope the author will continue to write well! I hope my writing skills will be better in the future! I hope Qingqing will grow up quickly (specifically referring to her character here), and her future path to immortality will be even more exciting!
The heroine is silly and sweet
After reading dozens of chapters... I really don't like the heroine's character. She is silly and sweet. She only bickers and quarrels with the spirit spirit. She is a heroine and lacks love for other people. She is a heroine. Although she was an orphan in her previous life and now has no sense of defense in the world of immortality. If there is no weapon spirit, the grass on the grave will grow taller. Why did she choose such a stupid heroine? After a few years, the child is really mentally retarded? Is this a fairy tale? Is the heroine of Xiuxianwen that stupid? The fight is still going on, there is no point except arguing with yourself, if you don't want to become stronger, why are you cultivating immortality, why not just go back to being a village girl... While relying on the weapon spirit, you turn a deaf ear to his words... It makes you look like you are awesome, and you still have to rely on the weapon spirit to get into trouble.
Just because the author updates too slowly, the comment section feels so deserted.
The heroine, the Holy Mother
Is it okay to make the heroine so stupid? Just give me any good things you ask for, this is like going to every house! Five stars are given based on face.
Well enough
The novel can be written! It's just that the heroine is always giving in! I can't always beat this one! Can't beat that one! It's very frustrating to watch! Other times it's ok! The heroine just needs to be cowardly once or twice! Always so cowardly! It feels very obscene!
Where did you get such a high rating?
With the heroine's temperament, why should she stop being a fairy? She can just go home and plant some.
It was always intermittent in the front
It's okay, but the article is always intermittent and some connections are blocked.
The heroine has a strange mind... The end is determined
It's hard to watch and unattractive.
It's boring and has no desire to watch.
There are a lot of things I want to complain about at the beginning, but I think the author has made a lot of improvements later on. The more I read later, the better it gets.
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Official(23)Scraped 3d ago
Some small discussions about the article
How should I put it? The author marked it as no cp. When I saw it, it was an orthodox novel about immortality with a heroine without a male protagonist. I definitely can't miss it! Then I read this book. But it actually seems a little disappointing. First of all, the description of the progress of the story in the article is okay. You can do many things during the Qi refining period. The author has done a great job in this. The heroine's life during the Qi refining period is rich and colorful. However, I remember the author wrote that the description of the fighting process takes a longer time. I don't think readers will mind this. But the fighting process of the heroine is too long, and the sense of rhythm is average. When it is time to be nervous, there are a lot of psychological descriptions or chats with Jingguang, such as the piece of obsidian, the critical moment, it is in the belly of the monster, find a way to kill the monster quickly, and get out quickly! He was still dilly-dallying, saying he should hurry up when taking the stone, but he got angry and refused to take it. He quarreled with Jingguang first. And having said that, let's talk about the heroine's character. How should I put it? It feels a bit like a virgin. She got the obsidian and gave it to others first. It was neither a relative nor a reason. I thought at the time that the heroine fell in love with Li Yu, and then Li Xiang. I didn't describe at all why the heroine likes Li Xiang. Is it a lack of love? Or why? Is it really because Li Xiangduo held the heroine's hand in the crowd? In the later stage, Uncle Fang wanted to kill her, and then she cared about people's health and their loved ones. She really had a bit of Bailian flavor. Also, when the heroine kills the enemy, she talks in various ways. We hope that the fighting process will be intense, rather than chatting while fighting. So until now, I still don't understand the heroine's character, and I can't see the transformation process of her character. The heroine has the talent, hard work, and opportunity. I hope her character will be better. After all, the heroine was an orphan in her previous life, and her current life experience is not that good. Next, let's talk about the heroine's character relationship. After watching it for a long time, I feel like I don't know who the heroine is good with? First of all, let's talk about Li Yu. At that time, I thought this person was inexplicable. If there was such a person around me, I would think he was a bit crazy, and the process of the heroine becoming friends with him was also inexplicable. Then there is Li Xiang, these two people are really classic and have flaws. The subtle relationship between the heroine and her, such as the mixed feeling of jealousy and love, is not shown, and I don't know. What is the role of Li Xiang in the later stages of Taoism (the friendship that remains after all the thoughts? Or is it a stepping stone for the heroine's spiritual growth?) There is also the relationship between Uncle Fang, the round-faced guy (I suddenly can't remember his name), Qi'an, and even Guan Ziqi and the heroine. I am in a subtle state where I seem to know what the author wants to express and why he treats the heroine inexplicably. But on the contrary, when shaping the relationship between the heroine and non-human creatures, the author seems to be more able to grasp the degree. From the beginning with the wind-hungry bird to the later cage demon, and of course Jingguang, a series of interactions are humorous, interesting, and full of warmth. This is the place where I most want to write a review but don't bother to write a review. I just want to read the book. It is very attractive to me. Finally, the author's naming of various locations, plants, and monsters is really heart-wrenching (this is a compliment). And there are also their interpretations, which made me feel immediately: Oh, so this place looks like this! It turns out that's why it's called this! This is the habit of this plant, and this is its function! This monster turns out to have such hobbies! It's eye-opening sometimes! I don't know how the author came up with it, but it really struck a chord with me. Although I said a lot of nonsense, I can't write it myself, I can only express my feelings! In short, I hope the author will continue to write well! I hope my writing skills will be better in the future! I hope Qingqing will grow up quickly (specifically referring to her character here), and her future path to immortality will be even more exciting!
The heroine is silly and sweet
After reading dozens of chapters... I really don't like the heroine's character. She is silly and sweet. She only bickers and quarrels with the spirit spirit. She is a heroine and lacks love for other people. She is a heroine. Although she was an orphan in her previous life and now has no sense of defense in the world of immortality. If there is no weapon spirit, the grass on the grave will grow taller. Why did she choose such a stupid heroine? After a few years, the child is really mentally retarded? Is this a fairy tale? Is the heroine of Xiuxianwen that stupid? The fight is still going on, there is no point except arguing with yourself, if you don't want to become stronger, why are you cultivating immortality, why not just go back to being a village girl... While relying on the weapon spirit, you turn a deaf ear to his words... It makes you look like you are awesome, and you still have to rely on the weapon spirit to get into trouble.
Just because the author updates too slowly, the comment section feels so deserted.
The heroine, the Holy Mother
Is it okay to make the heroine so stupid? Just give me any good things you ask for, this is like going to every house! Five stars are given based on face.
Well enough
The novel can be written! It's just that the heroine is always giving in! I can't always beat this one! Can't beat that one! It's very frustrating to watch! Other times it's ok! The heroine just needs to be cowardly once or twice! Always so cowardly! It feels very obscene!
Where did you get such a high rating?
With the heroine's temperament, why should she stop being a fairy? She can just go home and plant some.
It was always intermittent in the front
It's okay, but the article is always intermittent and some connections are blocked.
The heroine has a strange mind... The end is determined
It's hard to watch and unattractive.
It's boring and has no desire to watch.
There are a lot of things I want to complain about at the beginning, but I think the author has made a lot of improvements later on. The more I read later, the better it gets.
